Man I thought this chapter would be short but it took me forever to type up! I have no idea what happened. So sorry about the long wait about this chapter and the one for my other story. It just took me awhile to type up the other one. But now I just hurt my knee at school on Friday and so I haven't done much besides type. Which I just figured out, I'm pretty slow at. I would have gotten this out over the weekend but I went to Arooga's for the first time on Saturday after a cookout and saw a bunch of UFC fights, luckily we could sit which I was glad for. First time being to a bar like that and it was pretty cool (no I had no drinks Haha I'm only 18 in September). Then I was invited to another cookout on Sunday with one of my friends and slept over to today. That was really fun and I learned how to play poker for the first time in my life. That was really fun. OH! And me and my friends were playing Black Ops 2 and met these two girls that live in Oregon, at like 4 A.M. for where I am! That was pretty cool Haha. Well enough about me lets get on with the chapter!

I woke up to see my Father sitting down on the edge of my bed. I tried to sit up quickly but only made it about halfway before he turned on the device strapped to his wrist. I fell back down on the bed as stiff as a board.

"Why do you persist to defy me Broly?" he asked in a pained voice.

Me- BECAUSE I WANT MY FREEDOM! I WOULD DIE SO THAT I CAN BE FAR AWAY FROM YOU!

He couldn't hear this, of course. The device only went one way.

"Don't you want to see our revenge fulfilled? To kill those who tried to kill us. To get closure?" Now he turned to face me, his face had a pleading look to it.

Me- THEY ARE GOOD PEOPLE! THEY DID NOTHING TO US!

"And then of course, we'll rule the galaxy. No one can stand up to the Legendary Super Saiyan, well, not for long anyway."

He was silent for a few heart beats, and then he sprang forward and slapped me across the face. My view went from the ceiling to the window overlooking the western side of the castle.

"But none of that will come about if you keep defying me!" he roared. "Going into Kakarot's room last night and fighting him was a mistake! One that could prove to be fatal to future plans! Now I have to try and salvage this mess that you made!" he continued to yell standing up.

He walked to the door and commanded me to follow. As my body moved on it's own accord, I was only able to let a tear escape my right eye to show that I had been listening.

My Father and I entered the throne room where we were cut off by Kakarot who had Vegeta in tow. Instantly I tried again to fight the mind control's hold over me.

"What is the meaning of this Kakarot! I am on my way to find the Legendary Super Saiyan!" Vegeta yelled sounded pissed.

"And what I'm telling you is that you don't have to go far Vegeta! Because Broly is the Legendary Super Saiyan! Isn't that right Paragus?" Kakarot asked my Father.

Both men were only a couple feet apart so it would be hard to use the excuse that Paragus hadn't heard him but for some time by Father was silent. No doubt wondering how Kakarot could be so smart as to figure out the puzzle.

"Hahahaha! Are you joking Kakarot! Broly's power level is beneath ours! How could he possibly be the-"

Finally I won the mental battle over the mind control device and I instantly attacked Kakarot, pulling forth the memories of constantly hearing him crying next to me. I went on the offensive, trying to fight the battle in my head by focusing on the battle at hand. When I was angry, nothing could stop me. I was hoping neither could this headdress.

I clasped my hands together and slammed them down on Kakarot, hoping to get him into the fight fast so that I could keep my loop of power going and it worked. He had turned into a Super Saiyan and blocked my attack, he then gave me a left hook and I spun, losing my balance. He then kicked me in the back, sending me flying through the castle walls towards the dying city. But I managed to send him a thought as my initial attack met.

Me- GET ME ANGRY! IT'S THE ONLY WAY TO BREAK MY FATHER'S CONTROL!

I stepped out of the collapsed building and started yelling to increase my ki. In the distance I could see a yellow orb flying through the air towards me.

Paragus- BROLY! WHAT ARE YOU DOING!

The mind control started to clamp down on my will power but then Kakarot punched me in the face followed by an uppercut. The first hit smashed my Father's progress in controlling my mind; it brought me back to my senses. I caught the second fist and growled, kneeing Kakarot in the stomach. I then whipped him towards the ground and sent ki blasts after his body. Suddenly I felt an explosion on my back.

I turned around seeing the child and purple haired teen from the spaceship behind me. They both looked shocked as I simply turned around and yelled even more, going

Super Saiyan. I flew towards the both of them screaming the whole way. I roundhouse kicked the purple haired one which sent him flying, I then kicked out with my other leg towards the smaller one but he suddenly went Super Saiyan and disappeared. I was so shocked by this that I didn't even guard against his attack when he reappeared behind me. In one punch he sent me falling down to the ground. I caught myself and looked back at the kid, reevaluating his strength when I was punched across the face.

I went flying again, crashing through buildings and landing in the ground. I merely got up and shrugged off the dirt. I looked through the hole that I made to see the purple haired one back but also in Super Saiyan.

Me- Yes! Get stronger! Keep fighting!

I yelled again my ki pushing past it's previous limits and I powered up even more. I was using my anger to fight my Father's bidding.

