Do you think this new version is better or the last one?
I'm writing this while watching the X-factor with the family, so sorry for any mistakes.
;) X
I woke up to the feeling of something heavy on my stomach. "Emmett," I said pushing his head off me, "move, your squashing me." He made an umf sound and nudged his head deeper on my stomach. "Em, move your head" I pushed his head a little harder. "What?" he asked sleepily "I'm up, I'm up," he said sitting up straight. I had to laugh. "Can you please tell me why your head ended up on my stomach?" I said giggling but giving him a stern look. "I was cold and you were warm." I laughed at that. When we were making our bed Emmett said he didn't want an airbed or sleeping bag, since those who invented camping didn't have them so he wouldn't either, blah blah blah. He really gets into this camping stuff. "What's the time anyway?" I asked him. "Its 'bout half seven." What is it about waking up early on holiday? "So do you want to get up and go down to the beach with me? I'm wide awake now."
Emmett and me did not go straight to the beach, because I went and got showered, then when Renee and Charlie woke up we all had breakfast and later we all went to find the local Asda. "Go and get what you want and meet us out by the car in about an hour," Renee said walking off with Charlie in toe. I walked around the isles with my trolley and got all the things I wanted. I got some chocolate pop tarts to do on the fire, a new dark blue bikini, just because it called my name, and some other necessities that I had forgotten when I was packing.
Once I had gotten all that I needed and paid for it all, I had half an hour left. So I went to the little cafeteria, got myself a coffee and took my book out of my bag. My book was a new teen fantasy about a coven of vampires kidnapping a young human girl, who is the daughter of the man that wants them all dead. "Here you go miss." said a deep velvet voice that was vaguely familiar. I looked up from my book as he set my coffee on the table. Oh crap, it was the boy I had bumped into and soaked with water. "Thanks," I mumbled sinking deeper into my seat and covering my face with my book. "So, have you soaked anymore innocent victims?" he laughed, it was a deep husky musical sound. "Oh...err, no, sorry... 'bout that, by the way." I was a stammering mess. What is it about this boy that makes my mind and body not work together? "It's cool, it was worth it," he said and then he walked away. Ok, I have no idea what he's on about. He was wearing tight black work trousers that hugged his bum and back of his calves just nicely. On top, he had a deep red Costa coffee t-shirt that clashed badly with his bronze like hair. I read my book for a little longer, drank my coffee and went to meet my family by the car and go back to our tent.
When we reached our tent, we put all the things we had bought away and I helped Renee make a feast for dinner as Emmett eats more than a 12 people party. "So what's next on the agenda pops?" my brother asked with a mouth full of chewed food. "Well, I was thinking we could go and explore the campsite a little bit then go down and have a nice relaxing afternoon on the beach." That sounded like a good plan, I could read a little more of my book and catch some sun. Which for me is next to impossible, Renee always says I am part albino.
Charlie made Em clean up all the dishes as me and Renee made dinner. While he was doing that I took the opportunity to go and change into my new bikini and put some mini shorts and tank top over the top. I put my iPod, book, towel and sunglasses in my brown leather satchel bag. My family call it my Jack Bauer bag, as we're all big 24 fans. When I was ready I went and sat on the beach chair and waited for my family to join me and go down to the beach.
Let me know what you think.
love it, hate it,Good, bad, total rubbish, ok :s ?
is it to slow or missing anythink, got to much of something.
let me know.
much appreciated :)
~ Regan :) x
