Thank you so much for the reviews I will try to keep the cats you have submitted to me as much to their description as i can but i might change their names. I do have a problem with people cussing me out in reviews please do not cuss in reviews i would really appreciate it.

and to answer a question I got is that Cinderpelt is alive at the same time as Foxleap and Ivypool because I wanted to use some of my favorite characters; so if I don't go on the same plot as the books It's because i wanted to put a twist on things or i wanted my favorite characters in my stories.

as always read and review i still need cats for Leafclan i also want to know how my writing is so if you could rate me on a scale of 1-10 that would be great. also to those of you who haven't read my other stories either look up my name mistystar253 or "warriorwolves" and "scourge's new destiny" don't forget to read and review

~Mistystar2533

Leafstar's P.O.V.

I was i so much pain as ripples upon ripples started from my nose and went down to the tip of my tail. I knew that Iwas kitting and I wished that Crowfeather was here. suddenly I hear running pawsteps and at first I think it's Crowfeather but it turns out to be a cat i've never seen before. The strange she-cat sees what's happening and runs out. When she comes back she has a stick in her jaws and puts it in my mouth when I yowl again. Then the she-cat wet tothe medicine den and grabbed some leaves that smelled familure but I was already in too much pain to reonize the leaves.

Before the she-cat put the leaves by my muzzle she said "Raspberry leaves eat them, don't worry I know what I'm doing."

I nodded and quickly ate the leaves and bit the stick and pushed soon I hear the she-cat say "Good job a little she-kit."

I was panting heavily and the she-cat ran off to get water soaked moss ball. By the time she came back I had another little she-kit by my side still wet from my tongue. I lapped at the water in the moss and started panting again. I screeched in pain as another kit slithered out . The strange cat started licking the bundle of fur and anounced that it was another little she-kit. I was still screeching in pain and bit the stick so hard that it snapped in two and gave one last shriek as another bundle of fur , slightly bigger than the others slithered out into the world. The she-cat started licking the bundle of fur and it let out a high pitched meow just like the others when they were born.

The she-cat started to leave when I said "Wait, who are you and how did you know what herb to use when I was kitting?"

"My name's Fawn and I learned from my mother." Fawn said nervously.

I looked at her and then said "Fawn how much do you know about herbs?"

"Almost everything there is to know."

"How would you like to be part of Leafclan?"

"What's Leafclan?"

"It's a group of cats that live together and the leader has nine lives. I am Leafstar leader of Leafclan and my clan needs a medicine cat to heal wounds and sickness in the clan. Medicine cats do not fight but they can hunt if they want and they can't get attacked by another clan cat. What do you say, will you be our medicine cat?"

"I'd love to join your clan, but where are the other cats?"

"My mate's out hunting and we're still looking for cats to join our clan."

I stood up in my nest and said "I call upon my warrior ancestors to give Leafclan's new medicine cat a new name. Fawn do you wish to step into the wonders of being a medicine cat and interpret signs form Starclan?"

"I do." Fawn said.

I continued the ceremony by saying "I here-by give you the name Shadedfawn."

Shadedfawn looks alot happier now that she could put her herb knowlage to some good use were she would be needed. I'm glad she was willing to come here and help me even though I was a complete stranger. Suddenly I here a voice that I don't reconize.

"Is this the place were you live?"

"Yes. Now please sit down so that I may talk to my mate Leafstar about you joining." Crowfeather said as he padded to the nursery.

When Crowfeather walks into the nursery he sees me and my four kits. I look up and purr when I see my love.

"We need to name them." I said softly.

"What acbout Thunderkit for the tom with the ginger pelt." Crowfeather said.

"Perfect. How about Brightkit for the ginger, black, and white she-kit." I said happily.

"How about Blazingkit for the she-kit with the ginger pelt and grey-black paws and tail tip." Crowfeather said. I nodded happy with that name for the smallest she-cat in the litter.

"And Ravenkit for the black she-kit with red-ginger highlights and one red-ginger paw." I said happily.

"I got you some fish would you like to have trout or salmon or one of each?" Crowfeather said quietly.

I looked at him and said "Two salmons please. Oh, before I forget this is Shadedfawn Leafclan's new medicine cat. She helped me out during my kitting. I heard you brought a cat here?"

"Yes Leafstar I have brought a cat here. He wishes to join our clan."

"What's his name?" I asked gently.

"His name is Soft. He is six moons old and he wants to learn our ways."

"I'll come out right now. Shadedfawn could you look after my kits while I go welcome our new warrior?"

"Of course Leafstar." Shadedfawn said as she curled herself around the kits.

I walked outside the nursery and walked over to were Crowfeather and Soft were waiting. When I got there Crowfeather stood up and said "Soft this is Leafstar. She is the leader of Leafclan and has nine lives given to her by Starclan, our warrior ancestors."

I nodded to Crowfeather and said "Soft do you wish to join our ranks as an apprentice learning our ways and customs?"

Soft nodded his head eagerly and in asset to my question.

"Then until you learn everything there is to know about our ways you will be known as Softpaw and your mentor will be Crowfeather. Crowfeather I trust that you will pass down you skill and courage on to this apprentice." I said then I went back to the nursery and curled around my kits and fell asleep.

Don't forget to Review and I still need cats for Leafclan. So please review me your cats, what rank they are, tom or she-cat, name, rouge, loner, or kittypet, and their warrior name/medicine cat name. Also rate my writing on a scale of 1-10 in a review. Happy Reading!

~Mistystar253