Demonic Uchiha ch. 4
Okay people here it is chapter four witch was one hell of a chapter to type and think up that was almost once more a month to type up. Hold up I'm going to dubble check *Writer opens several different taps* Well the good news is that I'm once again wrong so it's not the end of the world but it was three months. Shit. Well at least Tayuya is still trapped. *Messenger pops up beside writer*
Messenger: Um...sir I'm to be the courier of bad news but Tayuya has escaped.
Writer:Fuck me, Fuck you, and fuck the fucking fuckeres!
Tayuya: I'll say you fucking fuck shithead
Writer: Oh look its um ah the legendary crystal flute of uh slumber. * Writer pointing behind Tayuya*
Tayuya: Yeah Fucking right Shit stain I ain't falling for it.
Writer: Um sorry about this.
Messenger: For what?
Writer: This. *Writer picks up Messenger and tosses him at Tayuya hitting her square in the face*
Writer: Now while the confusion is happening I'm going to run. See ya later. *Writer takes off running in a random direction*
Silently Naruto, Hinata, Sasuke, and Natsuki had their tails draped over the edge of a nearby dock not overly far from Tazuna's house. Every now and then they would lightly flick their tails enjoying the relaxation time that they had. Naruto was even smiling, lightly, but the group of girls still felt it was at least some form of progressive healing.
"So Naruto are you glad to have your mother back?" Asked Hinata as she gently held her right hand in his left hand with her own smile. Naruto's smile slightly faltered into a small frown before it transformed into a look of concentration.
"Honestly I don't know. I have some sort of feeling of happiness at seeing her but at the same time I'm still worried. While it's true that she helped me whenever she could I still don't know if I can trust her. There have been so many times before this when someone would be nice before they would literally turn around and stab me in the back, but even still there's something inside of me telling me to trust her. For now I'm content." Said Naruto with a smile at the end while the girls only smiled sadly as they only realized that the memory that they witnessed was only one of several thousand.
"I will admit it will be interesting for me to learn how to summon the tiger clan although that does present a problem. I already hold a contract to summon the foxes and I'm not certain if they will allow for me to summon another summoning creature or creatures." Said Naruto as he looked over to Natsuki hoping to hear some form of answer from her.
"Honestly Naruto since I now officially live in the human world you will have to summon the new Kitsune leader and receive their permission. We can worry about that later though so for now just enjoy being able to relax for a day." Said Natsuki as she felt a tug against her tail. Smiling with glee she gently moved her tail and felt the tug once more before it turned into a bite. Not waiting a moment she pulled up only to be disappointed. Hanging on her tail was at best a three-inch sea bass.
Naruto, Hinata, and Sasuke were attempting their best to not burst out laughing at the fact that the former queen of demons was only able to catch a small fry sea bass. Sadly their attempts were in vain as Naruto was the first to break with Hinata and Sasuke following after. Even Natsuki after a short while was able to start laughing at the absurdity of the situation. It luckily didn't take them long to get their laughter under control.
"So Sasuke are you going to attempt to summon the crows?" Asked Hinata as she looked over to Sasuke.
"Yeah I plan on doing so but this is also a reminder for me. My brother, Itachi, found the scroll one day and attempted to summon the birds. I don't exactly what happened but my brother past their test and was give permission to summon them. I still remember how happy my mother was when she heard that even my dad was happy but it was possibly just because it was giving the clan more power. I want to summon them in remembrance of my brother and so I can ask them what type of person my brother really was when he wasn't wearing his mask." Said Sasuke with a small smile as a few tears came to her eyes. Not wishing to see Sasuke cry Naruto gently pulled her to her chest and just sat there hugging her while gently rubbing her back.
After a short while Sasuke stopped crying and released a small purr of happiness as Naruto had yet to stop rubbing her back. Sadly the purr of happiness was turned into a yip of surprise as she yanked her tail out of the seawater and held it in front of her. Hanging their clearly enjoying the taste of her tail was a 1' 2" red hearing. Growling with frustration Sasuke slammed her tail on the dock yet the fish never relented her tail causing her eyes to turn into slits. She then proceeded to slam the fish on one of the docks pilings and the dock itself and even then the damn fish wouldn't let go. Growling in frustration Sasuke then grabbed the fish by its tail before slamming it against the piling and yanking on it. That time it was successfully removed at the minor cost of some of her tails fur. Silently Sasuke glared at the fish having a staring contest with it while Hinata bust out laughing.
"You know Sasuke...hahaha...a fish can't blink...hahaha..." Laughed out Hinata as she held her gut before she yipped in pain and pulled her tail out of the water. Sasuke on the other hand couldn't help but laugh at Hinata who had a 2' 5" angel fish hanging off her own tail. Not wanting to lose any of her own fur Hinata quickly killed the fish by sending a concentrated chakra burst into the fish's heart killing it instantly. Smirking victoriously Hinata couldn't help but smile at knowing that she had bragging material for a short while.
Naruto on the other hand just sighed while shaking his head in a negative fashion as the two kunoichi started a glaring contest. Silently Naruto sat there watching the two as his left eye twitched in annoyance before the annoyance was replaced with shock and pain. Not waiting a moment Naruto pulled his tail out of the water and took notice that he had an adult white shark snacking on his tail. Growling in annoyance Naruto sent a blast of chakra into the shark. Naruto was surprised when the shark didn't die instantly and rather bit down on Naruto's tail harder.
"Get the hell off of me!" Shouted Naruto as he started to kick the shark in the head, which only made it angrier and made it start biting harder on Naruto's tail. Glaring heavily at the shark Naruto quickly raised his tail and threw the shark into the air before punching it onto dry land. With a couple dull thuds the shark landed on dry land and helplessly flopped everywhere as Naruto approached it with slow and evenly spaced steps. It only took Naruto three minutes to get to the shark before he raised his leg into the air and sent a concentrated burst of chakra to his foot extending the blade hidden in the sole of his sandal.
"Die." Was Naruto's simple statement as he brought his foot down crushing the sharks skull while the blade past thru without a problem and struck the sharks brain. Not risking the shark attempting to bit him once more Naruto sent pure wind chakra into the blade imbedded in the shark's skull turning the brain into instant mush.
"Okay we're done here." Said Naruto as he started to drag his catch by its tail back towards the house. The two kunoichi never heard him, as they were still too busy with their glaring contest. Natsuki on the other hand followed Naruto while at the same time slapping Hinata and Sasuke's buts with her tails.
Hinata and Sasuke both released a yip of surprise before they glared at Natsuki. As they glared at Natsuki they couldn't help but gently rub their buts while following after the group. When they reached Tazuna's house they were mildly surprised at the fact that there was no one around other than Kakashi who was fast asleep upstairs. Naruto just shrugged his shoulders before he went to the kitchen with the girls following after. Shortly after there were several different sounds coming from there.
(With Neji, Ten-ten, and Tsunami)
Slowly the group of three walked down the streets of Nami no Kuni. Everywhere they looked there were children wearing clothing that was either too small or too large for them and covered in dirt, holes, and showed how thin they were. Occasionally they would catch an adult or two who were sitting on the ground or against walls with bloodstains behind them or around them. All the buildings were in shambles or completely burned to the ground. As they passed by the houses that were burned down they could clearly see hands sticking out of the rubble blackened from the fires.
"How...how can one man be so cruel?" Asked Ten-ten barely above a whisper before anyone could answer a young boy no older than five maybe six approached Ten-ten and held out his hands. Ten-ten couldn't help it but when she saw this boy she was suddenly reminded of Naruto from when she saw him outside of school just barely surviving.
"Here these are ration bars. That aren't overly good but they should help you against hunger." Said Ten-ten as she pulled out four ration bars and gave them to the little boy. The little boy smiled at her before he took off towards a nearby ally where there were two more children. Silently they watched as the boy gave one to each of his friends and hide the other in his clothes.
"Ten-ten you shouldn't have done that. They will now believe that any traveler will be willing to give them food. Besides fate has already decided that several of these people shall die during our stay." Said Neji with his superiority complex.
"Neji..." Said Ten-ten with a hard tone.
"Yes Ten-ten?" Asked Neji with mild curiosity as he looked at his teammate with cold indifference.
"Shut your damn mouth or may the Kami or Shinigami so help me I stick one of my special weapons up where the sun don't shine." Said Ten-ten with a dangerous tone, which perfectly scared anyone who was going to attempt to steal from them to back off.
"You wouldn't dare do such a thing especially to one who belongs to an up in standing clan such as the Hyuga." Said Neji with a daring tone as he openly glared at Ten-ten.
"What I do know is that if you don't drop your superiority complex I'll be washing your mouth out with soap again." Said Tsunami as she gave the mother of all mother looks, which succeeded in shutting up Neji.
"Now we are here at the store so I don't want to hear anything more from your mouth Mr. Hyuga." Said Tsunami as she glared at Neji who just growled in annoyance before nodding his head positively.
"Good." Said Tsunami as she entered the store with the two young genin following after. When they entered the shop Ten-ten looked around and was over all shocked at the lack of food. At best there were a few good fruits and vegetables but the rest was rotten or already decaying.
"Gato has complete control over everything even down to the very food that we eat. It's gotten so bad that children are forced to beg, adults are having to hunt for food or fish, or in some worst cases move their families." Said Tsunami as she grabbed whatever good produce she could and quickly paid for it. Tsunami then walked out of the store with Neji and Ten-ten following close behind. They were able to luckily get out of town without any confrontations from anyone and quickly made their way back to Tazuna's house.
When they got into the house they were met with the smell of cooking fish. Immediately on guard both Neji and Ten-ten slowly walked towards the kitchen only to have to jump onto the ceiling as Hinata and Sasuke came out holding each a plate of grilled fish. As soon as they set the plates down they once again entered the kitchen.
