Disclaimer: Well so appparrantly some people thout this was a marysue on pottersues or some website and I went there and they were just mean people saying bad thingss about very goo d stories. Its not very nice at all to do that, im just writing a story here and if you want to say my story that I worked so hard on is a terrible troll than you go and do that but i like my story and i have so many other people that put me on their friends lists and sent me reviews saying they liked my story so you don't have to be mean – have constructive reviews but no FLAMES or JUST LIES theyre not good and they're just mean!

I will try and work on my grammar more (i found the spell check on my computer now so hopefully it wont be so bad…) and i hope you like this next part of the story………….thanks to siriusxxkissme, Lady Julie Snape, Zara-SBT, Dramione Forever, DreamWriter123, and for such nice comments. I love you guys! And this next chappp goes out to all my fans (please keep reviewing even bad ones so I can get better….)

Oh ad this isn't JK rowling's because although I want to be like her 1 day I still need a bit of work. The whole failing engish thing is not helping but english isn't by first language American is hahahahahahah so yeah. Sry for the rant just read.

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Pansy came and showed me too my new rooms which was in the bottom of the hgowarts dungeons. That's where I was going to be sleeping.

"the password is purest blood doth lie here" she said "and that's the most important thing for you to remember, potter, even though I don't like your brother and your mother was a filthy w****.

"you cant say that about

my mom! I said and I whish I knew her but pansy that is a horrible thing to say even though I think purebloods are right (no duh she was in slytherin, of course she was going to think that all mudbloods were bad thats why she didn't like the hunchback on the train…Hermione granger they called her. It was her brother's best frined)

"did you kill the dark lord?" asked draco malfoy, the kid who was the blonde kid I saw in diagonal alley (haha there are SO many names for it)

"no my brother did even as a baby I knew I was a loyal servant to the dark lord because he killed my ftather."

"why did you want him to kill your father asked draco

"because he hurt me as a baby!!!!" I screamed and hid behind the door. "NO BODY COME IN BECAUSE I WANT TO BE ALONE."

Then my twin brother knocked on the door and yelled ALLY I NEED TO TALK TO YOU COME OUT PLEASE.

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Cliffy! Read and pleaseeeee review (especially you tor/giigiii). Thanks I know this chapter wuz short but there is so much more in this big ol; brain of mine. Tell me was the grammar better I hope so! I used the spell check thingie more… anyway I'm off….