Paralight: Hey, Pinkamena's FINALLY visited!
Pinkamena: Hi! I can't stay for long, need to make more cupcakes...
From Flashwing: No They're Movie Companies And They Did Not Take You're Friends. Sheesh.
Paralight: ...Oh. Well, I think I have a right to be scared anyway, seeing as I have four dormant inter-dimensional portals in my own house that are meant to lead to various human worlds.
Pinkamena: Dormie what now?
Spike: Don't ask...
From Raven: Rock Out.
Spike: Yeah! Loosen up, Paralight!
Pinkamena: Ooo, can I throw a party with lots and lots of yummy party food?!
From JJ: Rainbow Dash, Try Helping 'Paralight', OK?
Pinkamena: Do you mean the parallel universe pony named Rainbow Dash? Oh, I did a bit of travelling and... took care of her. Heh...
Paralight: I could try and get Rainbow Crash over here sometime.
From Twilight Sparkle: Why Are You Paranoid?
Paralight: I was born paranoid. My mother said I jumped right out of her hooves when she picked me up.
From Guest: Mwah Ha Ha!
Paralight: Eep! Pinkamena, SAVE ME!
Pinkamena: Um...
From xxCelestiaMCxx: Pinkamena, what is your favourite kind of cupcake?
Pinkamena: That's a tough question... probably rainbow cupcakes. I'm almost out of the special ingredient, though.
From xxCelestiaMCxx: Is your hair poofy or straight?
Pinkamena: Poofy!
From xxCelestiaMCxx: Who are your friends?
Paralight: Well, Pinkamena's here, and I'm sure you'll get to meet the others soon... I hope...
From Guest: (blinks)
Paralight: You're scary.
From Guest: No Fair!
Paralight: What isn't fair? Did you lose your friends as well?
Pinkamena: I'm right here.
From catspats31: The writing quality is fine, but the following part of the Content Guidelines is broken:
Entries not allowed:
6. Chat/script format and keyboard dialogue based entries.
Please use dialogue similar to: "I'm not cute and tiny!" yelled Spike. Try to add some description and detail behind what's going on. The admins frown upon stories in chat/script format because it erases all of the artistic choice and technical skill from writing and reduces it strictly to events without any sort of prose or emotion. It shows they're more impressed by what rather than how, and how is the most important part of any creative endeavour.
Paralight: Okay, fine, fine. You've got me there. I don't think I can find a loophole. I'll post this and then work on rewriting the chapters, okay? Just so people have something to look at while I rewrite them. I hope that's okay.
Spike: Um... what does any of that mean?
Paralight: Don't worry, Spike.
Spike: I think maybe YOU should try not worrying.