Silently Neji, Ten-ten, and Tsunami shared a look and quickly decided to enter the kitchen. Out of all the things they were expecting they never expected to see four Naruto clones along with Hinata, Sasuke, and Natsuki each working on a dish. They also had hairnets over their tails so it wouldn't contaminate the food.
Naruto clone number one was of course making ramen. Naruto clone number two was making so sort of pie. Naruto clone number three was busy making rice cakes along with sushi. Naruto clone number four was working on some sort of stir-fry as everyone could clearly hear the juices from whatever was in there cooking. The real Naruto was busy preparing another stir-fry along with herbal tea.
Hinata was making, not overly surprising to Neji, cinnamon rolls and zenzei. What he was shocked about was the fact that she was making one of his favorite food dishes herring soba.
Sasuke was making her favorite dish omusubi with okaka and tomatoes. She was also attempting to create Sesame dumplings along with a few Chinese dishes.
Natsuki on the other hand was creating dango and a few other random dishes.
"You know you could either stand there like a bunch of brainless idiots, you can help us, look for Kushina, or go get your sensei and lee from where we left them before some idiot decides to take their clothing." Said Natsuki as she continued to cook not bothering to spare them a glance for even a second. Right as they were about to argue against that they were stopped.
"GAI-SENSEI WE'VE BEEN ROBBED OF YOUR BEAUTIFUL AND MOST YOUTHFUL GREEN SPANDEX!" Came out shout from further in the forest scaring a few birds into flight.
"QUICK LEE LETS US GO FIND OUR MISSING TEAMMATES AND SEE IF THEY WILL BE WILLING TO PART SOME OF THEIR CLOTHING FOR US TO BORROW!" Shouted a second voice from deep within the forest.
"Never mind." Growled out Natsuki before she took notice of Naruto smiling his traditional pranking smile, which caused everyone to look at him.
"You didn't?" Asked Ten-ten as she looked at Naruto, as did everyone else.
"Didn't do what?" Asked Naruto as he attempted to appear innocent similar to a child caught eating a cookie before dinner.
"Don't fu...I mean mess with us Namikaze. You took Lee and Gai's outfits along with their spares." Said Neji but had to stop himself from using a bad word as Tsunami's punishment was still fresh in his mind and add in the fact that she was standing behind him wielding a frying pan didn't really help. One thought went thru everyone's head and that was, 'Where the hell did she get the frying pan?'
"Now what exactly gives you that idea?" Asked Naruto as he still attempted to play the innocent card.
"Well if your anything like me and from the stories that I've heard from Mikoto you are and you inherited my love for pranking along with my love of ramen." Said Kushina as she appeared right behind Naruto and gently rested her hand on his shoulder.
"Hey boss I've got them." Said another Naruto clone as he appeared before the group holding a pair of green leotards along with two scrolls marked clothes.
"You were saying Naruto-kun?" Asked Hinata as she giggled at his predicament.
"Fine I did take them and I plan on burning them. Can you really blame me though those things are an abomination." Said Naruto as he pointed at the leotards as his clone tossed them on the ground, washed his hands and continued cooking from where the original Naruto left off.
"You know Naruto I remember all the ninja calling your old orange jumpsuit an abomination." Said Sasuke as she teased Naruto.
"Orange is a good color!" Shouted both Naruto and Kushina at the same time while at the same time releasing enough killing intent to scare the surrounding wildlife. Quickly realizing that they said the same thing Naruto and Kushina shared a glance before smiling towards one another.
"For some odd reason I think that we will get along just fine." Said Kushina as she gently rubbed Naruto's head causing Naruto to gain a somewhat relaxed expression.
"I agree." Said Naruto as he was able to shake off his relaxed expression and quickly turned back to the food.
"And thank the gods that you inherited you father's cooking skills and not my own." Said Kushina as she watched Naruto cook with the same attention that his father did whenever he was attempting to learn whatever he could.
"If you don't mind could most of you leave it's already crowded in here and quite honestly I don't want this dinner to be ruined." Said Naruto as Kushina and Tsunami understood they of course had to pull both Neji and Ten-ten out of the kitchen. Shortly after Neji , Ten-ten, and Tsunami left the kitchen Naruto took the hideous green spandex and threw it out the window.
"Kitsune Bi." Said Naruto as he pointed one of his fingers at the spandex. He was soon rewarded with them catching a flame and watched with sadistic glee as they burned until they were only smoldering piles of ash.
"Okay now how much of the food is done?" Asked Naruto as he turned towards his girlfriends.
"All of its done here you can take out these two plates and well follow after." Said Hinata as she handed Naruto two plates one of sushi and the other a mixture of different chinese foods. Naruto then left the room with the other's following after. When he entered the dinning room he set the plates of food down on the table and the girls did the same.
Silent as a shadow Naruto headed into the living room where everyone was seated, other than Kakashi, and he just stood in the doorway waiting until he had everyone's attention. When they were all staring he just looked at them.
"Dinner's ready." Said Naruto as he stepped out of the doorway. Not a moment later they walked passed him. As they passed by Naruto took notice of a young boy just sitting in the living room glaring at him.
The boy was possibly no older than nine, stood at best 3' 2", had black eyes, and had dark brown hair that reached to his neck and was rather unkempt but weather that was natural or because of Gato Naruto couldn't tell. He was wearing a tan shirt, green overalls, and black ninja sandals.
Silently the two of them stared at one another before Naruto activated the second level of the Sharingan and looked at the boy. After a short while he deactivated his Sharingan and walked away back into the dinning room. When he got there he took notice that his mother was shoveling ramen into her mouth just as he did and that Tazuna and his daughter were rather disgusted.
'I may have gotten dad's cooking skills but I got your eating habits apparently.' Thought Naruto as he approached Kushina from behind and just looked over her. Sighing lightly Naruto quickly smacked his mother on the back of the head stopping her from eating. He then watched as Kushina turned to face him with a mouth full before quickly swallowing.
"What was that for?" Asked Kushina as she looked at her son slightly annoyed.
"That was for your eating habits. We're are staying in another's person's home eat properly." Said Naruto as he walked towards his seat and sat down. Not even five seconds after sitting down Hinata and Sasuke were to his left and right while Natsuki stood behind him.
"And if I choose not to?" Asked Kushina as she glared daggers at her son.
"If you don't I won't let you have ramen for two whole years." Said Naruto as he threw out a line hopping that it would work.
"No ramen for two years?" Asked Kushina with a mild stutter and her eyes opened to the size of dinner plates.
"Yep." Said Naruto as he quickly grabbed some of the chinese food and began to lightly chew it before swallowing.
"Fine." Said Kushina as she started to eat at a more dignified pace that but both Tazuna and Tsunami at ease. After a short while the boy that Naruto was looking at entered and walked over to Tsunami and sat on her lap.
"Oh Inari where have you been I haven't seen you since I got back earlier today." Said Tazuna as he looked at Inari who just looked forward dully.
"I've been around Grandpa." Said Inari as he gently hugged his grandfathers arm before he ate a piece of sushi that one of Naruto's clones made. Shortly after his eyes gained a certain light and he started to eat a little of everything causing everyone to smile and continued to eat as well.
(Thirty minutes later)
Slowly everyone released a content sigh as they leaned back into their chairs.
"Who knew that ninja could cook like five star chefs." Said Tsunami as she gently patted her stomach in delight.
"What can we say practice makes perfect." Said Naruto with a smile at the fact everyone enjoyed Hinata's, Sasuke's, Natsuki's, and his cooking.
"Hey Naruto I've got a question for you." Said Ten-ten as she looked at Naruto.
"Okay throw it at me." Said Naruto as he looked at Ten-ten.
"Do you think that you could cook for the whole village?" Asked Ten-ten as Neji just glared at her and Naruto seemed to ponder over it.
"I don't see why not but I'm curious as to why." Said Naruto as he looked at Tsunami expecting for her to answer.
"Well Naruto-san it's because Gato is starving the village. Children who once played with one another are now fighting over clothing, food, and shelter. Everyone is resorted to having to eat out dated food that is rotten from garbage cans. Adults are resorting to thievery or doing any suicidal job. It would also give the people hope that things will get better especially if we get a contract for a ninja village to protect us from future Gato's." Said Tsunami as Inari started to look rather angry about that suggestion.
"I don't understand mother. Why ask them for help if they are just going to die?" Asked Inari as he looked at his mother.
"INARI! Don't say that to our guests." Shouted Tsunami as they ninja all looked somewhat peeved at what Inari said.
"But you know it's true. They'll die just like the rest who have stood up to Gato." Said Inari as he looked at the ninja without a care.
"Then what of your grandfather?" Asked Naruto as he looked at Inari as he slightly stiffened.
"You're claiming that anyone and everyone who has stood up to Gato has died. Your grandfather hasn't if not for us. Does this mean you don't think that we will be able to keep your grandfather safe or are you claiming that your grandfather is going to die?" Asked Naruto with a calm stone cold face as his words cut thru Inari's heart as a sword slices thru flesh.
"Shu-Shut up my grandfather won't die!" Shouted back Inari at an attempt to fix what he said.
"You're contradicting yourself. Are you saying that your grandfather is more important than those who have already died for what they believed in or are you only saying that to..." Started Naruto before a knife flying past his head stopped him. Shortly after the skin split as a faint trail of blood began to fall. It didn't last long before his chakra began to pour out of the wound and began to stitch the wound closed.
On the other side of the table Inari stood watching in mild horror and fascination with his right hand out. His face was contorted in a painful manor of anger and sadness.
"You don't know anything about the pain our village has suffered." Said Inari as he glared at Naruto.
"I don't know what you're going thru?" Asked Naruto as he lowered his head as a slow and dark chuckle come from his mouth. Shortly after he started to laugh in a hysterical manor as he raised his head showing the Mangekyou Sharingan. Naruto's Mangekyou Sharingan was a deep black color with a crimson red slit running thru the center. Gently floating around were nine fire red fireballs on both sides of the slits.
