A Day in Karakura
Here I am again giving you another chapter, and less than 24 hours after the last one! (Because they are both quite short)
Thankyou to the five people who have so far reviewed the last chapter (ichigos future wife, fyrinichi, charliechick, Haddrell and Captain Shinji) as I have said before I really appreciate the time you spend reviewing.
fyrinichi mentioned that they cant imagine baby bubble being translated into such long sentences, I did this on purpose. In this story "waa" could mean anything from a simple 'yes' to something much longer than that that I can't come up with right now.
Haddrell said they would have liked to see more of Yoruichi's photo's… well who's to say there won't be…
Anyways on to chapter four…
It was a busy day in Karakura Town, the residents went about their business just as they would on any other day. Janet, the new employee of the bakery in down town Karakura had just sold the first double cream double choc crispy cream bun of the day to Mr. James Coonwell the CEO of the Karakura Town bank, who despite his previous medical conditions could not resist this tempting bun for an early lunch. Mr. Coonwell thanked Janet and left the store, the bun in a paper bag held like a precious jewel in his sausage-like hands.
He was just rounding the corner when he was nearly flattened by fourteen Jake – or Jay as he was to his friends – riding his skateboard at top speed through the busy street. "Bloody kid!" he yelled as Jay continued on his way down the street, making many people jump out of his way "Why aren't you at school?!"
Jay heard this but the idea of him stopping and explaining himself to some fat old fart was laughable. How was it any of his business that I'd decided not to go to school? Jay thought angrily. With an abusive father and a mother who had long since abandoned him how could he even think of something as mundane as school? Jay was so absorbed in his own thoughts that he did not notice the orange cat that had walked into his path until it was almost to late. "shit" he said curving at the last moment to miss the cat. There was a small bump followed by a loud hiss. Must have got its tail Jay thought oh well, it's not my problem. You have to look after yourself in this world, and that's no different for cats. Jay barley slowed as he continued down the road.
The orange cat ran to the near by bush and after checking that the area was safe inspected its tail for any damage that idiot might have done. "Mr. Whiskers! Mr. Whiskers! Are you ok?" Mr. Whiskers looked up to see the four-year-old child of his owners running towards him.
"Meoow" he stretched, walking towards the girl, maybe she could help his tail?
"You poor thing!" the girl said picking Mr. Whiskers up around the belly. "If I ever find that guy he's gonna wish he'd never been born!" she exclaimed.
"Is everything ok honey?" came a voice from behind the girl. She looked behind her to see her grandma and two year old brother walking towards her.
"Some kid ran over Mr. Whiskers tail!" she said jumping from one foot to the other while holding the cat above her head.
"Kitty kay?" asked her little brother while holding his grandma's hand.
"He will be once I catch that bastard and~"
"Mizuho!" her Granny said in shock "I don't know where you heard that word from and I don't want to here it again. Its not something a young lady should say. Now lets bring Mr. Whiskers inside. Come on Keigo" she said scooping up the little boy. As Mizuho grabbed onto her Grannies hand a funny tearing sound could be heard and about fifty meters above them a black line appeared. This line seemed to be ripped open by some unknown force making a large black hole in the sky. What was even stranger than this was that not little Keigo or Mizuho nor their Granny or Mr. Whiskers, not Jay who was now riding through the park or Mr. Coonwell sitting down at his desk to enjoy his high fatty lunch nor Janet who was organizing to meet up with the hot young guy who had just walked into the shop, not any of Karakura's many other residents noticed this hole in the sky and none of them noticed as two figures clothed in white emerged from this hole.
So what did you all think? Bit of a cliffhanger? Maybe you can guess who they are. Also you probably noticed Keigo and his older sister Mizuho. its ok if you didn't recognize any of the other characters – actually I wouldn't expect you to since I made them up.
Anyways this chapter was a bit of an experiment for me (haven't done one like it before) so please let me know how it went.
Will update ASAP, but have some UNI stuff coming up so it could be a little while. (I do have it written down in my note book - working on chapter 9 now - so dont worry it will be up soon enough, I just have to find time to type it up)
Thanks for Reading
Rhi
