Mena: Wow thanks for it support in this story even through I'm not getting any reviews but reading is just enough for me. I mean u guys are showing it support in other ways so I'm okay. Anyway for a goal for this chapter is to get one review and that's all. Just one it's ok if u guys don't do it it's just a goal for this chapter anyway. Sad.
Rena: you guys made the author cry! You guys should be ashamed of yourselves.
Cece: yea at least give the poor girl a shot ok?
.readers clap hard and write reviews.
I only need ONE review
Rena pov
I woke up on a different ship but this time I was all alone. I was in a prison but I didn't think that I was on Altrea anymore. The door opened from the hallway and came in a man. He had a metal hand which was a claw. It looked menacing and scary. He had jet black hair and orange pricing eyes. Eyes that could look you into the soul and scary the living crap out of you. He had a cut on his back and on his face. He shed no emotion when he walked into the room.
The guard said," Captain, the lady is awake but she doesn't seem to recognize you when you walked in. Are you sure she is the one, I mean, Seris?" The man looked at me then looked at him. The Captain said," Seris might still be her. We don't know for sure but if she isn't we'll kill her to protect the secret." "Who are you, mi lady?" He asked. "My name is Rena." I said. I knew that they were going to kill me but I didn't think so soon. The guard immediately grabbed me and shoved me onto the floor. "My name is Raven but I suppose that u can't tell anyone that now." He raised his sword then it swung down.
I braced myself for the pain but it didn't come. A spear came between us then boom, boom, boom! the ship started exploding. There stood Ara with Elsword and the blonde haired kid. Ara said, "Chung, capture the Black haired guy and maybe we can convince him." The boy named Chung said," Yes mi lady!" Chung and Elsword killed the guard the trampled Raven and tied him up. Ara was untieing me which was pretty easy since the rope was tied by amateurs.
We ran out of the room and jumped off the ship. Aisha suddenly appeared with some motor bikes and we landed on them. We stared the motor bikes and raced across the forest to Altrea village. When we made it, we questioned Raven about why he kidnapped me. We found out that his dead fiancee was killed by velder guard, Alex. Alex was Raven's best friend and also a rival for Seris. He resented him for killing her so now he decided to kill or punish everyone else for Alex's wrong doings.
I couldn't believe that humans were capable of doing such things more or less be resentful to each other. But what am I saying it's not like I'm an elf or anything. I could feel Aisha staring at me for quite some time. Aisha has been acting strange ever since her change into dark magician. But that's Aisha's problem now and I will be here to help her. Friends always come first no matter what. "Oi, Rena-chan do you wanna help me with my dark spells?" She asked. I said,"Sure but after I finish cooking everyone dinner. I went right on back to my cooking.
I finished around sunset so I sat around and noticed a hill out in the backyard. I was curious and climbed the hill. The hill overlooked the sunset and it was a calm but peaceful point. Untouched by demons but yet here on Eloris. I just hope that we can save some of these peaceful places all around the world. I took another deep breath then walked back to the house. I unrealized that I was being watched from a unknown girl.
Who? pov
I watched the girl walk down the hill looking so happy. Soon very soon, I will make Raven mine again but first I will need to take over Eloris. Then I will have all the power and there will be nowhere left to run Raven because soon your bunny-chan will come for you. I will need to take over a host first hmmm but I need to get more interesting information about her.
3rd pov
The girl disappeared into thin air leaving the smell of death and roses in the air. Rena was walking back into the kitchen to finish setting the table. She then sat down onto the couch and fell asleep. The same dark cloud entered her memories even the ones she hasn't found out about yet and studied them. The cloud then transformed back into the girl. The girl said, " Ah, so this is the one who will-" The door clicked open and the girl quickly transformed back into a cloud and floated out of the kitchen window.
"Finally after so many days have taken a shower!" said Elsword. Raven just sighed the walked over to the couch noticing Rena. He found a feather and kept tickling her nose. He leaned in closer and BAM! A foot landed square in his face and Elsword laughed his ass off. Rena was staring at him with an angry expression and said," Tck, how childish I would expect this from Elsword but not you." She stormed off leaving Raven dumbfounded and Elsword still laughing. The girl said," She will pay dearly for hurting Raven but how am I going to get a host?"
Author(Mena): You can't win, girl. But you have to a least try!
The girl said," Thanks subconscious mind!" She ran into her cave and thought of a way to work out her plan. You see this girl is a ghost and people can't see her but she can see them and talk to them. Now her plan is complete and what will await our hero's next chapter?
Mena:Now that she doesn't want to leave Raven where does that put Rena? Who is this girl and why does she want Raven so badly?
Rena: I think I know who it is, it's - #covers mouth#
Mena: no spoilers but anyway please R&R