"I don't understand what you and your village are going thru!" shouted Naruto as he released all of his chakra pressure and killing intent as he glared down on Inari who was scared stiff looking into Naruto's eyes.
"Let me ask you this. Have you ever had over three hundred assassination attempts on your life before your first birthday committed by your own village? Have you ever been starved the affection of a family and were forced to watch as other parents told their children that they loved the giving them hugs, kisses, and anything else a parent would do? Have you ever had all the parents tell their children to ignore you and beat you until you were at death's doorstep? Have you ever watched as the only person in a village that cursed your existence and willing to become your friend was killed right in front of you? No. Well guess what this is only the tip. By the time I was two I had four hundred and fifty assassination attempts on my life, over two hundred beatings and was sent to the hospital over one hundred times. By the time I was five I attempted to kill myself but was stopped from the sweet release from that hell. By the time I was ten I had slaughtered so many civilians and ninja alike that I can still smell the blood on my hands. SO don't you ever and I mean ever tell me I don't know what you're going thru cause I can be certain that I've had it twenty times worse." Said Naruto as he vented his anger before he breathed deeply and released his killing intent and pulled in his chakra. Not a moment later Inari was flat on his ass looking at Naruto in absolute fear as Naruto still had his Sharingan activated.
"I'm going to train for the rest of the night. Don't disturb me." said Naruto as he deactivated his Sharingan and left the house. After he left the house an uncomfortable silence fell over the house as they listened to the sound of Naruto walking away from the house.
"Was...was it true?" Asked Tsunami as she looked at the ninja.
"It was. I've seen every single memory he has ever had. Anytime that he was happy about something the so called villagers of his home would take it away from him by any means necessary even if meant murder. For eight years he survived in that hell hole without any family except for those he considered the closest that he would ever receive. Those people were the Hokage who he sees as a grandfather, the Ichiraku's whom he sees as his adopted father and sister, and just recently a chunin ninja named Iruka that is his older brother figure." Said Natsuki as she looked at the table consumed with sorrow.
"But didn't you say that you were his mother?" Said Tazuna as he pointed at Kushina with confusion written upon his face.
"Yes I am..." Started Kushina before she was interrupted.
"How could you be so irresponsible!" Shouted Tsunami as she glared at Kushina. Despite the fact that Tsunami was a civilian she was still able to catch the fact of Kushina becoming depressed and enraged and wisely shut her mouth.
"It wasn't my choice. I was lied to by the council of the leaf village telling me that my son and husband had both died. How would you react if you had everything that you loved stripped from you? You would be distraught and believe everything that you were told. For two months I had no knowledge of my son being alive. It wasn't until I felt his unique chakra which all Uzumaki are famous for and a letter arrived from one of my friends in Konoha that I knew. After that I did everything I could do to make his burden better by assigning my friends eldest son as his guardian along with one of the only surviving members of my husband's genin team to watch over him. You can clearly tell how well that worked out. So don't you dare call me irresponsible if had know he was alive I would have left the village with him and not have returned until he was strong enough to protect himself." Said Kushina as he eyes glowed. Silently they stood there glaring at one another before Tsunami accepted defeat and backed down from Kushina knowing that what Kushina said was true.
"So what are you planning on doing to the council members that lied to you?" Asked Tsunami as she sat. Just as Kushina was planning to responded she was stopped by knocking coming from the front door. Not a moment after the knock every quieted and waited. They didn't have to wait long as another more urgent knock came and Kushina motioned for Tsunami to answer the door.
Calmly Tsunami approached the door and looked back at the ninja with slight fear only to notice that they were all pulling out kunai and shuriken and had them ready to be thrown. Taking a breath to steel herself Tsunami then opened the door to see a face of a man with huge caterpillar like eyebrows wearing absolutely nothing. One thought came straight to her mind.
"PERVERTS!" Shouted Tsunami as she pulled a frying pan out of nowhere and started to attack the labeled pervert. Mentioned pervert was forced to dodge the deadly strikes coming from Tsunami as the group of ninja laughed at the spectacle.
After a short while Kushina approached Tsunami from behind and quickly set her hand on Tsunami's shoulder. Tsunami of course thinking that it was another pervert quickly spined on her heel and slammed the frying pan into Kushina's head officially knocking her out. Tsunami quickly realizing what she had done immediately dropped her frying pan and started to look over the good sized bump that was forming on Kushina's forehead.
"Oh dear oh dear oh dear." Began muttering Tsunami as she attempted to lift Kushina up but was unable to. Quickly she looked around before she nearly jumped out of her skin as the older 'pervert' stood on the other side of Kushina.
"You hit her pretty hard...BUT I HIGHLY DOUBT THAT HER FLAMES OF YOUTH HAVE BEEN DIMINISHED!" Shouted Gai with a smile on his face. It was long before that smile was replaced with a pained expression as he was hit in the head by Tsunami's dropped frying pan by Tsunami before falling to the ground in an ungrateful slump.
"GAI-SENSEI ARE YOU ALRIGHT!" Shouted Lee as he approached his down sensei only to join him a moment later as Tsunami struck him in the head with the same frying pan.
"Here let me help." Said Ten-ten as she grabbed Kushina and took her into the house while a distraught Tsunami followed after. When they got into the house Ten-ten immediately took Kushina up to the second guest bedroom for the girls and shortly after rejoined the group.
"Uh...Ten-ten aren't you going to grab your sensei and teammate?' Asked Hinata as she looked outside to see that they were still knocked unconscious.
"Why bother they both survived a half of their day unconscious after we finished defeating a missing nin. I think that they could survive a night out without any clothing." Said Ten-ten as he left eye began to twitch in annoyance as she along with everyone else began to hear Gai mutter about youthfulness.
'Even in his sleep he talks about youth.' Thought both Neji and Ten-ten at the same time.
"I think I will retire for the night." Said Neji as he stood up and walked upstairs.
"I'm with Neji it has been a long day and I still have yet to polish my weapons." Said Ten-ten as she also stood up and walked upstairs.
"Natsuki do you think Naruto will be alright?" Asked Hinata while Inari just scoffed and went upstairs.
"I honestly don't know only time will tell but for now it's bed time. After all you all still have your training that you need to complete tomorrow." Said Natsuki as both Hinata and Sasuke seemed to wince slightly but still went to bed.
(Somewhere in the forest)
"That ungrateful brat. He has no idea what true suffering is. If anything he has only began to scratch the surface of suffering. He has no idea how close I was to showing him my life and forcing him to live every single day." Said Naruto as he punched trees knocking them over and gouged out large gashes in the sides of the trees.
"Then again it's not his fault. He has no idea what exactly my life has been and I have no idea what his has been. Then there is the fact that if our positions were switched I would have said the same exact thing to a stranger who I assumed lived a good life. Man why does everything have to become so Kami be dammed troublesome." Growled out Naruto as he walked thru the forest with the moon completely absent. Releasing a sigh he gently sat down against a tree and looked towards the stars.
"Tou-san, Mutsumi, What would you do?" Asked Naruto as he continued to stare into the night sky. Even as he sat there he couldn't help but feel that both Mutsumi and his Tou-san where there with him. He was suddenly brought out of his reverence as a he heard a twig crack before he threw a kunai in the direction of the twig cracking. He was shortly rewarded with a successful crunch of the kunai burying itself into something.
"You know...you should be more careful about where you throw those things Naruto-Kun." Said a voice that resonated thru the forest bouncing off of trees and rocks. Even with his advanced hearing he couldn't pin point where the voice came from and quickly reverted to his small kit form. Slowly he began to sniff the ground occasionally pawing it before he would turn this way and that. In the end he released a huff before he took off into the forest never noticing two people watching him from high in the tree tops. Both looking at him with pride along with one of them looking at him with some badly hidden lust.
Silently Naruto walked thru the forest listening to it come alive and relishing the freedom he had. It only took him a while before he was standing at the forest edge in clear view of Tazuna's house. Slowly he took a few sniffs of the air before he started walking towards the house. Every now and then he would slow himself so he would stand still and look around like a normal fox. He was lucky enough to catch sight of a nearby bush rustle with a small amount of movement.
Naruto of course ignored it in favor of a relatively peaceful sleep before he took off running the last few feet to Tazuna's house. When he got there he jumped his way up to the second floor and walked over to the male guest bedroom. When he got to the window he was able to see Kakashi still fast asleep while Gai was bound and gagged in a corner of the room along with Lee.
Snickering at the supposed 'Green Beasts of Konoha' predicament Naruto gently used a small amount of demonic chakra to cut a perfect hole in the glass. Silently the glass popped out and landed on the floor with a dull thud. Slowly he squeezed his way thru the window. It didn't take him long before he was standing in the room. Acting quickly Naruto reverted to his human form and gently set the piece of glass back into the window. Slowly he turned in until he couldn't see any sign of his somewhat forced entry. Nodding at his work Naruto then quickly climbed into his futon and closed his eyes.
(The Next Day)
Groaning in disappointment Naruto slowly opened his eyes before he suddenly shut them from the intense light. Attempting to ignore the sunlight Naruto turned into his pillow. Slowly he rubbed his face into the pillow before he heard something or someone giggling. Once more groaning in disappointment Naruto opened his eyes to see Kakashi lying nearby sound asleep while Gai and Lee were bound, gagged, stuffed into a nearby corner, and had a blanket over them.
Slowly Naruto got up and stretched his body. He was soon rewarded with the sound of his bones popping into position. While he did that he allowed for his eyes to scan over the room once more. The first thing that he noticed was the fact that the room was roughly the size of his old apartment room if not slightly larger. There were very few things spread out in the room. At best there were three futon beds and three blankets.
