I am very sorry, guys, but I'm not going to becontinuing this story, mainly due to stress and complete lack of confidence in my writing ability, because, in all honesty, looking at my work and then the work of others, I can tell mine isn't of a high calibre. So if anyone wants to 'adopt' the story, just send a message.
As an extended apology, I can recommend, from what I've read, Who Will Rescue Me?, If Candace Knew, The Seer, The Meeting (All of them).
Again, sorry, but chances are I won't carry this on, as I don't see my writing style as suffice to entertain readers properly.