I was hoping to get some reviews on this story... but only one person has =)
I wanted some feedback before starting this chapter, but i guess no one is that interested in the story.
Would have written chapter 4 sooner but oh well =)
Here is chapter 4.
Youko and kuronue were in the forest coming up to a huge castle with a good amount a security. Youko looked to Kuronue with a smirk " This should be a challenge. Awesome! " Kuronue had a big grin on his face. " Yeah, i really had fun planning this heist. There is a shit ton of guards, but hell. That just makes it more fun! " Youko grinned and nudged Kuronue with his elbow. " I know why you really wanted to come here, This place has maids that are hot and you want one of them! " Kuronue grins " Well... maybe..." He chuckles, and Youko knew he was right. The two of them ran up to the castle stealthily. As they got up to the gates two guards stood there with weapons ready, poised to kill them. Kuronue smirks and swings his blade chopping the guards legs off right at their knees. He just laughed evily as they lay on the ground screaming and bleeding to death. The guys continued on into the castle. Youko went to the left, and Kuronue to the right. Kuronuewent down the hall to the maids sleeping quarters. He went in silently, and looked at each one... " hm... such a good selection... " He then walked over to a girl with bat wings, He liked the way she smelled. " And there is the perfect one " He grins and picks her up gently enough to not wake her and he goes back out into the hallway. Meanwhile Youko was having a great time fighting off wimpy guards. " Really, a place with all these riches should be able to afford stronger guards! " He toyed with them, standing back and watching as a plant of vines grabbed them at thier ankles. Smirking he threw the bag packed with gold coins over his shoulder. " It was nice playing with you boys. Oh and just so you know, your dead now. " He held up his hand like he was holding an imaginary ball, squishing it in his hand. As soon as he did the four guards all clenched their chests and died. Their hearts exploded instantly. " You guys were way too easy... " He said as he walked out into the hallway. Kuronue was standing there with a sleeping girl in his arms and he hadnt even bothered to steal anything else. " You lazy bat. Is all you can think about getting a piece of ass? " Kuronue smirked " Maybe... you want one too? theres at least 30 of them in that room down the hall! " Youko rolled his eyes. " Not this time. I guess we should get going before the people living here wake up... " Just as he finishes speaking a light comes on at the top of the stairs. Kuronue's eyes go wide " Fuck! lets get the hell out of here! " They both run out undetected.
Walking back to thier hideout Kuronue is wearing a smirk on his face. " I cant wait to get this little beauty home. " Youko rolled his eyes " You should have gotten some gold first, and then got that bitch. I guess you get no share of tonights spoils bat" He stuck his toung out and kuronue replied " What do you mean nothing buddy? Ive got this little lady here. Thats better than gold in my book! " Youko chuckled and shook his head. The two of them had continued walking back to the hideout having a random conversation that wasnt really about anything in particular. The girl kuronue grabbed stays asleep for the entire walk, which took about 30 minutes.
Kymisu was sitting in the middle of the floor with the phone to her ear. She anxiously listened to the rings.
Ring... Ring... Ring...
A deep voice answered the phone " Hello? "
Kymisu gasped " Daddy! your alive! your really alive! "
The voice sounded joyful " Where are you baby girl? Ill come get you right now! I would have been searching sooner but im pretty beat up... i only have one arm now. I also have a pretty bad wound in my chest. "
Kymisu sounded a little sad " daddy... are you ok? "
" Yes baby girl. Im perfectly fine to come get you just tell me where you are! " he answered.
About this time, Youko and Kuronue were walking in the hideout, but Kymisu was paying too much attention to the phone to notice.
" Daddy... I dont know where i am... all i know is i am in some demons hideout... they kid napped me! They are thieves... "
Youko smirked walking over to her and snatching the phone. " Hello, dont look forward to seeing her again. Shes mine now. "
" You bastard! Let my daughter go! I will find you and kill you if its the last thing i do! "
Youko smirked " It just may be the last thing you do. But dont count on killing me. Goodbye. "
He crushed the phone in his hand and then opened his palm letting the little pieces fall to the ground. The little speaker was making noises, most likely Kymisu's father was still yelling. She looked at the crumbled mess and then at Youko " You bastard! What the hell did you do that for? I am not yours! " Youko growled grabbing her by her collar and lifting her up to his eye level. " Bitch, you have no right to speak to me in that tone. I see now that i will have to break this free spirit of yours. " Kymisu looked shocked and held onto his wrist so that he wasnt choking her with this hold. Kuronue had put his girl in his room, and came back out to watch. He chuckled " She thinks she actually has a voice here? " Youko grinned and nodded "Apparently so. " He dropped Kymisu and she landed hard on the ground. It hurt, but she ignored the pain. She wanted him to think she was stronger than what she was.
Youko looked down at her. " Where did you get the phone? "
" found it " She replied.
He smirked " So, you think he can actually save you? "
She glared " Yes. I believe in my father. "
Youko chuckled " Well i dont. I doubt he will even find you. He will probably die searching. "
" Dont say that! Dont talk about him that way! " Kymisu yelled at him.
Youko smirked pulling her back up. " You know, i was going to be nice to you while you were here. But you did something stupid. I told you not to try anything while we were out, and thats the first thing you did! "
Kymisu tried to hide her fear of him. After all, he was a tall demon that was much stronger than her. It wasnt like she had any chance in winning a fight. " Im not afraid of you " She growled.
Youko grinned " Well you should be. "
The next chapter is going to be a graphic lemon, if you dont like lemons you do not have to read it.
You wont miss anything importaint if you dont read it.