I flew towards them punching another hole through the buildings making them collapse. As I reached arms length of them I quickly used an after-image and disappeared, then came back behind them. I saw their heads snap back from surprise just as I bicycle kicked the purple haired one, who the child called "Trunks". I turned my attention towards the boy and unleashed an onslaught of punches and kicks, pure offense. He was struggling to block and avoid my attacks but I could feel his inner power, his ki hadn't gone down in this whole exchange of blows that raged through the city, but some reason he couldn't unleash his full potential. I feinted an uppercut to his gut and he took the bait, he positioned both his hands to block it just as my left arm shot forward and grabbed his head.

He started to punch at my hand that was wrapped around his face and so I threw him. He crashed into a cliff that was outside the city.

"Gohan!"

I turned to see Kakarot speeding towards me a look of concern on his face. I hadn't thrown the child to hard, just enough to rattle him a bit.

I charged up again, screaming for my ultimate opponent, the only hope of saving me.

"KA-KAR-ROT!"

I pulled back my arm and our fists met as he approached me, the ensuing shockwave broke all of the surrounding windows and toppled a few small buildings. We stayed there glaring into each other's eyes and I charged a ki blast in my other hand, he saw this and quickly charged one too and then our alternate hands met creating a massive explosion. I was thrown back to the landing pad that my Father used.

I was so disoriented from the explosion as I got up and I wobbled a bit. And then I felt a massive spike in my ki again as I charged up, feeling the power explode out of me.

Me- YES! YES! THIS IS IIIIIITTTTTT!

I screamed again, louder than before. My muscles bulged and I grew taller. My ki overflowed, rushing out of me in a wave of power. Gusts of wind billowed at my feet as I heard the most wonderful sound ever.

CRACK.

My eyes focused as time slowed and I saw my headpiece, the mind control device falling before my eyes, broken in half. It took forever for it to fall to the ground but when it did I heard the distinct clatter that it made.

Me- I'm free...I'M free...I'M FREE!

I laughed out loud and went past my previous highest level. I went into full Legendary Super Saiyan, and it felt good.

"Broly!"

I turned and saw my Father in the escape pod. He was trying to figure out what happened to the mind control device when I appeared next to the viewing window.

"Obey me!" he said, his voice quivering as he still pressed the buttons frantically.

"I won't be listening to you anymore," I said coldly.

Other- KILL HIM!

Me- Wait what?

I grabbed his pod and crushed it between my hands.

Me- No stop! What are you doing!?

Other- I'm becoming POWERFUL!

Again I had to watch as my body controlled itself. It then threw the crushed pod at the comet. It disintegrated before it even reached the bringer of death, second only to me now.

Me- Stop this I don't want to kill!

Other- WELL I DO!

Suddenly I felt pinpricks against my back and The Other turned to see a Namek pounding away at me. The Other grabbed his neck, his whole hand easily wrapping around and threw him and I was just able to pull back on the strength of the bone crushing force.

Vegeta suddenly appeared in front of me as a Super Saiyan. He yelled and threw an uppercut to my chin with what looked like all of his power. We felt his fist collide and my face barely moved. The Other smiled at his ineffectiveness and kicked him away.

Suddenly Kakarot was in front of us about to deliver a blow when my hand shot out. My whole palm fit over his face and fingers wrapped around. And then his face was traveling to meet my knee, and it was going to meet it halfway, and I could tell that it would have caved his skull in. Just as they were about to connect and make Kakarots face cave in I lashed out at The Other.

Me- STOP!

Movements froze.

Me- I WILL NOT, LET YOU HURT THESE PEOPLE, ANYMORE!

Kakarot opened his eyes after not feeling the hit.

The Other- YOU DARE FIGHT ME! I AM THE POWERFUL SUPER SAIYAN! NO ONE BEATS ME!

Kakarot started to wiggle, trying to get out of my grasp and I opened our hand.

MY ki started rising again. My face was twitching from constant battle.

The Other- Impossible!

Me- No not impossible. Because I am BROLY! THE TRUE LEGENDARY SUPER SAIYAN!

I pushed out with renewed mental strength and wrapped his consciousness in chains. He screamed, filling my head with cries and curses against me. He tried to break the chains that bound him and succeeded, but then even more wrapped around his body. He struggled but could barely move and looked at me with fear in his eyes as I started to move towards him.

The Other- What are you going to do to me?

I stood in front of him. We were the same height, but he was slightly hunched over from the chains on him. If I had to say we looked exactly alike if you put a one-way mirror in front of us, except for the murderous intent in his eyes.

I placed a hand on his shoulder and a bright light appeared at the touch.

Me- I am separating us, looks like we both need some alone time to control our inner demons.

The light engulfed us both as he screamed and I merely smiled at the joy that I was feeling.

So I'd like to thank all of the people who are reading this/have reviewed this. I don't really know if it is good or not so I like to hear your feedback. Even if it is to speed up the chapter updates or your views on something that I had written. Oh! I also don't own anything involving UFC, just thought that I'd put that in here in case someone calls me on it. I just watched a couple fights. So tell me what you thought about the chapter people! Love to hear from you! .1656 still here and waiting :]