YAY! Update. lol I'm updating in the MORNING this time. It's like, 'bout 9:30. I'm missing school to do THIS lol I care about this then school. : Parents concern: NAW jus' joking. I have a dentist appointment in a half hour and I wanted to add in a couple more chapters. You don't know how many times I fix, edit, go over... Bein' an 8th grader I have to make sure it's the best I can do.
SHOUT OUTS:
AJMS- Love ur stories! lol thanks for reading mine. :-D
Carmen- Wazzup! Yeah. I'll update on fanart-central. I'll either draw a pic of Mike, or Erol. I got an evil idea for HIM. heheh.
HERE'S THE CHAPTER:
Jak and I did some missions together, and this time I didn't get hurt. Eventually, we made our ways into the city, and met up with Torn. I never spoke a word, never even made eye contact. I was simply too descusted with him at the time, because of his brutal actions.
After a few other missions and stuff, we were assigned to destroy dark eco things in this metal head invested ground that smelled of rotten cabbages and something else I didn't want to know.
One by one, Jak climbed up, and flew around the place destroying the dark eco things I don't know what it's called. At the end on the last one, dark eco shot up out of nowhere and penetrated through him. Agony and pain tortured Jak's veins sounding like he had a bad stomach ache. I was a few feet behind him when he transformed into his dark side. Apparently he got some dark eco powers with his fists Jak blasted the wall infront of us with his eco powers. He still stayed his form, and glanced over at me.
Ready to transform back to normal, a metal head pounced on him, which angered him, attacking the metal head. Daxter was thrown against a wall, and passed out.
"Daxter!" I cried.
SHIT. This isn't gonna come out very pretty!
I got my attention back on Jak when he was fighting more metal heads. I took out my gun and blasted the rest. He was still in his dark form, and was still hungry for blood. My heart started racing in fear. Not in fear for Jak, but in fear for my own safety and his. "
Jak! I know you're in there behind that monster that's taken over you! Follow my voice, Jak!" I yelled out, trying to get to the man I knew in that creature.
Dark Jak snarreled, glaring at me. My body started to tremble as he started to slowly come after me. Suddenly, he sprinted in attempt to kill me, and I started to run backwards until I ran into a wall.
I godda get his attention!
As Dark Jak jumped at me snarreling, I launched quickly, grabbing his wrists. Gravity pulled him closer, naturally, and my lips pressed on his. I kissed Jak deeply as he abruptly halted in shock with a stunned stare, turning normal again slowly. He closed his eyes and kissed back. Awkwardly, I looked at him funny when he wouldn't quit smooching on me. I let go, and pushed him away. He looked at me with a dumbly. I blushed, and scratched the back of my head looking away.
"I.. Had to do something to catch your attention."
"Is there a hold up, Jak?"
Torn's voice suddenly popped up out of the TV-like communicator thingy. "Not at all. Why do you ask?" Jak said casually as I backed off slowly. "Its taking you a little long for you to meet back up with us." Torn explained boredly. Jak looked at me and smiled, "I just had to go to the bathroom. Laona and I are on our way."
"I need you guys to go up to the war factory, and find a way to destroy it. You may even find who's in charge of this mess."
Torn said roughly as Jak's communicator went back into his pouch. I sighed, and put my hands on my waist looking down. Jak did all the work, destroying the security devices and getting into the factory.
Time to work.
We made our way through, and then found ourselves in a giant circular room. The way out was blocked.
It's a trap.
"I don't have a good feeling about this." I said under my breath. Daxter looked uneasy, seeing that it was too quiet. Jak said sharply, "Stay alert." He glanced over to the trans pad. It was guarded by jots of electricity flowing around it. Suddenly, Erol appeared above us. I looked up at him, and quickly looked down feeling guilty, not daring to look at him. His body was completely different.
Only half of his face survived, along with his right hand, and even that part was scarred. His body looked half KG Bot, half dark precursor.
In other words, it was robotic. "I've made some new friends, wanting to help me conquer this puny little planet!" He snapped. Jak glared at him, "You're talking to the dark makers?" He glanced over at me, seeing that I didn't look very comfortable. I was standing distant away from everyone.
