Ok guys, another chapter. Woot, woot! I'm not dead. I have a very important A/n at the bottom you NEED to read
Ok now this is about my life, if you don't want to read scroll down. Ok so, there is this guy who likes me, not the one who stalks me which is a different matter, anyway he ran against me for student council. We ran for safety officer (all I can run for besides beautification and athletics, and as you can see, I'm not very athletic I stay on the computer all day) and I won! His friend got all mad and did a bunch of "unsafe" thing and said, "Hey safety officer, this isn't very safe!" Back to the chapter as usual lady's first, Primrose EverIdontownanyofthisdeen! Idk I was being creative.
Tris's POV
Today is the day I get to go out to the cafeteria and not be locked in my cell. For someone who supposedly murdered two, this is a record. Four and I have made a sort-of ally-friendship truce. We walk together towards the cafeteria, which is this biggest place in the Dauntless Compound for Dangerous Criminals. I grab a tray and get in line. A mean looking man with greasy black hair and a billion piercings looks at me. He has cold grey eyes (idk what color his eyes are so I did what I thought) and a nametag that states Eric in neatly typed letters. "What do you want?" He grumbles,
I have a feeling he's here for a punishment much worse than prison, community service. I look at my choices, chicken, bean soup, and hamburgers. I decide on the most obviously delicious tasting thing, hamburgers. I slide my tray down to a much nicer looking lady with a yellow shirt and a scar running over the left side of her face. I look at her nametag that says, Johanna, I have a feeling she came here voluntarily. "What would you like as a side?" she asks,
"Beans, coleslaw, or our specialty, Dauntless Cake (Yeah I just had to put that in there)?" I slide a piece of cake on my plate and Johanna slides another on and winks. Damn she's nice. I walk over to an empty table and Four sit next to me. We take place in small talk, but I was mainly too immersed in my food to understand. All I could think was, this is way too good to be prison food.
After eating is shower time, lucky me. We have to go in groups with our cellmates; most are six to eight people per cell. But, I am a special case. I awkwardly walk to the stalls, which don't have any gender separation, just canvas curtains that would go up to my armpit. I start the water and so does Four. I look around to buy me time and see one small bar of soap. Four takes off his shirt, revealing a six-pack and nicely toned muscles, I try my best not to stare. I follow suit, and it doesn't help that my bra is white and I'm getting wet. I pull off my pants and Four does as well. I feel him tap my shoulder. I turn around to see him in a pair of black boxers, he hands me the soap over the curtain and I scrub myself while covering my breasts with one arm, even though a curtain covers me. I turn off the water and realize that I see no towels. I start to panic and then I see the door open and an innocent looking guy comes in. Once he gets closer I see he appears innocent, yet he has an evil look in his eyes. I also read his nametag, Peter, is what it states. He smiles at me evilly and whispers quietly so Four can't hear, while handing me my towel, " I'd love to see what's behind that curtain." I recoil in disgust and wrap myself in the towel. He gives Four his towel and motions for me to come out. I don't trust him, but Four came out so I followed. He did something funny with the handle and the dripping from the showerhead stopped. He put some weird lock on the shower and other plumbing stuff. He turned around and said, "See you round' " then slapped my butt. Even though Four saw this, he didn't see the split second after where Peter squeezed me as well. I recoiled and was about to smack him when he shut the door and left.
Four then came up to me and grabbed my shoulders firmly. I winced and then Four's eyes softened. He wrapped me in a hug gently, which felt weird since his torso was exposed and his towel bunched around his waist. I still hugged him back though, and I heard him whisper, " Did he touch you before?" I shook my head. "I won't let that ever happen again." I pull back and reply, "Why,"
"Why do you protect me?"
"Because, because I like you." He says while blushing
I am about to ask why again, when he kisses me.
Tobias's POV
I kiss her knowing that she'll ask me why if I don't; I pull back and smile. "Because your cute, smart, and funny." I brush a strand of her hair behind her ear, "And brave, and selfless, and beautiful."
"I don't see why you like me." She says again
"Because your beautiful on the outside and in here." I touch her heart, which is slightly awkward since her towel ends right below my finger. I pull her in to kiss her one more time and she kisses back. "Do you like me?" I ask
"Of course" she looks almost offended by this and I laugh in response.
There you go! Ah, fluff. Anyway, no one won the contest, which may have been a little hard, so I will open it again. It will be due by October 10th, 2013 in case you read this in the future! And because four plus six equals ten. Idk. Anyway! If you forgot, the contest is to guess my first name. I will give you a hint; it starts with a "C". If you win I will put you in the story! Here are the rules
DO NOT put this in the reviews, please PM me. I am not quite ready for the whole public to know, so be grateful if you win. Also, you don't have to spell my name right, just pt how to pronounce each name, so I can recognize mine if you spell it wrong.
You can only PM me once per hint, which means if I give you the second letter next week you can enter again. I will most likely not because it will probably give it away and I want you to work for this.
Subject your PM like this: Guess my name contest.
You can give three different names per PM
All right you can PM me twice per hinted letter, but I will not spell out my whole name. Still three guesses per PM
If you win please do not tell anyone until I send you a PM that I will explain later.
MY obligations
I will send you a PM saying you won and you will need to PM me this: what your name is-or what you would like to be called in the story-. Your favorite number cannot be four, six or three, to be used as your cell number. I will need what, or what you would like your hair color to be, eye color, height, demeanor, attitude, any significant traits, such as birthmark, piercing, tattoo, or missing limbs. Idk. I will also need cheek bones, nose, and or lips.
I will send you a PM saying, can I mention your user name on the next chapter saying you won. I will use pen name only, unless you want your real name out there. If I send you this, then you can start telling people you won. I will only say you won with your consent.
I will make myself a character if someone guesses my name. I will put my name out there if you do, I will be able to put my name out, and you may not. My appearance will be what I look like in real life. My number will be three, sorry fangirls my fav number was three before Four came around.
I will keep my and your character on most of the following chapters for the rest of the story.
Kay bye my fictiony fanfictioners
-DauntlessCake10 (soon to be named)
Ps: I will still sign off as DauntlessCake10, occasionally my real name.
