Thank you's and virtual cookies and cups of Mountain Dew go to everyone who has read and reviewed my story! Thanks for the great comments! I hope whoever hasn't reviewed does, I mean just one word would make me happy, like 'good story' or 'update' would do. Chapter 4 is here! If you are a Rai+Kim fan, you'll love this chappie.
BU!ST Day: still on day uno
TIME: night, around 11:00PM
(the day had now ended and everyone is now as comfortable as they can get on the old, worn out bus seats. The bus lights are out, and it is dark. Everyone is asleep, except for Raimundo and Kimiko, who are cuddled up together.)
RAIMUNDO: (in a whisper.) Hey, Kimi, can I ask you something?
KIMIKO: Yeah, sure, Rai. What's up? (snuggles up against Raimundo.)
RAIMUNDO: (face grows red.) Uh..um...I have this friend in Brazil...
KIMIKO: Okay, keep going.
RAIMUNDO: (awkward.) A-and he likes...he likes this one girl, but...
KIMIKO: But...
RAIMUNDO: But they're f-friends and he thinks that his girlfriend DOH i mean friend that a g-girl, sorry, likes him back...any advice there, Kim?
KIMIKO: Well, if you like someone, but they're friends, than I don't think it really matters...i mean you should be in love with whoever, best friend or not..right?
RAIMUNDO:...Uh, yeah, that makes sense.
(awkward silence.)
RAIMUNDO: Hey, Kimi.
KIMIKO: Yes, Raimundo?
RAIMUNDO: (face goes VERY red.) Uh, this may sound kinda s-silly on a b-bus, but... I meant to tell you this sooner, but I was k-kinda of a-afraid too, but I think...but- but I think I-
KIMIKO: (very fast.) Rai, I like you.
RAIMUNDO: (after a long pause...i mean very long.) W-What?
KIMIKO: Rai, I like you. I really do. Is that what you meant to tell me in the first place?
RAIMUNDO: Uh, um...yeah. I really like you too.
KIMIKO: (groans.) I'm sorry, Rai. Just like you I've been, oh, bottling up my feelings for you ever since we met at the Temple. I guess we have some kind of chemestry. Even though at times you've been an ass-
RAIMUNDO: Like that time I turned to the Heylin side with Wuya?
KIMIKO: Yeah, anyways deep down I think you a sweet guy and...you're so loyal and would do ANYTHING to protect your family, the world...me.
RAIMUNDO: That's true, and you're the same way. You'd have my back and I'd have yours. (about 10 seconds later.) Kimiko, you are like the coolest girl I've ever met. I've never seen any girl that has so mush spunk and independence. You're an angel...(strokes Kim's hair.) and you are so...beautiful.
KIMIKO: (teary eyed.) Oh, Rai, that was the nicest thing anyone has ever said to me. (hugs.) Rai, I love you.
RAIMUNDO: (lifts up Kimiko's chin.) Right back at cha, baby. (pulls into a kiss, which lasts, like FIVE MINUTES. Suddenly the bus lights turn on. Rai and Kim are dazed by the bright light.)
KIMIKO: What the-
ALL: AWWWWW, THAT WAS SOOO SWEET!
(Raimundo and Kimiko see everyone standing around them, except Shadow and Chase. The two immediately push away from each other, faces tingling red.)
KIMIKO: Aaaaahhhhhhh!!
RAIMUNDO: What the hell are you all doing up? And why were you watching us?
WUYA: We just had a hunch this kind of thing would happen.
RAIMUNDO AND KIMIKO: You did??
WUYA: Of course!
HANNIBAL BEAN: DUH!
CLAY: Sorry, partners, but it WAS a bit obvious.
OMI: It was most predictable.
JACK SPICER: Geez, not too hard to figure out.
GOOD JACK: Awwww, love! How precious! Looooovvvveeee is flowing like a rriivvveeeerrrrrrr!
SHADOW: I'm nocturnal. Saw the whole thing. Bitches.
CHASE: Yeah, they ARE bitches, Shadow. HA! Good one!
MASTER FUNG: (pops out of nowhere; sticks head through an open bus window.) Even I saw that coming.
RAIMUNDO: Well, God, guys, leave us alone!
KIMIKO: Yeah, even if it was 'kinda' expected, you all 'kinda' ruined the magical moment there.
CLAY: Well, gosh darn it now that we're all awake it'll be hard to fall back asleep.
GOOD JACK: Very true, good buddy. (snaps fingers.) I KNOW! Let's play I Spy!
HANNIBAL BEAN: What's that?
RAIMUNDO AND KIMIKO: Oh God...
CHASE: (after a while. Evil smile.) Okay...I got one! I spy with my..uh...little cat shaped eye something yellow. It's out there. (points to the outside.)
