This is a preview of the new story naruto: the eco demon
Naruto was coming back from Orochimaru after rescuing sasuke he killed the snake sannin during the fight sasuke was knocked out by kabuto that was when naruto when in to four tails (you know what happens next) all that was left was rubble when naruto reached the gates he saw saukra waiting for him they had been dating since after sasuke left "naruto-kun are you alright?" she said "nothing that you can't fix my hime" he replied happily
(Three weeks later)
Naruto was heading to the hospital to see sasuke and to give saukra a engagement ring he was saving up for but when naruto reached sasuke's room he saw something he should not have see saukra was on the bed completely nude while sasuke was on top of her with no pants naruto could not believe it the woman he was going to ask to marry was fucking his best friend his brother naruto tough the ring to the ground shattering on impact he ran as fast as he could any where he could hind he past hinita and kiba (there on a date) they saw naruto ran by as fast as he could with tears coming down his face he looked like he was heading to the forest of death they know they had to cut their date short and report this to the hokage and they disappear in a whirl of leaves
(Hokages office)
Tsunade was pass out on top of her work when hinita and kiba came in "hokage-sama we saw naruto running in to the forest of death" they said at the same time tsunade was going to say he is going to train when they finished "he was crying" that made tsunade jump up it was very rare to hear that naruto was crying so she said "bring my apparition here" after three minutes saukra appeared asking "what is wrong hokage-sama?" "it seem that your boyfriend was seen running towed the forest of death crying" she replied saukra looked at her ' why would naruto be crying unless… o no he was sasuke fuck me' "I will go after him" she said tsunade just gave her a nodded and said "if you did anything to hurt him you will be punished" she put anger for the last word and saukra when to find him
(In the forest)
Naruto was up ageist a large tree in the middle of the forest crying 'why why was I so stupid she always sasuke she just used me' "I know she is a
bitch" said the kyuubi as it saw the scene as well " all she did was use you like a puppet on a string you should have killed that ass hole (sasuke)" 'no I couldn't do that even if……" "See you have no reason not to kill him" as naruto countue to talk to the kyuubi he suddenly fell though closed doors in to a large chamber and hit the cabinet then some wired glass with green, black, and white spilled on him naruto then felt as if his body was on fire as the colored oozed its way in to his body and he passed out
(Saukra)
She was in the forest almost all day until she heard a yell she ran to the scene to see that naruto passed out inside she picked him up and brought him to the hospital she later walking to sasuke's room she then saw on the ground broken ring on the inside the ring said saukra will you marry me she couldn't believe it he was going to ask her to marry him she started to cry
(Naruto's room)
Naruto was in a coma for the last two weeks all he was thinking about was how saukra hurt him tsunade was at the door when he woke up she ran in to his room crying "naruto-kun you gave me a nightmares thinking you were not going to come out" "well after saukra fuck sasuke I don't really care about how anyone feels" he said with a dark voice she couldn't believe it not only that saukra break naruto heart but that his voice became darker "after all I have done for her she still want that mother fucker" naruto was getting angered soon naruto heart rate had hit sky high "NARUTO YOU NEED TO CLAM DOWN OR YOU WILL DIE!!" tsunade yelled but naruto was not paying attention soon naruto color had die off he was snow white along whit is hair that became more wild than before his nails became long more longer than in his fox form and were black he gained all black eyes with no pulp and a dark aura swooned around him his body became had more muscle and he then said "KILL SASUKE!!"
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