Looking at this room momentarily made Naruto remember the first apartment that he had.
(Small Flashback)
Screaming and yelling a small boy jumped around with joy as an elderly man just watched with a smile on his face.
The boy looked no older than seven years old, stood around 3' 6", had blond hair that spiked out everywhere, deep cerulean blue eyes that shone with happiness, and three whisker marks three on each cheek. He was wearing a white t-shirt with a red Konoha symbol on the front, dark blue shorts, and blue ninja sandals.
The older man on the other hand looked to be in his early forties, stood 6' 1", had white hair that wrapped around the side of his head leaving the top bald, and a pair of light brown eyes. He was wearing a white rob with a red line going down the center. He was also smoking a pipe while he smiled at the young boy.
"Come along Naruto we need to get going." Said the old man as Naruto looked at him.
"You're taking me to my apartment right jiji?" Asked Naruto as he walked up to the old man. When he got there he slightly tilted his head to the side causing the old man to chuckle.
"Yes I am Naruto." Said the old man as he picked Naruto up before they had disappeared in a swirl of leaves. When the leaves died down they were standing outside a small apartment complex that was in relatively good leaving standards. Grabbing Naruto by his shoulder the older man lead Naruto up to the top floor before he opened the door showing a small apartment room.
The room was a combination of a kitchen and bedroom. Off to the side was a small closet and a hallway which lead to the bathroom. The room was pretty much clean except for some of the dust that was settling. There was very little furniture in the room as well.
"Now Naruto I know that this isn't one of the best apartments..." Started the old man as he looked Naruto in the eyes before he was halted by Naruto hugging him.
"Are you kidding old man this is far better than the other places that I've stayed. Thank you." Said Naruto as he hugged the old man with everything that he could while the old man smiled sadly and hugged him back. After a short while the older man released Naruto and held him out arms length away from him and smiled.
'He looks so much like his father but holds personality traits of his mother. He is going to be a legend some day.' Thought the old man as he released Naruto.
(End Flashback)
"While the apartment sucked, it did its job and gave me a place of shelter." Whispered Naruto as he looked back at where he slept to see Natsuki sleeping there naked.
'Why doesn't that surprise me.' Thought Naruto as his eyebrow twitched as did his left ear. Muttering curses under his breath Naruto quickly threw a spare blanket over her form before he left but not before grabbing Kakashi and dragging him down the stairs to the first floor. When he got there he quickly looked around. Nodding his head in satisfaction at not seeing anyone he quickly went into the living room and sat Kakashi on the couch while he took the seat directly across from him.
"Get up you damn scarecrow I know that you are awake." Said Naruto as he sat there looking at Kakashi. Not a moment later Kakashi sighed in defeat and opened his single eye.
"What do you want Naruto?" Asked Kakashi as he looked at Naruto.
"I wanted to apologize for bringing up the fact that you couldn't help me those three years ago." Said Naruto as he looked at Kakashi with faint traces of sorrow in his eyes.
"No Naruto. You don't need to apologize. You were right I did nearly let you die that night. If...I had only done my job...you would be..." Said Kakashi as he struggled with the word.
"Human. Kakashi I will not lie, while it's true you could've prevented what I became I'm glad you didn't. If I would have remained my former self a naive fool who would have royally screwed up and possibly have died by this point in my life. Besides its not all your fault. I was the idiot who had both Mutsume and myself out way past our curfew. If only I had listened to the old man more often when I was younger she would still be..." Said Naruto before he caught sight of a faint trail of black hair from the window edge. With his eyes widening in shock he quickly stood up and ran towards the window. When he got there he quickly looked around the surrounding area not seeing anything.
"Naruto are you alright?" Asked Kakashi as he carefully looked over the couch's edge at Naruto.
"Y-yeah I'm fine." Said Naruto as he backed away from the window.
"Kakashi I'm going to go ahead and start making breakfast." Said Naruto as he walked out of the room leaving Kakashi sitting on the couch. Silently Kakashi sat there wondering what Naruto saw before he was stopped as he heard something fall to the ground. Narrowing his eye he calmly pulled out a kunai and looked around not seeing anything. Sighing in piece he placed the kunai away and closed his eyes.
"Hello Kakashi." Lightly whispered a voice against his ear causing his eye to open in shock. Quickly he turned his head towards the voice to see Rin looking at him from over the couch.
"Rin?" Said Kakashi in more fear then he wanted while Rin smirked.
"You know I completely forgot to finish the ritual with you that night." Said Rin as she walked around the couch until she stood in front of him. She then bent down so that she was crouching in front of Kakashi. Smiling with uncontainable joy she gently pulled down Kakashi's face mask and lightly kissed him. Out of shock Kakashi just laid there like a stone statue not doing anything until he finally relaxed a tad bit and kissed her back. After a short while she gently removed herself from the kiss and smiled down at Kakashi as she pulled out a kunai from Kami only knows where. She then held it to her wrist and created a quick cut along her wrist. After a significant amount of blood had flowed out of the wound she held her wrist to Kakashi pretty much telling him to drink.
Kakashi knowing that Rin had a rather dangerous temper as a human knew that her temper would be far worse now that she was a demon and did as he being told. Cautiously he licked her blood and found that he actually enjoyed the taste. It didn't take long before he was gently lapping up her blood causing her to smile before she gently pulled her wrist away.
Smiling lightly Rin then took the same kunai and cut a slit along Kakashi's left cheek. After she removed the kunai she gently lowered her face to the wound as the blood filtered out. Gently she licked his cheek indulging herself in the taste of his blood.
Kakashi on the other hand couldn't move as she gently ran her tongue over the cut. As she ran her tongue across his face he could feel his skin part from where she cut him. He found that the experience was both strange but at the same time pleasurable.
"Hey Kakashi what do you want for breakfast?" Asked Naruto as he walked into the living room.
"Huh?" Was Kakashi's intelligent response as he turned to Naruto who had one of his eyebrows raised. He then looked around but didn't see Rin anywhere in the room but he could clearly feel her somewhere, he just didn't know where she was.
(With Rin)
"God Fucking Damnit I was so Fucking close. Damn you sensei and your son for both having a horrible sense of time!" Shouted Rin as she slammed her hands against a rock turning it into rubble.
(Back With Kakashi and Naruto)
"Uh...I'll just have whatever you're having." Replied Kakashi as he began to ponder what Rin was up to while Naruto just rolled his eyes and left the room muttering under his breath.
As Naruto reentered the kitchen he took notice of the fact that his mother was up and looking outside.
"You know I heard what you and Kakashi were talking about." Said Kushina as she continued to look out the window.
"Then you also know that it wasn't all Kakashi's fault." Said Naruto as he stayed back from his mother not knowing what she would do.
"I...know. It wasn't your fault nor was it Kakashi's...it was the villagers. My husband your father trusted them and this...this is how they repay his loyalty along with his long years of service to the village. By treating his only son and anyone affiliated with him like...monsters that don't deserve to live." Said Kushina in anger as her chakra flared to life.
"When we get back to that village there will be blood raining from the heavens." Said Kushina as she slightly turned showing that her violet eyes were slit down the center and shone with the lust for blood.
"No you won't. The villagers have already learned their lesson to not mess with me. If anything it's the council that will need to be dealt with. No it wasn't even the whole council it was only the civilian portion. They were the major source of my problems." Said Naruto as he walked up to his mother and gently set his hand on her shoulder calming her a bit.
"They will pay though." Said Kushina as her eyes still glowed with the urge to destroy something.
"I know but for now just remained focused I just got you back into my life I don't need to lose you because either you, my teammates, or myself made a mistake." Gently said Naruto as he temporarily allowed for his mask to drop before he quickly replaced it.
"You're right. Now I believe that you said that you would make breakfast." Said Kushina while Naruto just lightly chuckled before walking off to the kitchen. After he entered the kitchen all the girls came down from the staircase and looked at Kushina.
"Don't worry I'm okay, but I'm worried. Something in my gut is telling me that something really bad is going to happen or it's going to be very good." Said Kushina as she sat down at the table while the other girls joined her.
"What do you mean Kushina?" Asked Sasuke as she looked at her in mild confusion.
"It's a unique hereditary trait that all Uzumaki have. Besides our unpredictability in battle we also have a natural gut instinct from the time that we are born that warns us of danger or something else. It is one of the major reasons why Uzumaki's were feared. Because of this hereditary trait we were able to live longer then most ninja could ever dream. The results of that longer life span were usually highly ranked seal masters, kenjutsu masters, or whatever else an Uzumaki chose to spend their time learning." Said Natsuki as Kushina nodded her head showing that everything that Natsuki said was true.
"Wow. So were there any other Uzumaki survivors from whirlpool?" Asked Hinata as the air filled with the scent of cooking food.
"I honestly don't know. For the past several years I've been more worried about my son but I did here a rumor that my grandfather may have survived. I'm not getting my hopes up though." Said Kushina as Naruto walked into the room expertly carrying several plates along his arms.
Acting quickly he lightly set them down in front of each member that was currently sitting at the table leaving him with two bowls. He then left the room carrying the two bowls leaving the others to continue their topics of discussion. As Naruto entered the living room he took notice of Tsunami, Tazuna and Inari standing on the staircase attempting to remain hidden behind the wall.
"There is plenty for everyone. The rest is sitting in the kitchen if you want it." Said Naruto as he walked by with a small smirk when he heard them run by and into the kitchen. Chuckling under his breath Naruto walked into the living room and approached the couch where Kakashi lay before setting down the bowl on the coffee table. He then went over to the other side of the coffee table and sat down before he took out two pairs of chop sticks from nowhere. Gently he tossed the second pair of chopsticks to Kakashi who gratefully caught them.
Silently Kakashi sat up on the couch before he grabbed his bowl and just stared at it.