"Toughen up, Laona. Show some back bone. Can't face your problems? It's not like you to back down on your apponent." He teased slyly.
That irritated Jak, and he walked infront of me, in a way of sort of protecting me from him. "Stay away from her!" Erol cocked his eyebrow.
"Oh?"
"Shut your yap, robo butt!" Daxter snapped, joining in with Jak. I sighed shaking my head. "I've been given the opportunity to wield a power so great the precursors cannot even control! Don't fret. You won't be able to see what I turn this little planet into. Maybe a rock, or a floating puddle of slag.. OR NOTHING AT ALL! Complete oblivion! So hard to choose." He frantically explained, with a bunch of devious annoying moves.
"I won't let you do this!" Jak barked, waving out his arms accepting a challenge, ready for what he has for him.
For some reason, Erol had one of his bots quickly sweep me up and carry me to him. I was completely calm, and didn't say a word. Jak was real suprized, almost stunned, seeing that I wasn't struggling. I stumbled, landing on the ledge next to where Erol was standing. The battle began, between Jak, and Erol's KG bots and dark precursors. All I did was watch blankly, feeling sorry for myself. I looked at Erol, who seemed to enjoy this.
"Isn't there anything in this world you conciter worth saving?" I begged quietly, out of knowhere. Then he shot some missles at Jak, but sadly for him, he missed. Erol gritted his teeth. I blinked, "Hello?" He looked down at me, and frowned.
"What is there. A cold, harsh, unloved, miserable life? A world that only gives pain? I don't think it deserves a chance." He said lowly.
Oh wow, half of his cyber brain really got a screw loose!
I grabbed his right arm, and pulled him down to where he literally down next to me. He glared at me. I said in his ear, "You're not unloved, Erol. You shouldn't be miserable because the world doesn't just give pain. It also gives life and joy. I know that deep down, the Erol I know, wouldn't destroy something so precious. For example, your love of racing. What about that...?"
WTF did I jus' say that?
He frowned, and with his left arm, shot some more missles at Jak and failed to hit him, again. We were far back enough to where at Jak's point of view, he couldn't see us. He grabbed my waist, pulling me closer to his side, standing up at his normal height.
"DIE eco freak!" He snarreled, shooting more missles.
"Erol stop!" I cried.
He ignored me, shooting more at Jak. "Shit man! When will this guy quit!" Daxter wailed. "I don't know, but he's really pissing me off." Jak grumbled, knocking out a dark precursor. Erol whispered in my ear slyly, "Once I destroy this planet, I'll spare you and we can move on to a different planet."
I backed away.
"No matter how much I love, and care about you, Erol, I'm not going to be involved in your destruction."
He grabbed me, "I'll make you then." Erol whaled. Out of knowhere, Jak shot an explosive at US. I screamed when it exploded, and to my suprise, Erol saved me from the blast.
"What the f-k!" I complained.
This continued on for about 5 minutes, until Erol got hit again for the 4th time in the row. He was slouching trying to catch his breath, holding onto his shoulder of his left arm. He looked PISSED. The last mini-bomb stopped infront of us, and I sprinted, full speed once it exploded.
Erol was blown onto a wall, and I nearly fell off the high ledge. I was dangling only by my arms. Jak rushed over towards me, avoiding falling into the new holes in the ground, due to the destruction. He raised up his hands and said, "Jump! I'll catch you!" Erol fell onto the ground as I jumped into Jak's arms.
A light eco crystal fell of him, as he was heading towards the exit. Jak was holding me bridal style. I smirked, closing my eyes, as he grinned. Jak finally noticed Erol was getting close to the only get away, and he let go of me. We started chasing him until he disappeared in the portal.
"Damn! He got a way." Jak mumbled. Suddenly, something nearly hit us from above. "Jak! The sky is falling!" Daxter panicked. We ran towards the exit, and Jak bent over quickly and took the light eco crystal on the way out.
OOhhhhhh! lol I bet AJMS is happy now. I got Erol in here! The ending was a lil bit corny but oh well. I did my best. I'm gonna update again very soon. Prolly in 10 min, prolly after school. Depends if I finished fixing the other chapter... lol
