hey guys ok a lot of you want to know who the mystery guy is so here you go
mystery guy (flashback)
I'm drowning, I cant breath. Im underwater when suddenly i'm lifted and I can breath again I hear people announcing my death, if im dead how can I hear them? I see Eric smiling over me evilly. That is the last thing I see before everything goes black.
a few days later
"So your finally awake, you have been out for a few days." Eric says.
"Where are we?" I reply.
"Underground rooms for safety, since i'm a leader I know about them." He says proudly
"Didn't they say I was dead, wait are you the only one who knows i'm alive!" I practically yell at him but I cant because it hurts
He looks at me wearily "Duh" he says simply.
"When am I going to see everyone?" I ask hoping soon.
"Well, lets just say a long time." He says sharpening his knife. "And until then, you will do what I say."
I nod mostly because he has a knife, a sharp knife.
10 months later (picks off of the end of last chapter)
"Ok you can go back to the underground rooms now." Eric says walking in and handing me the key. I stand and make my way to the door, just as im about to open it Eric says
"Did you see anything, interesting."
"Nope." I lie. "When will I get to see everyone?"
"UGH! You know what FINE, you want to see everybody, you want to see all your little friends, that's fine with me you can go tomorrow, during breakfast, but if its not what you think don't come giving me a damn about wanting me to keep you in hiding because now im DONE!" Eric says angrily throwing his hands in the air.
next morning
I take a deep breath. Ok this is it. I push open the doors and walk in as soon as I step foot in the room, it goes silent. Then I hear a gasp on the right side of the cafeteria. I turn my head and I see Tris, with Four, and all of my friends during initiation. The girls have tears running down their faces and all of the men are in shock. Tris stands up leaving Fours arm behind which makes me feel happy. She walks up to me and touches my check with the back of her hand and in a shaky whispers as tears run down her face says.
"Al?"
Review! I know this is kinda rude to say but im a really good writer. I was reading over this chapter and im just like wow, im really good. ok enough of me now for you Review! now im going to ask for 6 like tris
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