A/N THIS IS VERY VERY VERY VERY IMPORTANT!
I wanted to clear some shit out.
Firstly, I would like to thank you all that have reviewed and all that stuff. 2 reviews, and +- 4 (I didn't count) follows and favourites or whatever it's called is AMAZING in half a day :D
Both the reviews were asking for more, but you have to understand, there is only so much I can do in a day ;)
Secondly, I would like to have you guys send me reviews with ideas for the story. Every time I get one, I will probably find a way of incorporating it into the story.
And lastly, I would like to list the couples.
-Tris & Tobias (obviously) – Living together
-Christina & Will – boyfriend & girlfriend
-Zeke & Shauna – Living together
-Uriah & Forever Alone – Married (XD)
And I don't know about Lynn & Marlene. Should I make Marlene go out with Uri? Or with Lynn making her a lesbian? Should I make new characters? Send me reviews what I should do!
Also, because the last one was so short, this one is larger to make up for it :D
Chapter 4
Tris' PoV
We sit down where Uriah told us to.
"I call dibs on first question!" Uriah immediately says when we sit down.
Zeke mumbles something about how it's his house so he should go first.
Shaunda must've heard because she lays her hand on his leg, to calm him down.
Uriah continues. "Lynn, C or D?"
"Dauntless" she answers. Not good. Uriah already has a dangerous grin on his face.
"Go out into the pit and propose to the first woman you see."
Lynn becomes a bit pale but she does eventually go.
"I'm going with her!" I say.
"So am I!" Chris says, smiling.
Once in the pit she walks around. The first woman she sees is someone really tall, muscular, with pink and red hair. Lynn becomes even paler. She looks over to us with a face saying "Please help"
Christina and I both pull out our phones and put the camera on, smiling.
She walks over to the woman and taps on her shoulder. She turns around and now we see a large scar running down from her left eye to the right-hand corner of her mouth.
Lynn gulps.
"Yes, Ma'am?" the woman asks.
"Ummm well you see I kind of always had a crush on you," she starts going down on her right knee.
The woman raises one eyebrow.
"and I have always wanted to ask this but I never had the guts…"
She pulls the rock out of her pocket that Uriah gave her.
"Will you marry me?" She asks, obviously terribly afraid.
"Fuck off." The woman slaps Lynn in the face. Lynn falls to the ground holding her head.
We lift her up and bring her back inside.
Once we are back inside it's Lynn's turn.
"Four? Candor or Dauntless?" she has a determined look in her eyes. Tobias must have noticed it because he says "Truth"
"PANSYCAKE!" Uriah yells before he can shut him up.
Lynn mumbles something and then asks "What are you most afraid of?"
Tobias pulls his shirt off.
Now it's his turn.
"Dare me to show the clip of Lynn I just made to everyone" I whisper in his ear, but only so quiet so he can hear it.
"Tris, Candor Or Dauntless?"
"Dauntless" I say, Grinning.
"I dare you to show the clip of Lynn you just made to everyone"
I do as he asks and everyone laughs at the sight of Lynn saying "Will you marry me?"
Now it's my turn.
"Christina"
"Dauntless!"
"I dare you to go out into the centre of the pit with Will and make out."
She looks over at Will and he shrugs.
They both go out into the centre of the pit and start to make out.
The faces of the people that walk past them are priceless.
After a minute or two Zeke yells "Get a room!" as their signal to stop.
Now Christina is determined to get payback.
"Tris. C. or D." she says with a second in between every word.
"Dauntless."
"I dare you to play seven minutes in heaven with Four."
"What is seven minutes in heaven?" I ask.
Everyone stares at me.
"What?!"
"Abnegation" Tobias says. That alone apparently is enough to make them stop staring.
"You stand inside a private room making out for seven minutes. After those seven minutes are over, someone alarms you and you come out." Shaunda says.
I look to Tobias. He nods and grabs my hand. We go inside a closet.
(A/N Okay so I don't know if when I describe making out in detail is rated T or M but IF it is rated M then here's your warning. Please leave the answer in the reviews!)
My lips find his immediately. He asks for entrance at my lower lip and I grant him. I swing my legs around him. he leans me against the wall. My hands go through his hair and eventually under his shirt. He grabs my legs with his legs so I am leaning against the wall but he has his hands free to put on my waist. He kisses me behind my ear and I let out a soft moan. He continues to kiss me on my chin, in my neck, tracing a line down to my tattoo. He comes back to my lips, but instead of asking for entrance he just barges in. we continue to kiss like this until Zeke abruptly opens the door. Tobias doesn't put me down though, he continues to kiss me and I kiss him back. He stops when everyone yells "GET A ROOM!". he puts me down and we casually walk back to our seating places.
I'm suddenly feeling very tired.
"Can we go home?" I ask Tobias.
"Why?"
"I'm tired. I want to sleep."
"Okay." He turns to the group.
"Tris and I are going back to our apartment. We'll see you guys later!" and with that, he throws me over his shoulder. I giggle but don't fight back. I know I can't win this.
