Kay Sorry for the First chapter. I am posting new chapters like crazy rather then working on the story. Won't post till later! PLEASE REVIEW! This is my first story posted on here and I want feed back on how it looks.
Chapter 3
Amberkit and Ashkit were playing with moss from Brightheart's bedding. Leafkit watched them catch and throw the moss ball.
Leafkit stalked over to Amberkit,
"Can I play?" She Mumbled,
Amberkit glanced at Ashkit, who shrugged.
"Ok," Amberkit meowed nodding
Amberkit threw the moss to the other side of the nursery; Amberkit was 2 moons older than Leafkit making her faster,
Ashkit got to the moss first swiping it up, Leafkit jumped on her pining her down, Ashkit cried for help, Leafkit sunk her claws into Ashkit's neck,
Something knocked her off, Amberkit stood over Ashkit calling for help.
Cinderheart, Daisy, Dovewing, Brightheart, and Bumblestripe ran over.
"What's wrong?" Cried Cinderheart seeing Ashkit,
Just then a large dark brown tabby rushed in, "What happened," The cat meowed, "I heard a cry,"
He looked down at Ashkit; his eyes stretched open wide, "Take her to Jayfeather, now!"
Cinderheart rushed to the medicine den and in moments she was back,
The big cat sat down, "Amberkit can you tell us what happen?"
Amberkit looked wide eyed at the big cat,
What is so special about him? She wondered
"Yes, Bramblestar," Amberkit meowed
Leafkit shuddered, Bramblestar! Oh no this can't be good
"Me and Ashkit were playing with moss, and Leafkit wanted to play to so we let her, then Ashkit got the moss and Leafkit…"
Bramblestar looked down, "It's okay she's going to be fine."
Amberkit closed her eyes like she was trying to block out the memories. "Leafkit jumped on top of her but instead of letting her go she sunk her claws into her neck." She opened her eyes "You almost killed her!" She screeched looking at Leafkit
"So, what," Leafkit said with a shrug what can they do about it?
Bramblestar looked down, "So what?"
"Why is it a big deal?" Leafstar rolled her eyes
Bramblestar narrowed his eyes before leaving,
"You are not allowed to leave the nursery again in till you're an apprentice." Dovewing announced
Leafkit jumped up, "That's not fair!"
"After almost killing Ashkit I'm sure that's not all Bramblestar has planned for you." Dovewing said her eyes narrowing at her kit
Leafkit stomped away and sat down while Brightheart swept her kits close to her side.
She sat down in the corner by herself. They all act like I'm a monster, she thought to herself before falling asleep, what if I am? Leafkit thought as she shuddered.
