Hello people! I know it's been a long time! This is because unlike some
talented fanfiction writers, I can't write great chapters during school.
This is not because I love school or am super smart and must digest
everythiong my teachers tell me. No, it's the opposite of that, I must hear
what my teachers say, otherwise I will bomb my tests and the class, and my
parents simply won't have that, so yeah....
Reviewers!
SilverKnight7: Wow, you're my first reviewer for this chapter too, I thankyou for your support. Yes, here is your update...finally, and yes, much to my chagrin, Marron is dead, but I had to do it.
Ookami no Kokoro: You're kinda scaring me... But you'll get your answers, maybe in this chapter, depends if I feel like it. But glad to have your review!
Blade6: I'm glad you get it, thanks! Here's your update.
Blaze Coyotlhart: You're right! He also kinda, kinda reminds me of Vincent and Sepiroth from FF7 (cuz they're both sorta dead too) Thankyou for the review, and also you'd better watch out about calling Marron your Darling otherwise other fangirls will come and attack you *cringes and looks around*
Frog-saver (Xdscat@aol.com): Yea, it would be nice if I wrote it in a row, but I'm not talented enough to write more than one chapter at a time. Oh, and about that Mille thing, as much as I like the pairing, this is strictly a non-yaoi fic. But you can write one and I'll review it! Or maybe I'll write one after I finish this one.
Rurien: No! Please don't die! Here's your update! Why thankyou for the compliment!
Summary: If you didn't know what this fic was about already, ...that'd be kinda weird.
Disclaimer: I don't own anything... sucks doesn't it?
"..."-speech Blah - thought Chapter: 4
"Know WHAT?!!" yelled Carrot in frustration, voicing what everyone else itched to say.
"hmph mmm, hehheheh. Otherwise, hehheh, you'd know that four months ago, I killed your little 'friend' the mage.
"Wha-What?" everyone gasped.
Ignoring everyone else, "You forget, demon, on the day that I died, I killed you as well"
"Hmpf! That won't happen again little mage. This time, one of will be left standing, and that will be me!" and without much further ado, the demon lunged at Marron, using dark energy to make a stronger blade.
Marron defended using another one of his ofudas to create a barrier. "Brother! Your sword!" With that, Carrot jumped out of his momentary stupor and threw his sword to his little brother.
Before the demon could attack again, Marron used another one of his ofudas and a bright light flashed so that everone was blinded.
"What the heck was that? It did nothing! You must be weaker than I though boy!"
Hmpf, think so? Marron thought and the battle resumed. There were energy balls and phoenix flares flying all around. Finally, one of the hit the demon. He growled and started to run towards éclair
"AGHHHHHH" but was stopped by some sort of force field. "What the..!!"
"I knew you would be dishonest in this fight, because unlike the last fight, there are innocent people standing right at the battlefield. So I cast a barrier around us. This is between you and me..." And the raven-haired mage got that face that he shows only when his loved ones are in trouble. In a blink of an eye he was right next to the demon and ready to strike.
The demon blocked it and started fighting back with renewed vigor and rage.
"AHHHHHH! Die already you worthless human!!" He was fighting so hard and quickly, Marron was starting to lose his upper hand of the battle. All the others could do was stand and watch for just as the barrier would not let the demon reach them, it also prevented them from reaching their comrade.
For a moment there was silence as each fighter jumped a distance from each other. Each breathing heavily and with no small amount of wounds. The demon recovered quickly and sent another energy ball towards Marron and the young mage barely managed to put up a barrier in time.
"Hehheh, human, you grow weak already, what hope do you have of defending these people now? Just give up" With that, the demon stood up and the dark aura around him grew even stronger.
Marron gritted his teeth and lowered his head. "I .. I will never give up" he whispered silently to himself before he suddenly launched himself at the demon preparing to strike the demon's heart with his brothers sword.
"AHHHHHHHH!" he cried, but the demon was quick, and easily evaded the poor mages attack. And before Marron could react the demon used his clawed hands and punched....right through Marron's chest...
To be continued....
Hmmm. Another cliff hanger, sort of. Yes, it went ALL the way through Marron's chest, ain't it sad? Even though he's already dead, it's still sad to write this. I got no more time though. I've pretty much got the next chapter thought up, so if you guys review, I might put up the next chappie sooner, it's not that I don't want to, it's just that I need motivation, sorry guys!
