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Tobias' POV

After I ran upon Eric's and Tris' moment at the top of the staircase, you could say I was beyond pissed. I mean does she not realize that I'm kind of in love with her? Instead of punching Eric in the face like I wanted to, I turned and went back down the stairs and down to the pool.

I was sitting on edge of the pool thinking about this morning when I almost kissed Tris when Molly, the school skank, sat down beside me.

"Hey handsome, what are you doing over here all alone?" She asks and grabs my arm.

I just shrug my shoulders.

She continues, "What? Get tired of that 12 year-old following you around everywhere?"

I know she's talking about Tris, because everybody thinks just because Tris does MMA she's not girly enough but in reality Tris is the most beautiful girl I've ever seen in my life. While I was thinking about Tris, Molly had wrapped my arm around her waist and was holding it to her. Right under her tits.

I was getting ready to yell at her when I saw a flash of black and blonde pass by me in a hurry. I know it was Tris, I'd know her anywhere.

"Tris! Tris! Tris what's wrong? Tris!" I call after her but get no response. I chase after her thinking, hoping I can make it to her but as I round the corner I hear the roar of her bike as she revved the engine.

Before I can stop her, she gone. I jump into my car and chase her down the road. All I can think to myself is I have to keep up with her. Every time she speeds up, I would too. It's not long before I realize the direction she's heading. She's going to the rock, she's going to our place.

I park my Camaro beside her bike and jump out running towards her. I grab her arm and look her over. I don't know what I'm looking for but I just needed to make sure she wasn't hurt physically.

"Tris, what was that? Are you okay?" Before I can register what has happened, I feel Tris' lips against mine. I was so stunned I froze, which probably isn't a good idea when it's the girl you've had a crush on for three years. I feel her start to pull away from me but I'm not letting that happen.

I place my hands on either side of her head and move my mouth in sync with hers. I turn my head to deepen the kiss, because I want to be as close as possible to her. I lick her bottom lip, asking her permission. Soon after our tongues are battling for dominance, my hands move from her head to her hips and she throws hers around my neck, intertwining her fingers together. All too soon though, it's over. But that was the greatest kiss of my entire life.

Breathless I say, "Tris, you have no idea how long I've wanted that to happen."

She smiles up at me, "You either."

I pull her back against me and kiss the top of her head. We cling to each other, thinking that if we don't, then this isn't going to be real.

I can't help but feel though, that we're being watched. As if someone is going to burst out of the woods at any second.

Trying not to make it obvious, I lean down and whisper, "Does it feel like we're being watched?"

She nods her head and looks at me with a worried look on her face. She glances behind me and the expression worsens. Before she can say anything, someone punches me in the back of the head and I fall to the ground.

All I hear is Tris' screaming for me. I push the fuzziness out of my vision and tackle the person after Tris'. He falls to the ground with a loud thud. I don't have time to see if Tris' is alright because the guy swipes at my legs trying to make me fall so he can get the upper hand, but I'm faster than him. I kick him in the ribs and get on top of him slamming my fists against anything they come in contact with. I hear Tris' grunting behind me so I turn around to see what she is doing when I notice she's fighting Molly.

I look closer at the guy I was punching three seconds earlier and notice that it's Peter, he's 2nd string on the lacrosse team. He's been after my spot as captain for 2 years now but not only that he's also been after Tris.

I get off him, because he's now unconscious after the beating I just gave him and walk over to Tris.

"Are you alright?" She's standing over an unconscious Molly, looking at her in disgust.

"Yeah I'm fine. She didn't get any hits on me. Do you know why they attacked us?"

"I don't know for sure but I bet it has something to do with Molly wanting to jump my bones and Peter wanting to jump yours." I say with a laugh. "But how about enough of this craziness for one night, want to call Chris and Will and see if they want to have a movie night/sleep thing?"

She thinks about it for a second and then smiles, "that'd be great."

By the time we arrive back to Chris' house the pool party is over and the only people here are Christina – obviously, Will, Zeke, Shauna, Uriah, Lynn, Eric, and Marlene.

Once Tris and I enter the movie room Christina speaks, "So who's up for a little bit of truth or dare?"

Alright everybody this is it for today! But remember to review! And let me know if you have any dares or truths you'd like to see in the next chapter.