Hey everyone! I know that I haven't updated this story in a while…okay in a looooooooooong time and I'm sorry. I saw the second film and it was AMAZING. So while that was made I have a few changes to the story and plotline….I think….that I want to make.
***** Kira's name will now be changed to Sunny, and her background will change:
She was part of a experiment made by the Primes a long time ago where the Primes took human children (mostly orphans, but some that show potential will be kidnapped). Sunny just happened to be one that was kidnapped.
So the experiments that the Primes did was that they tampered with the DNA of humans to see what they could change, mostly, they would change the humans to be part robotic/animal/human. It's really hard to explain, but hopefully I can be a VERY good writer and write it.
Megatron and Optimus used to have a past together, they used to be nice, and it wasn't until The Fallen and Decepticons that they were torn apart. It was then that Sunny was the peace bringer.
So…yeah..
I hope to really get this story going good and well. I know my other chapters have been…well…really crappy in my opinion, and it was because I wanted to go too fast through this story and I was worried that if I didn't get down what I was thinking, I would forget. So I'm sorry for that.
I now want to make this story REALLY good for not only the sake of you readers, but also me. My goal as a (now junior in high school) is to publish my first book before I graduate. It is in the process and I have started it, but with fan fiction, I think it exercises my mind and writing skills. So reviews and criticism (CONSTRUCTIVE) is needed.
Also, not that you guys have time to worry about my book, if you want to read what I have down, you can PM your email to me and I will email it to you, but that's assuming that you guys are interested.
Please lend me your guidance everyone! Happy trails!!!
TRANSFORMERS RULE!!!