"Oh uh...um Naruto can I ask you a favor?" Asked Kakashi while Naruto shoveled the whole bowl's contents into his mouth before looking at Kakashi with some noodles hanging out of his mouth.
"Fure." Said Naruto as he quickly swallowed his mouth full and released a sigh of contentment.
"Would you please go up to our room and retrieve my training scroll that I had created for you and your team. I'm afraid that I'm going to have to make some...adjustments to it." Said Kakashi as he smiled under his mask while Naruto just shrugged his shoulders and left. The second he left the room Kakashi quickly pulled down his mask, stuffed all the food into his mouth, and placed the mask back into place in a matter of ten seconds.
After a short while Naruto returned with the scroll and took notice of Kakashi sitting on the couch with his food bowl empty. Calmly Naruto looked at Kakashi and tossed the scroll at him. Kakashi not knowing that he threw the scroll got hit square in the face.
"You're a real bastard you do realize that right Kakashi." Said Naruto as he walked out of the room noticing Kakashi just sitting there smiling underneath his mask.
"Hey mom Kakashi-sensei is wanting you in the living room to discuss our training." Said Naruto as Kushina nodded her head and left the group. Naruto taking a deep breath calmly sat down and laid his head against the cool wooden table.
"Naruto are you okay?" Asked Natsuki as she walked behind him and gently rubbed his shoulders trying to alleviate some of his tension. She was soon rewarded with him sighing while he began to lightly pure before she stopped.
"Naruto what's wrong?" Asked Natsuki once more while Naruto mumbled a response into the table.
"What was that Naruto I couldn't hear you." Said Natsuki while Naruto sighed before he raised his head.
"I said, I thought that I saw Mutsume earlier when I was talking to Kakashi." Said Naruto as everyone that was currently in the room looked somewhat shocked.
"Are you certain?" Asked Natsuki with wide eyes.
"I'm not entirely sure. I only caught a very brief glimpse of her and may have mistaken it to be her." Said Naruto as he cracked his neck before he released a yawn.
"Anyway I'm going out for a morning run want to join?" Asked Naruto while all the girls nodded before they exited the house. They then walked towards into the clearing before they began to stretch. After stretching Naruto changed into his fox form as did Natsuki while Hinata and Sasuke were confused.
Naruto in his fox form, not chibi fox form, stood when sitting 3' 5", still retained his bright blue eyes, had golden yellow fur, a mouth full of sharp teeth while two poked past his lips, and some ivory claws.
Natsuki wasn't all that different than Naruto the only major difference was the color of her eyes and fur.
"Um...Naruto how do we change?" Asked Hinata while Naruto jumped up to her shoulder.
"It's rather easy all you need to do is flood your chakra network with your demonic yokai along with picturing yourself as a fox." Said Naruto scaring the life out of Tsunami who just came outside.
"Did that fox just speak?" Asked Tsunami as she pointed to Naruto.
"Um...maybe." Answered Hinata and Sasuke at the same time while Tsunami looked slightly closer at the foxes. As Tsunami continued to stare at the foxes she began to realize who they were.
"Naruto, Natsuki is that you?" Asked Tsunami as her eyes gained a certain light about them.
"Unfortunately yes." Replied Natsuki as she sighed out her answer. Then without warning both Naruto and Natsuki were pulled into a hug.
"Oh...by Kami's sweet name you are so cute." Squealed Tsunami as she hugged them as she rubbed her chin against their forehead.
Both Hinata and Sasuke shared a quick laugh at their expense. After a short while Tsunami released both Natsuki and Naruto, who began to take in some large breaths. After regaining their breaths they both turned towards Hinata and Sasuke concentrating before a thin layer of yokai covered them. After a short while Hinata and Sasuke began to shrink until they were just slightly shorter than Naruto. Then without warning their yokai surged.
"Oh...shit." Stated Naruto as he was lightly pushed back as Hinata and Sasuke's yokai surged once more.
"You can say that again." Said Natsuki as she and Naruto dug their claws into the soil as a third yokai surge was released causing them to skid back a few more inches.
"Oh...shit." Said Naruto once more as everyone in the house came out to see what the problem was.
"Naruto!" Shouted Natsuki as she glared at him to the best of her ability.
"What, you said that I could say that again." Replied Naruto as he started to slide back slightly.
"I didn't mean it literally!" Shouted Natsuki before Hinata's and Sasuke's chakra doubled back into itself.
"Royal fucking shit." Muttered Naruto as both girls chakra exploded outward. Only this time instead of traveling out as a dome shape it exploded into three separate tendrils' of chakra that flew into the sky. They then crashed into one another releasing a chakra pulse before they shot back down onto the girls. Right when the chakra struck the girls it had a similar effect of lightning striking a metal pole dispersing into both their bodies and the ground.
Silently everyone held their breath as the chakra lightning coursed across the bodies of Hinata and Sasuke before it was absorbed into their bodies. Even after the chakra dissipated from them no one moved towards them before they suddenly began to grow once more. The young Kunoichi's chakra finally dispersed from them. Standing before the group were two full demons.
Hinata in her demon form stood roughly around the height of a two story house if not three story, her fur was a midnight black color with a few streaks of a very light violet that was bordering on white, her teeth were at best the size of a human child, her eyes were the same color as her human ones only with a slit pupil, and she had a rather nice collection of extremely sharp claws that were digging into the ground. Gently waving behind her were two tails that were the same color as her fur all except for the white tips.
Sasuke in her demon form stood roughly around the height of a two story house if not three story, her fur was a black color with faint traces of light blue along the edges, her teeth were at best the size of a human child, her eyes were the same color as her human ones only with a slit pupil, and she had a rather nice collection of extremely sharp claws that were digging into the ground. Gently waving behind her were two tails that were the same color as her fur all except for the crimson red tips.
"Um...Natsuki what the hell just happened?" Asked Naruto as he reverted to his human form while Hinata and Sasuke attempted to gently lay on the ground and utterly failed and caused a small tremor instead.
"I'm going to go out on a random a limb here and say that because this is the first time they ever went into simple kitsune form their chakra exploded because they were condensing it too much. The resulting condensing caused the chakra to be placed under extreme pressure. When they couldn't contain the chakra any longer it just burst free and changed them into their demon forms." Said Natsuki as she to reverted to her human form. Silently she took notice of all the ninja nodding their heads in understanding while Tazuna and his family seemed rather confused.
"Okay let me put it this way. What happens when you fill a glass jar with water, screw on the cap really tight, and place it into a freezer?" Asked Natsuki as she sighed.
"It explodes..." Said Tsunami as she and her father realized what happened while Inari still seemed slightly confused.
"Exactly. Although my question is for how long they will remain like this?" Asked Kushina as she looked at Natsuki for an answer.
"My best bet is that they will remain like this for the rest of the day." Said Natsuki as she gently rubbed her forehead.
"Couldn't we also use the demonic suppression seal?" Asked Naruto as Natsuki just slapped herself on the head while muttering idiot under her breath.
"Demonic Art: Demonic Suppression." Muttered Natsuki as she quickly performed several hand signs that the others couldn't keep track of. When she finished her fingertips were glowing a deep crimson hue and had five separately unique kanji on each finger. Moving quickly she slammed her hands into both Hinata and Sasuke's head before she was blown back by a sudden chakra burst.
When the chakra burst receded both Hinata and Sasuke were back in their human forms and their chakra at their normal levels.
"Hinata, Sasuke how are you feeling?" Asked Naruto knowing that going into one's demonic form usually caused a few problems.
"A little dizzy but otherwise we feel fin..." Started Hinata as she looked at Naruto.
'Uh-oh I know that look.' Thought Naruto as he watched both Hinata and Sasuke's eyes coat over with lust. Shortly after the pheromones hit him causing him to freeze.
'Shit.' Thought Natsuki as she quickly wrapped her tails around Hinata and Sasuke's waists. She then quickly performed a few quick demon hand signs before they disappeared in a flaming vortex.
"What the hell just happened?" Asked nearly everyone as they looked at Naruto and Kushina for answers.
"First heat?" Asked Kushina as she looked at Naruto for confirmation.
"Yep." Replied Naruto while everyone still looked confused.
"Heat is a demon term for when a female comes into the age for birthing children." Stated Naruto while everyone just nodded their head while Inari still seemed so confused.
"Mother I thought you told me that the stork brings young children to their family." Said Inari as he looked at his mother for clarification.
"Um...well...uh...You're too young to understand Inari now...um... why don't we go hang the wet clothing." Said Tsunami as she pulled Inari towards the other side of the house. Once they were out of the sight of the adults everyone sighed in relief.
"Mom how about you let me sign the contract for the tigers so that way you can help Natsuki with Hinata and Sasuke. You could possibly get them to use the sexual frustration to make them train harder." Suggested Naruto as Kushina nodded in agreement.
"Summoning Jutsu!" Exclaimed Kushina in enthusiasm as she slammed her hand on the ground. Shortly after a small poof of smoke appeared before it was blown away by a small breeze.
When the smoke was cleared a small tiger could be seen. The tiger was only stood on all four feet half way up Kushina's calf and when sitting up to Kushina's knees, it was a light orange color with white and black stripes, black talon like claws, a full mouth of ivory white teeth with two poking out of its mouth , and a pair of bright orange eyes. It was wearing perfectly shinned gold armor on its shoulders with the kanji for guardian on it while a scroll was securely fastened to the tiger's back.
"Kushina-sama why have you summoned me?" Asked the tiger as it looked at Kushina in mild curiosity.
"Kiyo-chan it's good to see you as well. Besides I've found a new summoner." Responded Kushina as she struggled with her wording while Kiyo looked over at Tazuna.
