Hi Everyone! I hope you're all enjoying the story so far. I have had some bad mistakes I've noticed while re-reading my stories AFTER I posted it, and I apologize for them. I have updated them. This chapter is titled: Reason.
Disclaimer: I do not, I repeat do not, own Pokemon in any shape or form.
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AdorableMe:I thank you so much for the critiquing, and let me clarify some things. 1) The POV changing for each character may be confusing, but that is what the story is going to be like. I find it better to convey everything I need to, to make the plot go on as planned. 2) The last part is confusing, and I understand that. However, that part is (in a way) necessary. It has little parts and pieces of foreshadowing.
laurenkams: I appreciate your enthusiasm for the story! Here's the update! ^_^
Now, no more Author's Note until the end of the chapter. HAPPY READING!
-Leavmalyn
(Master's POV)
I watched as my new pawn walked into the armoury, all glum and depressed. I grinned with the malicious delight that was taking me over.
'Just the way I like them.'
I looked at my parter, also noticing the glint in her eyes.
"Ms. Redwood." I called out to our new pawn.
She didn't respond.
"Ms. Redwood!"
No response.
"SANETHA NAL KA MAN ALLY REDWOOD!" I commanded. It worked just the way it intended. She turned to face us, losing all sense of control over her mind and body.
"Master-sama, what is it you need?" She asked in a dead tone.
Her body language showed total allegiance. I absolutely loved it. However, she seemed to be fighting in her mind. I turned to Ms. Kurogawa. She seemed to know what I wanted, and nodded without looking in my direction. Moments later, my thoughts were transmitted with a message.
'May, you NEED to break this trance!' I growled in anger. I apparently didn't control Ms. Redwood fully just yet. Her conscious was still on THEIR side.
'No. This is where I belong. Master-sama will kill all my loved ones if I don't follow.'
I was pleased with this. She knows where she is needed, and where she needs to forget EVERYTHING. Including her precious loved ones. She knew the cost of breaking free from this.
"Ms. Redwood. You are needed in the A-Unit of the Hoenn region. Birch will be your commander, and you WILL listen to him as directed. If not..." I stopped there, smiling. Ms. Redwood instantly froze, knowing what is to happen if she disobeys.
(May's POV)
"SANETHA NAL KA MAN ALLY REDWOOD!" No! Not this again. Why must they use this every time I come here. In an instant, the trickling feeling of my sense of everything right disappearing came. I tried to fight it as best as I could.
'No! May, this isn't right. You must fight it as hard as you can. You can not turn into the monster they have turned you into!' My conscious screamed.
'SANETHA NAL KA MAN. SANETHA NAL KA MAN. SANETHA NAL KA MA-.' It's hypnotic effect won over every logical thought I had about fighting. My body relaxed into the warrior position I always assumed when I am here. My mind became empty, except my conscious, who was locked up in a jail cell, still fighting.
I walked to Master-sama and Mistress-sama like a zombie. Master-sama and Mistress-sama both stood there, with the malicious, greedy, hungry and empty aura they always gave out. Out of pure instinct, my body lowered onto one knee, signifying my so-called respect for them.
"Master-sama, what is it you need?" My old self could hear the emptiness in my voice. I could even hear it. My voice was absolutely dead, emotionless. And there is nothing I can do about it.
'May! Snap out of it!' My conscious wailed.
I didn't respond to it. Suddenly, I could feel something enter my head. It kinda felt like a worm entering my ear, and eating a part of my brain in order to gain information.
'May, you NEED to break this trance!' Conscious tried to persuade me again into breaking. However, she didn't know the consequences of this.
Blame my stupidity.
Also the anger I could feel running through Mistress-sama's veins.
'No. This is where I belong. Master-sama will kill all my loved ones if I don't follow.' I tried to reason back, only to be interrupted by Master-sama's so-familiar voice.
"Ms. Redwood. You are needed in the A-Unit of the Hoenn region. Commander Birch will be your unit's leader, and you WILL listen to him as directed. If not..." Oh, I know the consequences of disobeying, and worst than the abuse I'm going through. I looked to Mistress-sama, seeing her chestnut hair in the dim light glowing. Master-sama's green eyes were glowing with a hungry glint
But Birch? Really? Why him?
Why Brendan Birch of ALL people?
Author's Note: Hi everyone! Sorry for the kinda late update. I hope you like this, as this isn't the best writing I have done. The previous three chapters were previously written back in 2011, but I didn't bring myself to write Chapter 4 until now, so I apologize for the change in style. I also apologize if this is crappy, but it is necessary.
Questions:Does anybody know who Master-sama and Mistress-sama are? The hints are there.
Why do you think Brendan Birch is here?
Please do not answer on reviews. PM me the answers.
Translation:SANETHA NAL KA MAN ALLY REDWOOD- "You are never going to turn, Ally Redwood."
Language: Danmar- The Ancient language of Dakuriarimu.
Chapter 5:Chapter 5 will be uploaded on Monday.
See you in the next chapter!
-Leavmalyn
