"Don't…" Marisu said in no more than a whisper. "It won't last long anyways…"
The shocked group of the most infamous ninja started blankly at her. She seemed like she was about to say something intelligent for once. "Can't you see it?" She asked quietly, "It's just solidified chakra. Alive, but not alive. Removed from Sasori's chakra supply, it won't last."
"EXPLAIN, UN!" Deidara yelled furiously. He had grown fond of the idea of a child. Perhaps all this time in hiding had made him soft.
"Remember when I said it was a reaction with the unique chakra infused wood that caused it…It's just chakra. It triggered the formation of a miniature puppet version of baby Sasori." She explained while trying to keep herself together. "I'm not sure at all of the stability but if I'm correct in assuming that it took in a bit of Deidara's chakra too…The child…is a ticking time bomb."
Deidara shouted as he sent a butterfly bomb at the young ninja. Even though she tried to dodge it, the bomb hit her dead in the face. Her brief flashes of intelligence didn't last long as she stumbled over her cloak and fell down a well.
"I know, un…I'll take out my chakra. Then it won't explode." He said to himself in an obsessive voice.
"Don't." Konan said grabbing Deidara's advancing hand. Deidara turned to realize that his outburst had attracted every member of Akatsuki into that room. Deidara turned hastily and left the room. Sasori sat staring at the child with his usual blank stare.
"I have some knowledge of child care. I'll take the child for now." Itachi said. "I had a younger brother of my own." He took the child and went away.
"Do you think the kid's safe with him? He does have a little brother. But didn't he molest him?" Marisu chimed in, returning soaking wet from the well.
Everyone stared after where Itachi had gone. Upon processing what the girl said was true, half the room went after him to save the child.
Marisu sat blankly, staring a wall.
The cool blue haired goddess walked over to her. "I don't understand you." Konan said plainly. "Sometimes you're intelligent. Other times you are dumber than a rock."
She looked blankly at Konan. She opened her mouth to talk but an odd incohearant sound came out.
"About the child." Konan asked, hoping to stimulate the intelligent Marisu that lived somewhere in that empty head of hers. "How long do you think it will remain in this form?"
"I don't know…I don't know anything anymore. Could be a week…could be a day…could be a year…I'm just a kid…" She shrugged. A large boom was heard and the hideout shook.
Konan sighed. "That answers that question."
Pein summoned Deidara , Sasori, and Marisu to the meeting room the next day.
"You three have a mission to undertake. Eliminate the Sound village once and for all. I won't accept any failures again. Bringing back the dead is difficult."
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End for now. I hope the rewritten is a little better.
