Dude! I have not been on fan fiction for almost a year! Lol

But I was reading my story and I noticed a lot of grammar. But I'm now a 7th grader becoming a 8th grader! Awesome, so I know a lot more now, so hopefully it'll help a lot.

But yes, yes, we have a new character coming into the story she's known as Princessdarkfairy and her name in this story is Tsuki [I love this name!].

So here it is :

The Akatsuki were beyond happy to get out of the jail cell, thanks to Karla.

Everyone were far away located at a pond near the village hidden in the Grass. Some bathed in the pond while others argue with each other. But for Karla; she was just relaxing in a little hot spring near by, taking a load off the horrible day thanks to the squirrels.

Without knowing that she had someone spyingon her while she was in the spring.

Then the bushes near by began to move and shake. Karla swung her head around examining her surroundings. With a pat on the head she ignored it.

More rustling sounded from the trees now then a yell. "Shit! Shit! Oww!"

Falling out of the trees came Hidan. Crashing to the ground, hard and heavy. Yellingand cuss words flooded his mouth.

"You asshole!" Karla jumped out grabbing her clothes and putting them on [hint, hint, she was in her underwear].

"No! Don't get dressed! Damn!" Hidan held his head in pain.

Karla finally got her clothes on and she was marching to the pond, where the others were.

Hidanbegan chasing after her trying his best not to let her get to them. "Bitch, get back here!"

Karla turned around with a abrupt stop. Hidankept runningtowards her, when he got on top of her; he ran right through. Karla turned around with an angry glare plastered across her face.

Hidancouldn't stop running. Well…….not until he ran directly into a tree. He collapsed on the ground holding his bleeding nose. "You F-ing bitch." he breathed.

Karla teasingly walked by him and entered the pond area. Searching for Pein.

After a minute or two she spotted him and marched up to him. "You need to control your freaking little horn-dog or your's!" she pointed her pointing finger at him [I don't know what's it called, I forget, lol].

Peinturned fully to her direction with a very confused look upon his face. But after he thought about it she knew exactly what she was talkingabout, specially with the wet hair of hers. "Oh. Well that's how the world goes for him. I can't do much about it."

Karla's eyes lit with anger "You, need to control that son of a bitch!" then she jumped into the trees and jumped away.

Hidancame running towards the Akatsuki, still holding his bleeding nose "Don't believe that skank! She's lie'n I tell ya, lie'n!"

"Hidan," Pein stared at him emotionlessly. "Did you spy on her?"

"Hell with that! That girl is transparent!" Hidan shivered. "Like a ghost."

Konan walked up behind Pein and crossed her arms. "What are you talkingabout? There's no such thing."

Hidan's eyes widen as if he were being possessed by some type of demon. "That girl-I-I-I-she ran right through me!"

Peinlet out a sigh and rubbed his head. "Stop making up stuff." and walked away holding the map in this right hand.

Later on:

It was night time and every one sitting in a circle around a brightly lit fire. Itachi was reading his yoai while Deidara was makingsculpts or animal with a humming melody sounding. Hidan was climbing up a tree trying to torment a nest of baby birds while the mama bird was gone. Sasori was laying on the ground by Kakazu was reading a book on how to be a magician. Konan was holding her head from the annoyance of Tobi. Kisame was crying because the Akatsuki had to catch fish and cook them, and Pein was just staring at him, tryingnot to crack a grin or nothing.

"Muhahahahaha!" Hidan screamed at the baby birds, making faces that made a child wanting to cry.

The birds chirped and squeamishly squawked at him quite loudly. Hidanbegan to rattle the tree branch causing the nest to shake making the nest to about to fall.

Little birds screamingfor their lives and with Hidan making insane-guy facial expressions; here comes the mama bird. Feathers neon orange and teal, beak sharp as daggers, squawks piercingwhat's left of the peaceful night [excluding Hidan and his shit], and talons sharper than Konan's manicured nails.

"Shit! F***! Get off you-!" Hidan swung his hands at the bird, trying his best trying to get down without falling down. "Hellpppp!!"

None of the Akatsuki could here him. Well, lets just say some did but they didn't bother wanting to help, laziness if you ask me.

"Tobi thinks your hair should be pink instead of this ugly blue." Tobi played with a strand [I think that's how you spell it….] of Konan's hair.

"Shut up! Shut the hell up! I look fine, but for you, ha, you look like something that Satan shit out!!" Konan yelled with her pointing finger fiercely pointed at Tobi's face.

Tobi started to cry his eyes out running to Deidara. "Sempia!"

Deidarascreamed dropping his sculptor onto the ground and falls down.

Pein look at them all thinking. "Jesus, this organizations may have good unique skill but…..they act so stupid."

Moments of silence pasted and then with a big BOOM!

Hidan was on the ground holding his head cussing very, VERY loudly. Then here came the mama bird attacking him. "Bitch, get away!"

Pein rubbed his head with a sigh. "Stupid idiots…."

Morning time =] :

Sudden little cackling came from a nearby distance. Sounding like metal clanging together, but with a muffled echo.

Pein was the only awake and the only hearing the sound. He was instantly drawn to the sound, eager to see where's the source on where's its coming from.

Entering the area where the cackling has gotten louder. He seen nothing. Nothing but trees, grass, rocks, and a girl dancing across the grass.

Her long silky brown hair flew with the wind. The sun made her blonde highlights made her look like an ancient princess lost in a world of unknown.

She was holding what appeared to be a Samaria sword that the handle was light purple with a tassel dangling along with her hair. Slowly swaying to nature's melody.

Pein steadily watched her. "Hmmmm," he thought. "This girl has a rare ability to work withnature by dancing."

He could feel a great amount of chakra building up in her hands and legs. Then all of a sudden wind burst from where she was standing at and blew at every direction. Pein had to tighten his grip on the tree he was hiding behind.

The girl paused and stood in a stiff position, her eyes scanning the area. "Show yourself, now." Her eyes were ocean blue. The sunlight shined through them giving her eye color some sort of indigo color [which is SOOOO beautiful!].

She shifted her hips to his direction towards him. "Come here now."

Wind pushed him to her. Now, he was only one foot away.

"Who are you?" Pein manage to say.

"Tsuki, if you must know, Pein."

Peinthought at her with extreme suspicion. "What is she?"

END

So? How did ya like it? I would have to admit it was kinda difficult, because I haven't typed a story in forever, lol. I've writing them down on paper.

Well review and good one only!:O

See ya till next time……lol

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