Reviewers!
SilverKnight7: Wow, you're my first reviewer for this chapter too, I thankyou for your support. Yes, here is your update...finally, and yes, much to my chagrin, Marron is dead, but I had to do it.
Ookami no Kokoro: You're kinda scaring me... But you'll get your answers, maybe in this chapter, depends if I feel like it. But glad to have your review!
Blade6: I'm glad you get it, thanks! Here's your update.
Blaze Coyotlhart: You're right! He also kinda, kinda reminds me of Vincent and Sepiroth from FF7 (cuz they're both sorta dead too) Thankyou for the review, and also you'd better watch out about calling Marron your Darling otherwise other fangirls will come and attack you *cringes and looks around*
Frog-saver (Xdscat@aol.com): Yea, it would be nice if I wrote it in a row, but I'm not talented enough to write more than one chapter at a time. Oh, and about that Mille thing, as much as I like the pairing, this is strictly a non-yaoi fic. But you can write one and I'll review it! Or maybe I'll write one after I finish this one.
Rurien: No! Please don't die! Here's your update! Why thankyou for the compliment!
Summary: If you didn't know what this fic was about already, ...that'd be kinda weird.
Disclaimer: I don't own anything... sucks doesn't it?
"..."-speech Blah - thought Chapter: 4
"Know WHAT?!!" yelled Carrot in frustration, voicing what everyone else itched to say.
"hmph mmm, hehheheh. Otherwise, hehheh, you'd know that four months ago, I killed your little 'friend' the mage.
"Wha-What?" everyone gasped.
Ignoring everyone else, "You forget, demon, on the day that I died, I killed you as well"
"Hmpf! That won't happen again little mage. This time, one of will be left standing, and that will be me!" and without much further ado, the demon lunged at Marron, using dark energy to make a stronger blade.
Marron defended using another one of his ofudas to create a barrier. "Brother! Your sword!" With that, Carrot jumped out of his momentary stupor and threw his sword to his little brother.
Before the demon could attack again, Marron used another one of his ofudas and a bright light flashed so that everone was blinded.
"What the heck was that? It did nothing! You must be weaker than I though boy!"
Hmpf, think so? Marron thought and the battle resumed. There were energy balls and phoenix flares flying all around. Finally, one of the hit the demon. He growled and started to run towards éclair
"AGHHHHHH" but was stopped by some sort of force field. "What the..!!"
"I knew you would be dishonest in this fight, because unlike the last fight, there are innocent people standing right at the battlefield. So I cast a barrier around us. This is between you and me..." And the raven-haired mage got that face that he shows only when his loved ones are in trouble. In a blink of an eye he was right next to the demon and ready to strike.
The demon blocked it and started fighting back with renewed vigor and rage.
"AHHHHHH! Die already you worthless human!!" He was fighting so hard and quickly, Marron was starting to lose his upper hand of the battle. All the others could do was stand and watch for just as the barrier would not let the demon reach them, it also prevented them from reaching their comrade.
For a moment there was silence as each fighter jumped a distance from each other. Each breathing heavily and with no small amount of wounds. The demon recovered quickly and sent another energy ball towards Marron and the young mage barely managed to put up a barrier in time.
"Hehheh, human, you grow weak already, what hope do you have of defending these people now? Just give up" With that, the demon stood up and the dark aura around him grew even stronger.
Marron gritted his teeth and lowered his head. "I .. I will never give up" he whispered silently to himself before he suddenly launched himself at the demon preparing to strike the demon's heart with his brothers sword.
"AHHHHHHHH!" he cried, but the demon was quick, and easily evaded the poor mages attack. And before Marron could react the demon used his clawed hands and punched....right through Marron's chest...
To be continued....
Hmmm. Another cliff hanger, sort of. Yes, it went ALL the way through Marron's chest, ain't it sad? Even though he's already dead, it's still sad to write this. I got no more time though. I've pretty much got the next chapter thought up, so if you guys review, I might put up the next chappie sooner, it's not that I don't want to, it's just that I need motivation, sorry guys!
