Sorry to say to any that enjoy this little story that it may be taken down due to the fact that people think that just because you put screen names with the dialog that you put no thought into your writing, even if it took all day to write it out and make sure that all the responses fit with the characters. I realize that I may be a little petty in this but it's rather insulting to have someone say that what I put a lot of thought and work into is the equivalent of a thrown together mess just because it's in a chat room setting. Also for any that really read more than the first chapter and didn't get it, there was a plot, it was about Itachi tormenting Sasuke and Sasuke plotting revenge against his brother for it in the form of making him believe that he was marrying Naruto without his brothers consent and Itachis obsessive need to control or guard his brother from things that he deemed to be unacceptable for his brother. I appreciate the people that actually saw my story as what it was, a creative and modern way to do a story in the setting of the show without a fight sequence taking place and just focusing on the banter and odd quarks of the characters and I was hoping to do more in trying to build up to a cease fire of sorts between Itachi and Sasuke and tho I wasn't going to make them lovers, as in other stories I was hoping to build up to them at least not hating eachothers guts so much, which is why it was taking me so long to continue as it's more challenging to do this in a chatroom setting than what some would call a more substantial content. But as a side note, I think it's insulting to say that just because I put it in a chatroom setting that I put no effort into this story or that I meant it to be 'void of plot, without attempt at plot and are more in line with random dialogue than with stories or poetry'. It is unfair to writers that you would say something so offensive about their writing just because it follows a certain template or that you would only seem to read one chapter of it and deem it to be thrown together without thought. Perhaps if you are so set on being "fair" to your writers then you should give them a chance to defend their stories and ask if there was a direction in which they are taking a certain story, regardless of what kind of template is used, ask if there was a point or an end that they were working towards before saying that there was no thought in it at all. I don't consider it fair to tell me that my story isn't acceptable because I used a chatroom instead of a sitting room as my setting and just because I don't interrupt the dialog to note that they're sipping tea or glaring at eachother shouldn't mean that there's any less to the story, I was trying to tell a story that people could use their imaginations to fill in what wasn't told to them, like how they burst into Sasukes apartment, noted in one of the other lines of random dialog, or how Itachi was displaying a slight break in the loss of his control in what his brother was deciding by building a cage to trap him in the living room, also noted in one of the lines of random dialogue. Before deeming it as random and senseless you should actually read it if you're so set on being fair.
