Okay so I am going to stop numbering the reviews it takes to long. So I will keep replying just without the numbers! Okay people on with it.

Meli31295: Ya, but do you think she is in character? Maddie, I mean.

Daniella Violet Moon: Okay lets reply here, 1)True, but they were both in another form, maybe if I used the peeler on someone who wasn't in another form, it would kill them. *shrugs* Who knows. 2) I am proud to say this chapter was almost a full page long! *dances* 3) Finally curse those loopholes 4) I like your psychic you

Namara Jane Knight: *blinks* Why would Maddie be reading my fanfiction?

Daniphantom149: lol wow you really care about Dani

Thelittlemonster17: Lol, in Danny's defense he doesn't know yet

Turkeyhead987: No please not your rubber bands of DOOM! *face palms* I've been hanging out with the Box Ghost too much, stupid Ember.

xBlue-RoseX: *thinks* You know you are the first person to say my chapters are short and then give me an idea of how to make them longer, thanks.

Kirara the great: Lol *splashes water on your face* You need to wake up! I UPDATED!

BeingGirl: Okay, I'll try in fact that is my Summer goal. Longer chapters

SammiPhantom: Lol, wow weird dream. I had a weird dream once that Superman's girlfriend (forgot her name) crashed down to Earth in a rocket and came out wearing bunny ears and tossing around talking vegetables and hopping around. Then this lady came out of her house and screamed, "Its an alien!" Then fainted, then she got in a really fancy car with Superman and drove off after he said, "here let me hold your bunnies ears and talking veggies" it was so weird

Anyways after that rant, I just have to say that I am glad that you think that Dani is just right and I loved your song, very creative!

Yolandah-da-Hedgehoggu: Thanks, I am glad you like it

Nycorrall: Lol, I agree everyone always stops just when things are getting good *shrugs* must be an author thing

Desiree Phantom: Yep faster updates during the summer, I hope at least

Ghostfinder: Glad you liked the story

Mary Penelope: Yep good ol' Danny, although saving the day, may have costs. Dun dun dun

Chapter 4: A Deal

Maddie waited for Phantom to show up, she had told him to meet her here and that she would shoot him that she only wanted to talk.

She smiled when she saw a small black and white figure float down to the ground, upsetting to small dew drops on the grass and causing them to fall.

"Well," Phantom said slowly, looking her up and down for any weapons. "I'm here, what do you want."

"Me, nothing. It's what you want," Slowly she grabbed a picture from her pocket and showed it to Phantom.

He gasped and pulled it from her hand, "Dani!" Then he did something that surprised Maddie, he grabbed her by her shirt collar and flew up to her face. "Where is she? What have you done to her?"

Maddie blinked, she had not been expecting this, Phantom rarely hurt humans, even she knew this, but she managed to put on an emotionless face and say, "Me? Nothing yet, your little Dani is fine." She laughed silently to herself. "At least for now." With that she kicked Phantom in the stomach, making him drop her and gasp for air, wait did ghosts breath? Never mind that, Maddie focus. But that was harder then it looked, lying there are on the ground Phantom looked so human like. Finally she walked away saying over her shoulder, "If you want to see your little ghost friend again spook, I suggest you turn yourself in. It's a simple deal, you for her. You have two days before we decided to experiment on her instead of you." Then she was gone.

Maybe she should have stayed, she would've noticed the pain, betrayal and fear in Phantom's, emerald green eyes and he cried glowing tears. One hand clutching the photo of Dani strapped to the table, the other his stomach, where a black and blue bruise was forming. With a gasp of pain he slowly stood up, his eyes glowing brightly from anger.

"Don't worry Dani," he said softly looking at the picture. "I'll save you, even if I die trying."

With that he shakily flew off into the air ignoring the pain in his stomach. He had good-byes to say, in case things went wrong. Then he would save Dani, even if it meant turning himself in to his parents, even if it meant dying.

He still cried softly as he flew to his first stop, Sam's he had important things to tell her, tell her before he was gone, possibly forever. He could already see her crying as he explained, already see her trying to talk him out of it, but he had decided what he had to do and he was not backing down.

YES I DID! And they said it could not be done! I made this chapter almost a whole PAGE long! *dances* I am so happy! I could seriously die! Yes! Yes! YES! Okay that's enough let's get on with this.

So I did review shorts (with other people) through out my last story, this time I think I'll so something new.

*Danny walks into his room and sees me*

Danny: Um who are you

Me: *laughs evilly* The new controller of your life!

Danny: *blinks then shrugs* Okay then as long as you are controlling me could you give me better grades, and a later curfew

Me: *blinks, reaptedly* Oookay not exactly what I thought someone would say when I told then that I was now controlling their life. *shrugs* Oh well. *goes to computer and types it so that Danny gets better grades and a longer curfew* I guess I owe it to him, pretty soon he's going to want more then just better grades. *evil laugh*

Danny: What was that?

Me: NOTHING! Please review!

Danny: *looks around* Who are you talking to?