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Chapter 4
Ed walked down the hall of Ouran High School feeling slightly sick, not sure however if this was caused by the cream and pink upholstery on the walls or because of the man she'd been sitting with for the last 2 h who insisted she call him "THE DAD MISTER" now that they're a so called family. she was how on her way to meet a nonmember of their family and fellow bastard child plus his mates at the club, from looking arond she had a 1 to 10 bet that the "club" was not going to be of the dancing variety but most likely the slaughtering of fluffey woodland creatures type. Don't get me wrong i'm all up for the hunt I just like my pray to be abeal to do more than sniff me to death. Ed looked around herself at the people passing by and thought, yep same old same old, another rich school with people that had their noses so high in the air that they evolved to have eyes in there nostrils so that they can see where they going. the only difference between this one and the 8 other schools she gone to was that this one had more frail and was pink.
Ed side and look down trying to decipher the crudely hand drawn map the man called dad had give her to find the 3ed music room. She decides that if that thing called a dad ever decided to become an artist he should not give up the day job. As she pushed the piece of modern art that was attempting to be a map into her hoodie she look around for someone who resembled human rather than a Disney character on steroids and grinned slightly as she saw a cloaked figure coming towards her down the corridor and whispered under her breath" thank God a Goth at least they been identified as a humanoid". She called out and the figures stopped looked around and pointed to itself asking if was him she wanted to talk to in disbelief. She nodded and was able to get directions to the 3ed music room as well as coming away with the bones knowledge that out there are Goth's that pranter tranquilness.
In the 3ed music room.
Haruhi tugged on the lapel on the dinner suit she was wearing, a silver revolver in her left hand she was Bond... James Bond. Tamaki had decided that today they would be British to make his brother feel more at home, union Jacks hung around the walls of the host club surrounded by English Roses, a British cream tea was set up in the centre of the room for the host club and there new member ( Tamaki already decided that Ed would joined the club), the British national anthem playing softly in the background. With a sudden jolt the boys ruptured from the changing room, Haruhi catching sight of them stood in shock at the figures in front of her.
Mori was in the front in what looked to be a nee lathe tartan skirt, long white socks ,buckled shoes and a puse stuck to his waist a smallish strip of tartan thrown over his shoulder the only thing obscuring his well defined musculature chest and brought shoulders on the tall mysterious young man. Haruhi blushed at the site of him as he strode powdery towards her revealing thank God that he was not wearing it in the traditional manner.
Next came Honey in red trousers a dirty white shirt and a brown necktie singing the words " cakes glorious cakes.. carried, chocolate and strawberry". Doing a very bad impression of the Victoria orphan Oliver.
The twins came together one in a red riding jacket and cream jodhpurs a top hat pushed to one side, whip in hand, The other in red fur, a fox skin head over his shoulder.
Kyouya in a white frail shirt dark gray waistcoat with a naive blue tail jacket on top, as well as top hat , Britches, black knee high riding boots and gold pocket watch, was next to slide from the changing room as an example of the true British gentleman gone to the dark side with a sly smile he was the perfect Mr Wickham.
Next with the Blair of trumpets came the king of the host club as ... THE QUEEN OF ENGLAND !! Tamaki in glittering silver robes a copy of the Crown Jewels on his head and sceptre in hand joined his fellow hosts.
" Haruhi do I look all right?... What if he doesn't like me?... ...shouldn't he be here? Does my but look to big in this?..."
Tamaki works were cut off by the sound of the advance warning system they had installed to warn them of approaching customers.
"AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH...!!"
"he's here everyone into places now!"
everyone took their places just in time to see the double door open.
POV Ed's
So ok I'm look up at thears really big doors in pink and gold and thinking maybe I should cut my losses and make a run for it! I mean living on the streets can't be as scary as what lies behind that door. And how do I do I know it's going to be bad ? Well they put out a welcome sign,.. not just that but one with bunnies on it! I'm mean what sort of 17 year old boy puts out a welcome sign with bunnies on it ... I thought teenage boys greeting was supposed to be granting.
Taking a deep breath Ed push the doors open... a room that look like it had seen one too, no make that three too many empire day. This site disturbing as it is was quick shielded however by falling rose petals whose mean goal in life however seemed to bury people alive.
Ed managing to exclude herself from the Rosen stood in front of the now growing pile (which she noticed wear blocking the only exit) looking at 6 boys and 1 girl who looked as if they had bought a one-way ticket to looneyville .
