Author's Note: I know the plot is a bit hard to understand. But I did it on purpose. The kits' clans. And the gender of the cats are the opposite of the original 5 founders :3

Part of the story is pretty predictable, and some are not. *Spoiler* You probably know that the kits are gonna end up as leaders or deputy or medicine cat or something. But... What about the original five leaders? They still have plenty of lives left. Do you think I'm gonna be so cruel to kill off Bramblestar, Crowstar, Rowanstar, Mistystar and Leafstar? (Honestly, I really wanna kill off Crowstar. That is not a spoiler. I might kill him, but I might not. :) Have a think about it.

Windkit knows about the tunnels because (as you can see in his POV of the prologue) his instinct. He's destined to be in WindClan :3 *Obvious spoiler* Also he didn't go back to help the clan because of StarClan. (Evil StarClan!) It's their time to die. It is not Windkit's time to die. So he is not dying. Yet.

Feel free to criticise. I love criticism. Just no flaming.

Review!

Important note: I do not own warriors and the clans. I don't own Bramblestar, Mistystar, Tawnypelt, Dovewing, etc.


Reviews: (So far!)

Hollyleaf1243:

It was a bit hard to understand at times, but I like the plot! So Windkit is in RiverClan, Riverkit is in ThunderClan, interesting. I would've thought they'd be in their namesake Clans. And I'm surprised Windkit didn't try to help anyway when his littermates were 'whipped into the air'. And how would he know the WindClan tunnel led to ThunderClan?

I like the story, and I just realized there's another chapter so I'm going to read it! That isn't a flame, it's just constructive criticism, writers love it :3 anyway, gotta go read the next chapter!

Thanks! I answered your questions above! I didn't put them in their namesake clans because it seems a bit boring and common if I do that.

[I never heard of any prophecy!] should be [I haven't heard of any prophecy!] (Sure I will change that)

I like Skykit, but you should add a gesture or something to let us know when you're changing characters. And I think, personally, you got that crowfood eating Dawnpelt right on. I just hate her and I'd love to see her dead... *eyes get bigger and crazier* Ok, ok I got carried away. I just hate her! Argh! Anyway, so is Skykit going to be sent back?

ShadowClan is wiped out, so I think Dawnpelt is dead. Thunderkit will describe all the deaths no matter if she survives or not. No Spoilers!

Colonel-IrritumStudios:

Alright. I'm not sure if you want to hear criticism, but here is some.
1. Hollyleaf died in The Great Battle, so unless this is an AU or Hollyleaf came back someway, she wouldn't be in the tunnels.
2. I believe SkyClan didn't believe in StarClan, they have their ancestors. But correct me if I'm wrong.
However, the idea is really original, and I just can't wait to see what is going to happen! Please continue!
(Happy to see someone from my region XD)

Oh I read the Last Hope already. That was Hollyleaf's StarClan spirit. Maybe she just wanted to spend some time with Fallen Leaves alone :3 And I think SkyClan believes in StarClan. I read the manga and Leafstar was talking to Spottedleaf in a dream.