"Seriously Kushina you're allowing for a drunk to sign our contract. You know very well that mother doesn't tolerate such people unless they have something to contribute to the clan." Responded Kiyo while Tazuna and Kushina were both pissed although Kushina was able to hide it.
"Actually Kiyo-chan my son wants to sign the contract." Said Kushina as she motioned to her son who was glareing heavily at Kiyo.
"Mom if its alright with you I think I'll stick with the Kitsune summons." Said Naruto as he walked off.
"Hold up…Uzumaki-kun." Said Kiyo as she approached him. Once she was near him she slowly started to circle him before she sat in front of him. Silently she looked him in the eyes before hers turned the same shade as Naruto's. After a few minutes she looked away and released the scroll on her back.
"You have the right to sign the scroll Uzumaki-kun. When you finish perform the summoning jutsu like you normally would only specify that you want the tiger clan by saying Summoning Jutsu Tiger. Good bye Uzumaki-kun." Said Kiyo before she vanished in a light puff of smoke.
Raising one of his eyebrows in confusion Naruto picked up the scroll and unrolled it. When he unrolled it he saw names of his family that ranged from the time shortly after the Six Path Sage all the way up until the last major ninja war. Sighing in sadness knowing that he would never get to meet most of these people he quickly bit his thumb and signed his name in the scroll. Taking the remains of his blood on his finger he tapped each finger against it before he slammed his fingers into the scroll.
"Boar, Dog, Bird, Monkey, and Ram. Summoning Jutsu: Tiger!" Shouted Naruto as a large plume of smoke covered the area. When the smoke finally cleared Naruto was standing before what he assumed to be the boss of the tiger summonings.
The tiger stood on all four legs roughly around 4' 6" but when it sat it stood 4' 7", was a deep orange color with stripes of gold and a firey orange all over its body, and a pair of golden yellow eyes with a black slit running through the center. Every now and then the black slits would widen thin shrink with the light. On the left shoulder was a dulled gold shoulder pad with the kanji for leader inscribed into the metal with the same fiery orange in the tigers fur.
"Why have you summoned me, boy?" Asked the tiger as it opened its mouth showing a full mouth of sharp and deadly teeth.
"I've summoned you here so that I could gain permission to summon you whenever I will need assistance and to see if you would also consider allowing for me to remain of the foxes summoning contract." Said Naruto as he bowed before the summon.
Silently they sat there with the tiger looking directly at Naruto neither moving until, "Your definitely Kushina's son. Only she would have the gall to ask such a thing. I will allow it on one condition, You summon the Kitsune boss right now."
"Of course…" Started Naruto before he was interrupted by the tiger.
"My name is Kaze." Said the tiger as Naruto nodded in confirmation.
"Of course Kaze-dono." Said Naruto as he quickly bowed to Kaze.
"Summoning Jutsu: Fox!" Shouted Naruto as he once more slammed his hand against the ground dispersing another plume of smoke. Shortly after the plume of smoke dispersed showing a fox standing there looking around.
The fox stood somewhere around 4' 5" to 4' 6" when standing on all four legs and 4' 6" when sitting, its fur was a brilliant white that shone like silver, had a pair of light pink eyes with a black slit running through the center, and eight tails. Wrapped around the foxes neck was a necklace with a large white pendant in the center with the kanji for leader.
"Um…who are you?" Asked the fox in mild fear.
"I'm Naruto Uzumaki Namikaze summoner for both the fox and tiger clans if you'll allow it." Said Naruto as he bent down and lightly scratched behind the foxes ears.
"Oh well then I'm Kazuki second heiress for the Kitsune Kingdom." Replied Kazuki in a slight daze.
"Then it is an honor. Now then I would like for your permission to be allowed to summon the fox clan along with the tiger clan." Said Naruto as he remained as nice as possible.
"Very well but first of all I need to be certain that you are worth our time." Said Kazuki as she quickly climbed up to Naruto's shoulder. Kazuki then gently wrapped her tails around Naruto's skull. After a short while she jumped down and stared directly at Naruto with hatred.
"Naruto I give you permission to summon me and my people along with the tiger clan but only under one condition. You will not allow any harm to befall my sister or else you will die Uzumaki." Said Kazuki before she disappeared into a puff of smoke.
Silently Naruto just looked at Kaze for an answer but all Kaze did was shrug her shoulders before Kaze also disappeared into a puff of smoke.
"Well maybe now I can get some more training done." Muttered Naruto as he walked away from Tazuna's house and into the surrounding forest. As he walked further into the forest he took notice of how the light was refracted by the tree cover until he came to a clearing. Looking around he nodded in satisfaction as the clearing was large enough and had a small river running through it.
"Multi-Shadow Clone Jutsu." Whispered Naruto as one thousand copies of himself came into being.
"Alright here's the drill. You two-hundred and fifty work on the tree climbing exercise while you attempt to turn a shuriken in each your palms one clockwise and the other counter clockwise. You two-hundred and fifty will work on water walking while also attempting to turn a shuriken in each of your palms with one going clockwise and the other counter clockwise. You two hundred and fifty will be reading sealing arts for dummies. You fifty will be working on out tai-jutsu try to incorporate our claws into the jutsu as well. The final two hundred will be working on performing the jutsu that we already know until you can perform them without handsigns. Now that all of you have your orders get to work." Said Naruto as all his copies nodded and went to do what was asked. As for the original Naruto he started to work on his physical strength. After about an hour the first group of Naruto clones dispersed giving Naruto the experience as he continued working hard. By the time of four hours Naruto had finished with his daily workout from Kakashi as the remnants of his clones finished just as he turned into his small kit form. The second that they dispelled he immediately fell into a deep sleep.
(The Next Day)
Lightly the sun filtered through the tree tops creating rays of light that gave the forest a mystic quality. Silently a person made their way through the forest humming a tune lightly underneath their breath.
The person in question stood 4' 3", had black hair that hung down to her upper back while two bangs gently framed the person's face, and a pair of light brown eyes. The person was wearing a light pink kimono with a black swirl pattern on it, a black chocker, and wooden sandals. In her hands was a small wicker basket that was half full of herbs.
Smiling in delight the person walked through the forest. As the person walked along a small bird landed on the person's shoulder which the person smiled at before it flew off. Smiling she followed the bird with her eyes before she caught sight of something glinting in the forest.
"Huh?" Questioned the person as the person lightly tilted their head in confusion. Getting up the person walked over to the glinting object which were shuriken. the person's eyes widen in fear as the person franticly looked around before the person took notice of something else shinning. Breathing lightly the person walked over to this object to see a small golden fox.
Silently the person sat there watching as the fox slept without a care. As the fox slept the person looked around and took notice of all the shuriken laying in the ground, imbedded in trees, rocks, and the ground. Slightly the person gasped in horror as the thoughts of those thugs slaughtering defenseless animals.
Growling in anger the person gently bent down and lightly ran one of the person's hands through the foxes fur.
"Don't worry little one I won't let anyone harm you so long as I breath." Said the person as the person picked up the fox. Quickly looking around the person quickly performed a few handsigns before an ice mirror appeared behind the person. Smiling gently at the fox the person walked into the ice mirror before it completely shattered.
(?)
Slowly fragments of ice built up until a full body mirror was created and the person stepped out still holding the fox.
"Haku...is that you?" Asked a gruff voice which woke the fox up.
"Yes it is Zabuza-sama." Replied Haku as Haku opened a nearby door and responded before Haku turned back to the room that was being supplied for them. The room was large and only had a single bed that could fit two and a small animal cage with a rabbit in it.
"Hello Mr. Whiskers." Said Haku as he lightly patted the rabbits head. The fox on the other hand approached the cage and looked at the rabbit who backed up as far as it could against the cage.
"Oh you're awake." Said Haku as he saw the fox (Naruto) growling lowly to the rabbit.
"Of course I am Haku." Replied Zabuza with a low growl.
"Oh sorry Zabuza-sama I was actually talking to this little one." Said Haku as he picked the fox up and showed it to Zabuza with a large smile.
"That's great and all but did you remember the herbs." Said Zubuza with a sweat drop while Haku's smile dropped into a look of fear.
"That's what I thought. You had better march your ass back to where you left that herb basket and retrieve it...or else your new friend there will become a rather nice hat for me." Said Zabuza with a smirk as Haku ran towards the ice mirror that he had created.
"Oh and Haku one last thing. That basket had better be full." Said Zabuza with a intense glare.
"Yes Zabuza-sama." Said Haku as he bowed before he disappeared into the ice mirror. Once the ice mirror shattered Zabuza released a sigh.
"What am I gonna do with you Haku?" Asked Zabuza as he looked at the ceiling as it if had the answers while the fox stared at him with confusion before it snorted and walked off towards the rabbit.
(With Naruto)
Grumbling underneath his breath Naruto approached the cage and looked at the rabbit before he walked on and out a nearby door.
"Great I've been captured by the enemy even though they have no idea who the hell I am." Grumbled Naruto as he walked down a staircase and walked into a rather lavish office. The office was obviously larger than Zabuza's and Haku's room. The room was filled with very little all their was one black chair that faced a desk while two light brown leather chairs faced the black chair.
Silently he scanned the room with his eyes and nodded when he didn't see anyone or feel anyone else's chakra signature. After checking and double checking Naruto jumped onto the black chair and then onto the desk where several documents were scattered. Most of what Naruto found were shipping logs which he quickly scanned.
Shipping Log #65987-HS56
Containing: 56 people mixed from children to adults to age 20
Sent to Orochimaru along with contents of shipping log #65986-HS55
Shipping Log #65986-HS55
Contains: Experimental Chakra, strength, and stamina enhancement pills from Danzo along with several different bloodline genetics acquired from living Hyuga, the deceased Uchiha, and the past four Hokage's, if they had a bloodline.
