Finding True Love, No, True Loves
Hi!
Sorry this is not part of the story.
I am just informing you guys of the possible futures.
I plan on rewriting the rape scene. It is not going to be soon, but I am currently very unhappy with it.
I only had my limited amount of words in my brain to work with at the time writing the scene (no internet!), plus I do not have a dictionary and thesaurus with me…internet down (howl).
I want to rewrite it with the help of some reference from other writing I have read; since I have no experience myself (I'm a girl)! So, possible rewrite will be done due to some helpful suggestion I have received.
I am working hard on the rewrite and the fourth chapter, so if, if this was done before December, well, I will just be damned.
I like swearing, sue me .
OK
I kinda need a vote now…help?
First off: Kyuubi (he is going to appear more in the story)
There are many variety people made for his human form and I need one for my story, copying other people is not right, plus they get angry, and angry results in…not good things. Above other things, I am just indecisive!!! Help me please!!!
Personality
kind, gentle, spoke soft words
kind inside, but has problem with words
kind inside, but choice to appear hardcore
Bad-tempered, shouting and swearing like animal (well, he is one…)
Even-tempered, think before acting
Appearances
red hair, bright red like fire
red hair, dark rouge like blood
red eyes, like blood with black slits
bright, golden yellow eyes with black slits
honey thick hazel eyes with black slits
Clothing (think Count D from Pet Shop of Horror)
Chinese style: high collars, left side over right and Chinese knots ()
black silk cheongsams that goes down to the leg with slits on both sides starting from waist, red lining of fox + loose black pants
black silk cheongsams that goes down to the leg with slits on both sides starting from waist, red lining of fox + loose red pants
deep, blood-red silk cheongsams that goes down to the leg with slits on both sides starting from waist, black embroidery of fox + loose black pants
bright, fire-red silk cheongsams that goes down to the leg with slits on both sides starting from waist, gold embroidery of fox + loose white pants
black silk cheongsams that goes down to the leg with slits on both sides starting from waist, gold embroidery of fox + loose black pants
Also….sleeveless or long sleeves?
Han Chinese style: (think Fushigi Yugi)
black garment with red embroidery of fox and red lining collars and cuffs yellow sash
red garment with black embroidery of fox and white lining collars and cuffs black sash
Japanese/ Chinese style: (think Ichigo's bankai clothing)
black garment with blood red lining and sash
flame-red garment with gold lining and sash
Japanese style (think Ichigo from Bleach, or Kenshin from Rurouni Kenshin)
red rope with white puffy-like pants (they are puffy in my opinion)
black rope with cream colored pants (still puffy)
A lot of decisions huh…hehe
Well, if you have anything else for suggestion, they are welcomed .
Please and thank you!
I am really stuck cause Kyuubi is going to appear soon, and I am still rewriting chapter 3 (minor changes) and having writer's block on chapter 4 //////////
