Okay guys, I need your help!

Due to a recent review given for one of my stories, I decided to reach out to my wonderful readers and ask for assistance!

It has been brought to my attention (Sorta, I already knew this was my weakest point ^.^;;) that my characterization is weak. So, here is my personal request to all of you!

I am swampedwith college and work. As it is, it's hard enough for me to add a few sentences a day. As much as I would love to sit down and write chapter after chapter (Much like how this started,) I simply don't have the time.

In relation to this, I would also love to sit down and research tips and tricks on writing and really sharpening my weak points. But I haz no time! Nor do I have the money to buy educational resources to help me.

SO! Here is where all of you wonderful people come in! Here it is:

If you know of any good websites or cheap/online books that I could look up and read in a short amount of time, send them to me in a link, preferably as a PM. The reason for this method is because I would like to keep reviews purely story related, rather than a bunch of links to (No, I have no clue if that's a real website or not.) However, if you are reading this and have no account, I would not mind seeing an anonymous review with a tip :) I DO ASK that when sending me the link, you provide the name of the website. (For example: Hi! Here's a link to "Writers Tips" - )

You guys will be helping me so much, and I know at least a couple of you will try :) Also, any in depth reviews of my story are welcome. I will read three paragraphs of pure review about my rights and wrongs in my writing. I love getting feedback. However, if you all would add suggestions or solutions, that would be incredibly helpful as well. While I always appreciate the negative feedback as much as the positive, sometimes it makes my life a little more difficult when I have to guess what my reviewers are trying to say!

I love all of you faithful readers, and I am genuinely excited to hear back from you :) I look forward to your feedback!

I AM posting this on all of my stories. I truly am looking for as much feedback/advice/etc as possible.

Thanks, and SYANU!