Naruto immediately stopped reading after seeing Danzo's name and quickly returned to his human form and grabbed as many shipping logs as he could and sealed them away into a scroll fully intending to give them to Sarutobi. As he did this he took notice of a small little black book and against better judgment picked it up. Lightly he opened it up to a random page and started to read.
March 5, ****
Soon that pesky bridge builder will be out of the way. I had decided to hire Zabuza but so far his 'work ethic' hasn't been quite what he promised so I have decided to hire someone more...promissing and the best thing is that he is working for only half of what Zabuza is asking. Hell he offered to Kill Zabuza for FREE! So I gladly hired him although the oddest thing is that he never told me his name all he said to ball him was Black Mist but, what do I care for I'm only having to pay half of what I owe Zabuza and the even better thing is that Haku kid is actually a girl and Black Mist said that he would give her to me...
Naruto immediately stopped reading after that as he dug his claws straight through the books pages and stuck it in one of his pockets along with the scroll filled with shipping logs. After he placed everything into his pockets he heard someone approaching the room and acting quickly returned to his fox form while casting a kitsune illusion over the desk so it looked like nothing was missing. Naruto didn't have the time to check to see if his work was close to what the desk was like when he came in since he was scooped up into a pair of arms.
"There you are Zabuza-sama had said that you left the room and I was worried." Said Haku as Naruto looked into her light brown eyes.
Naruto decided that it would be better to act like an animal rather than causing a form of suspicion that he was really a demon. So he just lightly rubbed himself into Haku's arms and faked falling asleep all the while thinking about how his kunoichi-himes were doing.
(With the Kunoichi-himes)
"Kami-sama help me. YOU two need to focus!" Shouted Natsuki as she slapped both Hinata and Sasuke across the face.
"Owwww." Moaned out Hinata and Sasuke in pain as they gently rubbed their faces attempting to alleviate some of the pain.
"What the hell was that for!" Shouted Sasuke as she growled at Natsuki he held her glare.
"That was for not paying attention to the lesson. Now then I want both of you to try again and this time with falling victim to your lust." Stated Natsuki as she cast another gen-jutsu over the two kunoichi. Silently she stood there and watched them she could clearly tell that both girls were having difficulties at keeping their lust at bay put they were learning. If Natsuki had a guess she would say that both girls were learning at the same rate. Natsuki was so caught up in her thoughts that she never noticed that the gen-jutsu placed over Hinata had finally broken and no traces of the lust that once controlled her were gone from her eyes.
Silently Hinata looked around and noticed Kushina off to the side watching with mild amusement and walked towards her.
"Um...Kushina-san what's going on?" Asked Hinata as she watched Sasuke lunge at Natsuki. Just as Sasuke was going to reach Natsuki she was slammed into the ground as Natsuki lightly raised an eyebrow and sighed. Almost directly after Sasuke's eyes widen in shock as she looked around in shock.
"Huh...where's Naruto-kun?" Asked Sasuke as she continued to look around.
"You still aren't focusing." Growled out Natsuki as she released Sasuke before she smacked Sasuke over the head.
"Well it would be rather easy if you wouldn't keep putting the gen-jutsu of Naruto standing ass naked in front of me." Retorted Sasuke as she gently rubbed her head.
"So I put the same exact gen-jutsu on Hinata and she already broke it under ten minutes and it only took Naruto fifteen minutes to ignore his lust." Stated Natsuki as Sasuke gained a certain glint in her eyes.
"Hinata while I'm working with Sasuke go ahead and train with Kushina for a while." Said Natsuki as she got Sasuke back to her feet before she casted the gen-jutsu once more.
(Back With Naruto)
Silently Naruto glared at the wall across from him as he dug his claws into the floor as Haku gently ran a comb through his fur.
"There you go." Said Haku after a while as she set Naruto down. Naruto now had several colorful bows carefully wrapped in his fur which was brushed carefully so it was smooth. Naruto silently thanked the gods that no one else could see him like this.
"Now you stay here and keep Zabuza-sama company while I go ahead and relax in the hot springs." Said Haku with a small smile as she left the room while Zabuza muttered that he didn't need a baby sitter even if it was an animal that was being asked to keep him safe.
Huffing in annoyance Naruto shook himself until all the bows fell off of him and his fur was once more wild and untamed. He then lightly walked off and curled up into a corner and just closed his eyes.
"So...um...how long are you going to hide?" Asked Zabuza as Naruto's eyes opened in shock but quickly calmed himself and waited to see if anyone would come out of the floor, walls, or ceiling. But as luck would have it nothing did.
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"Yeah I'm talking to you rabbit now get out from underneath my bed." Said Zabuza once more as Haku's snow hair came out from underneath Zabuza's sick bed while Naruto just laid there mouth wide open in shock before he released a small sigh.
'I had better get out of her.' Thought Naruto as he jumped up to the ledge of a nearby window. Just as he was about to jump out he was stopped by a kunai sticking into the window. Standing stock still Naruto didn't move as he heard Zabuza move himself more comfortably. Gulping slightly Naruto turned around and stared at Zabuza who was smirking sadistically.
"I sure hope that you aren't planning on running away because the last pet that Haku got that ran away terribly broke his heart." Said Zabuza while Naruto just sweat dropped.
'He's been raising Haku for possibly Kami knows how long and he doesn't have a single clue that Haku's a girl.' Thought Naruto before the door slammed open and Haku along with two other's walked in.
The two people that came in with Haku looked to be in their twenties, had messy brown hair that reached to their shoulders, and small beady black eyes. They were both wearing towels that were securely wrapped around their bodies showing off their c-cup bust.
'Wait a minute. That's the demon brothers and they're both GIRLS!' Mentally shouted Naruto as he pressed himself against the glass window.
"Oh Mr. Fluffy." Stated Haku in happiness as she ran towards him and pulled him into a hug.
'Mr. Fluffy?' Mentally asked Naruto as he began to cry in shame.
"This is the little one that I found out in the forest earlier today." Said Haku as she proudly held Naruto out arms length away.
"We don't like it." Replied both the Demon Sister's at the same time.
"It reminds me of that bastardized younger version of the Fourth Fire Shadow who dislocated my spine preventing me from fighting..." Started one of the twins.
"And it also reminds me of that same kid who cut my bindings revealing that I'm a girl." Finished the other female.
"I'm with them Haku it reminds me to much of the damn brat who handed me my ass on a silver platter inlaid with a golden edge." Said Zabuza with a growl.
"Well that's not his fault Gozu. You made it seem as if you killed his girlfriend so it's only natural that he would react like that. As for you Mizu you should have known that Gozu would have been fine and besides the bindings was most definitely an accident. Zabuza the boy Naruto gave you an excellent resume that told you to run yet you didn't you were looking forward to fighting him and you still are so it's your own damn fault." Said Haku angrily while everyone looked at her in shock.
'Wow she/he does have a backbone.' Thought everyone other than Haku and the rabbit.
"Now then I'm going to go ahead and retire for the night." Said Haku as she opened the window with Mr. Fluffy still in her arms.
"What about this one?" Asked Zabuza as he pointed to Haku's rabbit.
"Oh I'm going to leave him here to guard you tonight. Trust me he's an excellent guard." Said Haku with a small smile before she jumped out the window. After a few seconds of free falling Haku created an ice mirror and fell straight threw.
"How the hell can a rabbit be considered a guard?" Asked Mizu as she looked to her sister.
"I don't know." Responded Gozu before they turned to Zabuza as he screamed in pain. Currently the little rabbit was biting his pointing finger as he waved his hand around to get the rabbit off.
"Ohh...that's what he meant." Said both Mizu and Gozu at the same time.
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As Naruto and Haku passed through the mirror he couldn't help but shiver slightly as his fur was slightly covered with some frost. He then gently snuggled closer to Haku to reheat and looked around where they were.
Haku had apparently brought them to an underground cave that was rather large. The ceiling of cave was approximately ten feet in the air and held up by several pillars of rock and crystal. The floor of the room was a solid underground lake that was completely frozen over.
Hopping out of Haku's grasp Naruto approached the frozen lake and stepped on it and stopped a few feet away from the shore. Looking around Naruto approached one of the stone pillars and took notice that they had carvings placed into them and that because of the number of years of water sliding down the pillars and dropping off minerals had filled them in so that you could only see them when up close. Even with his enhanced vision he couldn't tell exactly what the carvings were.
Eventually Naruto got bored staring at the carvings and went back to Haku only to see her standing in the center of the frozen lake. If Naruto could he would have raised an eyebrow but since he couldn't he just walked towards her. Silently he sat by her as she continued to stare into the darkness before she lowered her eyesight to frozen lake. Naruto not understanding did the same but didn't notice anything odd.
"It's hard you know...lossing your entire family." Said Haku as she sat down onto the frozen lake.
"But it's even harder when the reason why you lost your entire family is because of a single member of your family. My mother was a wonderful person always encouraging me to do my best but she just like me held a dark secret. A bloodline. Several years before that the fourth Water Shadow ordered that all Bloodline users be purged from the society by death. My mother was able to hide and escape and met my father and never used her bloodline ever again. My father of course later found out that my mother, his wife and myself had the same bloodline and gathered a few of his buddies together and killed mom. He then attempted to kill be but he never had that chance. Out of fear I utilized my bloodline and killed him with ice spears." Said Haku as she let a few tears fall from her eyes.
Naruto not liking to see anyone cry despite his cold exterior lightly climbed into her lap and licked her tears off of her face. He continued to do this until she was lightly giggling and attempting to push him away. Only once he was certain that all the tears were gone did he stop and hop off of her lap.
"I guess its also hard on you as well. After all I found you in a clearing filled with kunai and shuriken. I can't imagine what exactly happened to your family." Said Haku as she lightly petted Naruto on the head.
For a while Naruto just sat there enjoying the feeling that Haku was giving him before his ears slightly perked up as he heard something. Looking at the direction he heard the sound he noticed a rock sitting on the lake and just returned to rubbing his head into Haku's hand.
