Sorry it took so long.I was taking a break from this story to get some ideas and luckily I've been playing the new mortal combat .
HOPE YOU KNOW WHAT THIS MEANS.(This is an old comment )
CURRENT COMMENT: I haven't really got to finish the story due to internet issues and the fact that i could not use my computer nor a I can use my computer now and hopefully no grammar mistakes since i,m not using a phone.
SIDE NOTE: I FINISHED THIS STORY TWO TIMES ALREADY AND BEFORE I EVER GET THE CHANCE TO SAVE THE INTERNET STOPS AND I HAVE TO START OVER THIS IS THE THIRD TIME I HAVE TO DO THIS OVER AND I'M GETTING FED UP!
so enjoy...
Hinatas eyes went wide as a big explosion went off inside the cave, she closed eyes bracing herself for death but what she expected didn't happen. Hinata opened her eyes and found that she could not move.
Hinatas Pov...
"W-why cant I-I move and why am I upside down. Hinata said to herself" Hinata looked around to see if there was a way out of her situation and while she was doing that she felt very uncomfortable. "Oh! there's a seal over there by t-the entrance of the cave, now if only i can just ..."AHH!" Hinata screamed. While she was trying to move she felt herself start to become more restricted and her body felt even more uncomfortable almost in pain.
"Ugh, w-what is this"Hinata said. "Bayakugan" as hinata used her bayakugan she saw that there were chakra coils around her keeping her suspended in the air in a now painful position. As she looked on further she saw it was absorbing her chakra letting her bayakugan last only for a little while.W-what am I going to do ,I-I have to g-get out of here."
Normal Pov...
(sigh) Just then hinata heard footsteps coming."Well,well look at what we have here, little miss hyuuga got caught in one of my traps. I thought the hyuuga's were supposed to be able to see everything, and to think your supposed to be the heir to the hyuuga clan a standard ninja wouldn't get caught in something so simple"Naruto said with a smug grin taunting Hinata.
Hinatas face was getting red with embarrasment, each word Naruto said bringing down her confidence. Hinata was about to retort but decided not to say anything." W-whats the matter c-cat got your tounge"Naruto said thoroughly enjoying mocking her. Hinata was even redder ,her eyes brimming with tears"D-dont cry the last t-thing ill d-do is cry in front of him."Hinata said. Naruto walked over to the side of the cave and took off the seal making hinata fall to the ground with a thud. When he saw that she didn't make an effort to move he went over to rest the firewood down.
Hinata was in her thoughts berating herself for making a mistake like that."Y-your so stupid. stupid,stupid,stupid! how could fall a simple trap like pathetic, no wonder the clan thinks your useless,even your father thinks your not fit to be an heir." By this time hinata was getting depressed and was losing her sense of resolve.
While hinata was doing this she didn't realize Naruto was stooped down in front of her. Naruto flicked hinata in the head making come back to the real world. When Hinata realized naruto was inches from her face she turned her head the other way, Naruto noticed this but ignored it." You were so busy looking down on yourself you didnt hear me talking to You. "As I was saying are you hungry?" Hinata looked at naruto suprised by his question."Wasn't he just insulting me awhile ago? w-why dose he suddenly care if im hungry or not."hinata thought to herself. As if reading her mind naruto spoke up and said'Look its not as if im worried or anything, I can honestly care less if you decided to starve yourselfI just thought i would ask.
Hinata then answered back a little more annoyed"Then why did you heal me and bring me back here".Naruto didn,t answer he only got up from his spot from in front of hinata and went to get the fire started while she stared him down. Hinata sat patiently still expecting naruto to say something, when she thought that he wasnt going to answer he said something."You will know soon enough, but until then if I were you I would focus on getting my energy and chakra back, were still enemies after all" he said with his back turned.
The conversation ended with a thick silence and hinata was confused to no end. Naruto started to put separate sticks of fish on the fire to heat up,while they waited they sat away from each other not bothering to look the other way. Since there was nothing to do hinata decide she would try to get up but found herself back on the floor. Hinata tried again but only found herself standing for two seconds then falling down again."W-why cant I move?"she asked Naruto."The chakra coils took all your chakra and also most of your energy so you wouldn't be able to do much of anything except move your head and your arms, but im actually shocked you can move at all let alone stand you should have been unable to move but it looks like theres more to you than i thought" Naruto said with a spark of intrest in his eyes that soon went away.
"W-well c-can y-you help me walk"Hinata asked"At hearing Naruto nearly laughed but instead shot a smug grin"Help you?why would i do that,how naive can you be?Youll end up running away if I did."he said."I wont I-I promise."said hinata. Naruto looked at hinata with empty eyes and said" Help yourself im not here to help some hyuuga brat."said naruto.
Hinata was taken aback and a little annoyed by narutos comment and decide to do just as he said ,she realized that no one was gonna help her and most of all no one cared she would just have to get through this by herself. Hinata started to drag herself by the fire as naruto looked on."What are you doing?"he asked. HInata ignored him, as she got by the fire she picked herself up and got her piece of fish to eat.
Both her and naruto to ate in silence until hinata started to speak up."Naruto honestly w-what happened to you? Why did you decide to do this?".Naruto stopped eating and looked at hinata with sad eyes, hinata looked surprised and when naruto saw this he quickly hid it and decided to take a walk .What hinata saw in narutos eyes was enough to tell her that naruto is still the same and is doing this for a reason even if she didn't know.
It was night now and hinata was waiting for naruto to get back, she thought maybe she could change narutos mind and bring him back if she talked to him some more. Hinata was still waiting and naruto still had not come back so she decided she would try and get up. While hinata struggled to stand she finally did and after two steps she immediately passed out."Huh whats going o...on..."were the last words hinata managed to say before she passed out
...Somewhere else...
Were getting closer
Hooded girl: oh really i cant wait I want to see the passion of red every where(with a dreamy look)
Unknown Girl: your so sick in the head, i prefer the cracking it feels so good to hear them
Hooded girl:OO look there are some huge red berries over there
Boss:Really?
Unknown girl: What ARE YOU GUYS DOING DONT EAT THAT
...POOOOOFFFFFF...
Unknown girl: great now where held back because you two idiots decided to conspicuous looking see how your parents say dont talk to strangers,well the same thing applies to food DONT EAT CONSPICUOUS LOOKING FOOD!why am i the only smart only smart one.
Hooded girl:yesshh(Theyre faces are completely swollen)
Boss:itsh oursh dynamicsh
Unknown girl:Face palm
It honestly would have been longer but ive had to do this chapter over so many times the whole storyline of this got altered but this is the longest chapter though but not as long as i would of liked.
