AN : Okay, guys. Review please and I'll try to get a new chapter of One Day at A time out by tomorrowish!
Loren
-The Next Night- (Friday)
Loren was getting ready for her date with Eddie, she sat down about 20 outfits on her bed, slowly but surely flipping through them, carefully examining each one. She came across a strapless white dress with a yellow belt around the waistline, only to see it had a coffee stain across the back. Also, a small C-shaped tear in the side.
"Stupid Melissa.." she mumbled remembering what had happened.
Memory
She and Melissa were sitting at the cafe right after a school dance, one of the only ones Loren had been to, she had worn the dress and was sitting with Melissa and Cameron, when she was still with him, holding his hand. Melissa began laughing so hard her coffee began to flop out of it's cup slowly, straight onto Loren. Loren winced in pain and ran out of the shop, embarrased. She put on her jacket that didn't match her outfit at all, just to get rid of it before driving home and throwing it into the closet once again to probably never be worn again. The next morning she decided to try to wash it, but once she put it in even on a fragile setting, it came out with a tear in the side. She sighed and hung it up.
End Memory (or Flashback)
Loren looked at the dress one more time in sadness and through it into the "No" pile. She looked at the yes, only 5 dresses remaining on the right side of her bed. She gently picked up the first one, a black one-strap dress.
"Too.. drab." she said to herself as she threw it into the "No" pile.
The next one was a yellow, spaghetii strap dress that came with pink leggings.
"Too.. sore thumby" she said as she tossed that one into the no pile as well.
The next dress she came across was a pink strapless dress. It had a sparkley belt with a red ribbon attached. It was perfect
( itm/80-NWT-MY-MICHELLE-PINK-SHIRRED-TUBE-STRAPLESS-DRESS-SMALL-BUBBLE-PADDED-BRA-/400335920918?pt=US_CSA_WC_Dresses&hash=item5d35e15f16 lol ebay)
She put on the dress and curled her hair, the curls were amazingly perfect. She put on a lip gloss a bit lighter than a cherry as well as smoky eye shadow with mascara too. She looked in the mirror to make any corrections before Eddie came. She adjusted midly and brushed her curls one more time, and slipped on some red high heels to match.
"Ding dong!" the doorbell rang.
Loren ran into the living room and opened the door to Eddie, he had a white shirt on with a grey jacket and jeans on, his mouth gaped open when he saw Loren.
"You look..amazing." Eddie said, still stunned.
"Thanks. You too." Loren said while her cheeks turned red.
"Shall we?" Eddie said as he reached his hand out for Loren to take.
Loren grabbed it, they got to the car, a driver had been planned, and Eddie took the handle and opened it for Loren.
"Thank you" Loren said as she stepped in.
Eddie went to the other side and got into the car. They drove off to go see a movie and then to dinner.
End Chapter 3
AN : Just adding this, this was pre-written a few days ago, just mildy edited today so it's not the new format :) Feedback? Barely any on price of fame, is that a sign? :(