(With the Kunoichi-hime's)
"Well you finally succeeded Sasuke if only after thirty minutes of continuously suffering underneath that gen-jutsu." Said Natsuki as she looked over to see Sasuke digging her claws into the earth before she pulled out a rather impressive boulder and threw it at Natsuki. Scoffing lighly Natsuki just flicked it turning the boulder into a dust cloud. Silently Natsuki waited in the smoke before she flipped backwards and successfully landed on top of Sasuke. When Natsuki looked into Sasuke's eyes she could clearly see nothing but the pure drive to become stronger.
"Well now we know that you have the drive to train let's get started." Said Natsuki with a sadistice grin on her face that would make Anko giddy with happiness. Natsuki then got off of Sasuke and tossed her five feet away and waited until Sasuke got back up and growled at Natsuki as some of her hair rose up into hackles.
Moving as fast as she could Sasuke ran towards Natsuki and let lose a forward punch aimed at Natsuki's head which she lightly turned to the side to dodge before she backhanded Sasuke to the ground.
"Kitsune don't attack their opponents head on. We attack them using deception fake punch's and kick's, illusions, even the very environment we utilize to our advantage." Lectured Natsuki as Sasuke rose back to her feet while growling lowly.
Turning around quickly Sasuke once more aimed a punch towards Natsuki's face while Natsuki just caught it. Smirking Sasuke then slammed her heel into Natsuki's stomach causing her to double over while letting go of Sasuke's hand. Moving quickly Sasuke slammed her elbow into Natsuki's neck knocking her out.
"You were so easy to decieve. Now to go find Naruto-kun." Said Sasuke with a smile as she licked her lips while walking away.
(With Hinata and Kushina)
"Hinata that's enough for today." Stated Kushina as she blocked a rather sloppy palm thrust as Hinata breathed heavily before collapsing onto her knees.
"No...it's not. I need to become stronger. I don't want to worry Naruto-kun with the fear of ever seeing me die ever again." Said Hinata as she shakily stood back up onto her feet.
"Then stop holding back. So me what you are truly capable of. Beside's I'm also a half-demon meaning it will take quite a bit just to kill me." Said Kushina as Hinata hardened her eyes and nodded.
"Understood Kushina-chan." Said Hinata as she closed her eyes before reopening them showing that her eyes were still a white color but had a light violet outline.
"Okay here I come." Said Hinata before she took off running towards Kushina. Right before she got close to Kushina she had to dodge to the left as Kushina brought her blade down acting quickly Hinata struck not only Kushina's chakra points but also her pressure points. Hinata then flipped over Kushina and struck her on the back of the neck knocking her out.
"Jonin ninja my ass. You were far weaker than an average chunin but you aren't my worry now. Now I want to do is find Naruto-kun." Said Hinata as she deactivated her bloodline and walked away.
Okay I'm calling it quits right here so that I can actually plan out how everything will work out from this point forward. Now onto reviews:
notgonnasay09: I would like to once again point out the sheer length of each chapter. I don't mean to be a nag about it; it just takes a very long time to actually sit down and read almost 20,000 words per chapter like this. I can see some people simply avoiding this piece simply due to the length of this.
That said, everything so far is flowing smoothly; there are no apparent awkward scene placements or sequences jumping ahead too soon. Everyone is interacting in a way that makes total sense, and you have hinted at things that I assume will be explained wonderfully later.
I appreciate your time in reading your reviews, as it makes you seem more accessable as an author.
ITD: Okay the reason why each chapter is so long is so that way I can cover as much as I need along with the doubled fact that I'm trying to show to future writers that they should aim to set their writing goals higher.
Also thanks for saying that everything is moving along smoothly along with your last comment. As for the reason why I read the reviews its so I can see how people are enjoying the story and what is wrong with it so I can better myself.
I would like to once again point out the sheer length of each chapter. I don't mean to be a nag about it; it just takes a very long time to actually sit down and read almost 20,000 words per chapter like this. I can see some people simply avoiding this piece simply due to the length of this.
That said, everything so far is flowing smoothly; there are no apparent awkward scene placements or sequences jumping ahead too soon. Everyone is interacting in a way that makes total sense, and you have hinted at things that I assume will be explained wonderfully later.
I appreciate your time in reading your reviews, as it makes you seem more accessable as an author.
moose007: Going between japanese and english for the jutsus is annoying me. Otherwise I'm enjoying it so far. Keep up the good work.
ITD: Okay yes I realize this now so for now on I'm going to use English jutsu not only because it's easier for people to fallow but also because a lot of future jutsu I won't be able to translate properly. I also glad that you are enjoying it.
Bahumat Knight: another great chapter man, gotta say though, kinda hoping the fourth person of the harem ends up being mutsume after she some how survived or was revived, think itd be interesting, not enough naruto/oc pairings, though would be awesome if femhaku was in it too, keep up the great work, plz update soon!
ITD: Okay I'm going to address this issue now This is a five person harem fic the pairings have already been decided and all I'm going to let loose only one piece of information the last two members of the harem will be released next chapter.
Dragon Man 180: I have to say, Tsunami washing Neji's mouth out with soap was hilarious! But how come Kushina wasn't ready to kill Kakashi after that comment that Kakashi left Naruto to die at one point? I mean, she'd be a way better sensei than Kakashi, so if she puts him in the hospital for life it isn't much of a loss.
ITD: Okay I will tell you that Neji's mouth getting washed out by soap is actually a rather personal experience that I had and I figured that a stuck up Hyuga needed it more than anyone else. As for why Kushina didn't kill Kakashi well it's because she had larger fish to fry mainly the Konoha council.
GenoBeast: Kind of hax but interesting...also kind of rushed with the moving or maybe not if the next chapter covers the reasoning. Kind of hard to follow sometimes during the fights...will admit I skipped some of it. The Tora things was funny at first but I felt like it was a distraction.
ITD: what in the world does hax mean. As for the rush well its becuase I didn't really care about the Mizuki treachery and quite honestly who wants' to read about three highly powerful demon's baby sitting, picking potatoes, or painting a fence. Well that might be why the fight is slightly hard to follow as for the Tora mission it was meant to be a distraction and funny.
Badboyzkg: awesome wait 4 the next
ITD: Okay the review is short, sweet, simple, and straight to the point...WHAT THE HELL IS WRONG WITH YOU! REVIEWS ARE MENT TO BE LONG AND EXPLAING WHAT YOU LIKED OR DIDN'T LIKE SO I CAN GET IT RIGHT!
Pusdocode Samurai: *sigh* you shame us mate ^_^ almost 20k words, nice ^_^
Thus far this is a thoroughly enjoyable fic, I must say, typically I don't like the demon Naruto stories to much as he seems to get that strength to fast, but at least thus far you are keeping it in a nice curve, keep up the good work ^_^
The girls are all believable and are managing to stay unique and fun, something that can get a little off in harem fics, and Naruto still has his own quirks, faults and weaknesses.
I'm interested in seeing what you may finish Wave out with as thus far you have a LOT of jonin and powerful non there, so I'm expecting a bit of backup here for ol'Za by.
Anyway, I'll stop my gushing now ^_^ keep up the good work mate, and I look forward to the next chapy.
ITD: I'm glad that you are picking up on the uniqueness that i'm trying to place into the characters.
Hanzo of the Salamander: Love it
ITD: Read the review for Badboyzkg
anbu no kitsune: dude that is pure evil making tora be able to use jutsu.
and you know what pure genuis.
keep it up lookin forward to future chapters
ja ne
ITD: Thank you thank you thank you for calling me and evil genius. I applaud you now dance.
M4Sherman: I got an officail acount! Yosh! What does that even mean? anyhow I have an important question...in what manner did I hurt your self esteem. I dont quite understand. please explain. M4
ITD: Okay are you talking about the official account or the word yosh. Okay I said that because I usually give that review to people who give me a good review but push me to update before I'm ready.
Jiraiya-san: I can't read this anymore.
I'm sorry but your grammar and spelling annoy me to no end.
ITD: Okay yes my grammar is bad but what human's grammar is good. We go to school to learn that shit but how many of us really end up using it in real life.
curious 37465: hey I.T.D. i just finished reading the newest update. thanks for saying you would take my ideas into consideration. oh by the way i did manage to find another fic with a female sasuke, it's a naruto x mokoto (sasuke's mom in case i spelled that wrong) fic titled "a mother's love". anyway pretty good in this chapter, but thanks to your reply i'm now very interested to know what you have planned for kin and tayuya, so please hurry up and post another chapter soon. also i was wondering if when they go back to konoha if kushina goes with them is she gonna rain down an ungodly apocolyse of hellfire and brimstone on the council or something. just woundering anyway please respond next time you post man.
ITD: See people I told you that there were other female Sasuke fics out there. Oh you will have to wait and see what I have in store for those two sound nin. As for the council idea well there is an idea. *Writer is smirking in dark room while laughing like a madman*
FumetsuKaji: Your chapter length is very impressive. I am enjoying your story. Team 7 should be called team demon. Everyone on it is now a demon in some form. I like what you did to Neji. It made me smile. Please update again.
ITD: Now there is and idea for what to call team 7 during the chunin exams.
KitsuneNoYomeiri: mou... some spelling errors, and "True Eye" in latin is "verus oculus" and japanese is "Shin no gan" but "Shingan" is "The Mind's Eye"
do be careful with these things. on to more reading...
om nom nom(i found a cyber cookie!) om nom nom
ITD: Okay yes I know about the spelling and thanks for the Latin and Japanese translations for The True Eye. I'll be certain to go back to that chapter and fix it. Now enjoy your cyber cookie.
Okay that's all the reviews now hopefully I'll receive a few more next time.
