Hello just wondering what you readers think! If you want more or if you want to have a character in the story just leave a comment! or if you have some CONSTRUCTIVE criticism id be glad to accept it!

Dark Void arrived to the cave that was marked on the map that was attached to the strange letter. Above the cave entrance there was a log of wood with carvings that read "Come on in, Dark Void". He pulled out his sword and walked into the cave. He traveled along the cave tunnels until he came apon a opening with two figures within it. He tapped the side of his helmet and the Night Vision Enchanment became active, and the whole room seemed to be lit with sun light. What he saw surprised him. Two undead men stood before him. He had seen undead before but never like this. They weren't draugers like he had seen in the ancient nordic crypts. These were people. People who's skin were rotting away, and who's eyes were void of life.

They both turned to Dark Void, and started to shuffle toward him, arms extended ready to grab hold with with thier cold dead hands. Dark Void swung his sword and cut off the Right Zombie's left arm. However it seemed to not even flinch. They kept shuffling toward him. Dark Void took a step back and took a deep breath. In an instance he took another slice at the right zombie, This time lobbing off his head. Before it could hit the floor, Dark Void continued the spin and sheathed his sword, while reaching for his bow. Before the zombies body could hit the floor the left zombie had an arrow through its eye, and fell down next to the other.

He continued stealthily down the cave tunnels until he came to another opening, this one was huge with all kinds of foliage that had been growing around a large body of water at the center. Out of the foliage came three more zombies.

He adjusted the notches on his bow accordingly and loaded up three arrows, pulled back the string, and let loose. The arrows flew across the room and into the three zombie's skulls.

He heard laughing through a cave entrance ahead of him. He slung the bow around his back and pulled out his sword. He carefully walked into the tunnel, and heard the laughter again this time much louder. He came to another room this one looked man made. This was a nordic ruin structure for sure but something was wrong about it. It had the look of a main barrial chamber but all the coffins were open, and all the draugers were dead on the floor. In their place there were fresh bodies of women and children, much like the undead he encountered it the earlier rooms of the cave. The only closed coffin was the main coffin at the back if the room at the top of a staircase.

Dark Void walked over to the closest of the draugers and examined it. The drauger had its chest rippled open, and it seemed that is was missing organs.

"What could have done this?" Dark Void whispered as he examined the opening in the drauger.

"Actually, id call me a who, not a what" a voice said from above the staircase. Dark Void looked over towards the sound of the voice, standing back up and holding his sword. The cover of the main coffin shot up into the air, and fell to the ground. An argonian in glass armour with a glass warhammer strapped on his back, stepped out of the coffin. "To be honest i couldn't tell you. I've been dead for so long i couldn't tell you." The argonian opened his eyes to show that they were glowing amber. He had seen this only one time before. He was a vampire.

The vampire waved his arm and the corpses in the coffins sprang to life with those same lifeless eyes. The two nearest to Dark Void grabbed him and disarmed him of his sword.

"Who are you!?" Dark Void yelled as he was being restrained by the undead.

"I kind sir am Cinder Vile! Sorry about my small fib, but I've been... Dying to meet you!" The Vampire said laughing at his own pun.

"What do you want? Why are you here?!" Dark Void said as the rest of the undead were approaching him.

"Well im what you might call a... Necromancer! Sometimes parts of my beautiful creations... Don't work as well as they should and Draugers wonderful suitors for replacement parts! They're so well preserved! So cursed! So...Dead. AND YOU! well not you... your dead corpse... LEADING THEM! That is an army..." Cinder Vile said as he got to the edge of the staircase. "Worthy of serving lord Sheogorath"

"So that's it then, your Sheogorath's lacky." Dark Void said looking up at Cinder. He arched his wrist until he heard a click. This was his crowning invention. He constructed the gauntlets to spring load two knives. Handy for situations such as this. Two knives poped out of his gauntlet an he caught them. He elbowed the two undead that were holding him back, stunning them. Then stabbing them both in the head. They fell Down dead. He grabbed several Knives from his bandelier and threw them at the undead advancing on him.

"Fool. I. Am. Sheogorath!" Cider Vile exclaimed charging down the stairs with his warhammer drawn.

After taking out the rest of the undead with the last of his remaining throwing knives, Dark Void turned to the vampire. Cinder Vile swung his warhammer at him. Dark Void Rolled out of the way and grabbed his sword off the floor and stopped Cinder`s second swing.

" "The" Sheogorath? Thats hard to believe." Dark Void taughted as he blocked another strike from the vampire.

"You dare question my power?!" Cinder Vile said as he swung the warhammer once again

"You certainly are mad enough." Dark Void taughted again, this time side stepping out of the way and getting distance from the mad vampire. "If you are the daedric prince of madness then show me your power."

"My powers are limited to the shivering islands." Vile said as he Pointed his hand at Dark Void."But that doesn't mean i don't have power!"

Just then from his hands came a push of force that threw him into the wall. The power of the impact was causing him to black out.

"Well, well, well. You mortals never cease to disappoint me!" Vile said sheathing his hammer, and pulling off a small knife. "Just a few cuts and wel be in right shape." As he went to make the cut there was a large crash and vile looked over and groaned "Well it looks like its your lucky day, but don't fret well meet again!" he patted the side of Dark Void's Mask and got up and walked away"Ta Ta. Hero"

I have an idea of where i want to go with this but id like suggestions!