A/N: Hi! This is an answer about one of my reviews from Smells of Bitter Almonds. Thank you so much for reviewing and advising me! It's really helpful!
Firstly, I am extremely happy that this exists; the world needs more MorMor. Second, I think you need to work on your formatting. I understand that you are not a native English speaker, so it is , but a lot of the mess-ups were rearrangings of letter order, something easily fixed. Perhaps you should get a beta? If it is necessary, I am willing to fill that role. Lastly, the story was extremely confusing. So, Seb was caught, be then he wasn't, and then there was a "Fink" person? And Jim wouldn't get him, because he wasn't fink? And then they were back at the pool scene? I was very confused. But here's the thing - It was wonderful. The parts where I could understand were brilliant and I loved them. This has so much potential, so don't give up!
A) So, Seb was caught, be then he wasn't, and then there was a "Fink" person?
a) During the story Seb flashbacks into the past when 'Fink'(just a faceless henchman from my imagination) was caught.
B) And Jim wouldn't get him, because he wasn't fink?
b) Jim meant he wouldn't kill Seb if he was in the situation that Fink was in right then.
The reason Jim said 'you're not fink' was because Jim likes Seb, but he didn't wanted to tell Seb 'Because I love you'
C) And then they were back at the pool scene?
c) After the court case Seb missed Jim a lot.
So Seb flashed back to the memory at the pool,where he thought he'd loose Jim, and where he noticed he loved Jim so much.
So..I hope this sloves your confussion..if it doen't feel free to PM me again! :)
And..I'm so sorry..can you tell me what is this "beta" thing?
Thanks again for reviewing!