hey ok I know some of you don't like to comment and some of you don't like this story so far but if you don't at least tell me and until I have at least 15 reviews by the end of November I will delete this story all I am asking is for what you think it could be good or bad but I really would like to know and on the last day of November I will post a new story called "The Devils Horn" and it will be a story about Charmed so when it goes up I hope you like it. just remember November 30th 2015 I need 15 reviews or the story goes down but 6 reviews and another chapter will be posted but do no just type lalalalalala and send it to me but if you do not like to review and don't want people to see the review PM me please