GOOD JACK: Oohh! Ohhh!!! It's- (looks out window. Sees nothing yellow. Frowns.) nothing.
CHASE: Everyone give up? (everyone nodds head.) Well, it's Grand Master Dashi!
OMI: (gasps in utter relief.) Really, Chase Young?! Where is he?!
CHASE: Oh-he just hid behind that tree over there. Why don't you go and get him, young monk.
OMI: Oh, I shall! (gets off the bus.)
(a booming voice is heard.) OMI, YOU ARE ELIMINATED!!!
OMI: Wha- (guards out of nowhere come and take Omi by the arms.) Hey! Release me at once! Don't force me to go Tornado Strike on you two!
RAIMUNDO: HAHAHAHAHAHA!! Omi, you are waaay to trusting.
CHASE: (turns to Shadow.) Did you see that, Shadow, did you see what I did I eliminated Omi by deceiving him did you see how evil that was huh did you see I am very evil now will you-
SHADOW: Shut the fuck up.
CHASE: Okay. (mutters to himself.) Dammit...
GOOD JACK: Now, Mr. Chase, that was very mean of you to do that to poor, eliminated Omi. You should go apologize to him.
CHASE: Now I'd be eliminated if I did that, wouldn't I? I'd have to be very desperate in order to step foot off this bus, which I don't intend on doing until I win this game. Now, disperse, worm.
GOOD JACK: Oh, okay! In that case I'll make him an apology card for you to send to him. La la la la la (skips away.)
CHASE: (excited.) Did you see that, Shadow, did ya I made him disperse and I did it wisely did you see it now he's making a card because he was somewhat inspired by me or something did you see and I called him worm I find that very evil so I'll ask again-
SHADOW: (points gun at Chase.) Don't make me use force, mother fucker.
CHASE: But what about what I just did-
SHADOW: I don't persuade easily. Now, why don't YOU disperse?
CHASE: (disperses.)
GOOD JACK: AAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!! Oh dear oh dear of dear!!!
CLAY: What's the matter, partner?
GOOD JACK: (sniffs.) Jack Junior is gone. GONE I SAY! (cries.)
CLAY: Oh, don't worry. I'll help ya's look for 'em.
GOOD JACK: Oh really, kind cowboy? (pulls Clay into a tight hug.) THANK THANK YOU THANK YOU!!
CLAY: (having trouble breathing.) Can...you...let go of me? Three second rule!
GOOD JACK: (let's go of Clay.) Woopsies! Sorry, Clay.
CLAY: Alrigh', let's go have a look round the bus. (Clay and Good Jack look for a total of 37 minutes. They end up finding Jack Junior crawling on the outside of the bus.)
GOOD JACK: WAIT! Come back, Jack Junior! You're not ready to go out into the real world yet! (weeps uncontrollably.) Clay, could you go out and get him for me?
CLAY: But I'd-
GOOD JACK: (plees.) Oh PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEASE! I need him! He's my responsibility! And I'm afraid of going out there alone in the dark! PLEASE go get him! (puppy eyes.)
CLAY: (sighs.) Oh, alrigh, but you owe me BIG, partner. (steps off the bus.)
(the booming voice is heard again.) CLAY, YOU ARE ELIMINATED!!!
CLAY: (as he's dragged away by the guards.) You owe me HUGE, partner! Somethin as big as Texas!
(Good Jack realizes what he has done.)
GOOD JACK: Oops! Now that's TWO apology notes I owe. (sniffs.) And Jack Junior is still out there. (weeps for a while, but ends up finding up Jack Junior on the back of his sweater vest.) Goodie! There you are! (wags finger at the spider.) Now don't ever run away from me like that again, mister. Anyways, let's get a start on thos apology notes!
CHASE: Did you see that Chase I got TWO people eliminated in ONE night how impressive is that oh so evil huh here I even tape recorded the whole thing so you can watch how evil i am again and again and again and-
SHADOW: (loads gun.) That's it. I'm not holding back. (once again puts gun in Chase's face.)
CHASE: (shields himself.) WAIT! Let's not have crazy thoughts, now. Heh heh, sorry.
SHADOW: (slowly lowers gun.) Ggggrrrrr...if you don't bother me for the rest of the night I'll rethink on shooting you in your sleep.
CHASE: I'm sorry. It'll never happen again.
SHADOW: It better. Now, SIT!
CHASE: (obeys.)
SHADOW: Now go to sleep.
CHASE: ZzZzZzZzZzZzZzZzZzZz...
That's all for chapter four. Hope you liked. It was very fun to write! I know that Chase would NEVER act like this, but what the hell, it's my story. See you in chapter five. I'm going away this weekend, so I may not update till Monday.
