Hey guys, as promised I'm updating today. I didn't get any requests *singular tear* sooo I hope you like it!

Tris POV

I'm eating my dauntless cake but then Uriah steals it from me. I grab Christina's burrito and throw it at him. It hits him square in the face and he yells

"FOOD FIGHT!" The entire cafeteria is soon thick with flying food. Christina grabs my hand laughing, then pulls me into the hallway. We are both covered in food. I look at her quizzically, asking her what she wanted to talk about. Still looking at me, she asks,

"So what are you doing with Four today?" I smile.

"I don't know."

"Well take these just in case," she says forcing birth control pills into my hand. "Also, we have to get you some new lingerie and get you cleaned off AND do your makeup. So we better get started."

1 hour later

"Chris, I have to go, I said I would meet Four." I say nervously, staring at my watch.

"I'm almost done, we just need to figure out what you're going to wear over you lingerie."

"Can't I just wear some pant's and a shirt?" I whine. Her eyes light up.

"I know what you should do, you should wear one of his shirts! Just make sure it covers what your wearing underneath." She says with a wink. I smile, I have on a black push up bra, black thong and garters with black stockings that reach about mid thigh. I slip on a pair of black high heels, then one of Tobias' shirts, which I normally sleep in. Luckily, Chris and Will got an apartment that is joined with mine and Tobias'. So I just slip through that entrance, straight into my apartment. I shut the door behind me and gasp.

There is Tobias, looking gorgeous as usual, still covering the bed in rose petals. I run up to him and press my mouth to his.

"I hope it doesn't seem like I'm pushing you to do anything, I just wanted to be romantic." He whispers into my hair. I shake my head, trying to fight tears.

"No, it's perfect. I love you so much Tobias."

"I love you too, more then anything in the world." I push him onto the bed, smelling the roses all around us. I quickly tug off his pants and start to pull off his underwear when he shakes his head mischievously.

"Your turn." He grins. I didn't think I could ever be excited for something like this, but I am. I lie back onto the bed and pull my shirt off. His eyes grow wide, staring at my garters. "You like?" I ask.

"I LOVE." He answers. He brings his mouth to mine, kissing down my neck and reaching my bra. He looks at me, asking for permission to remove it. I give him a quick nod and his fingers fumble with the clasps.

"God Tris, how do you put these on everyday?" He asks, his eyes pleading for me to help him. I laugh and remove it for him. For a second, he just stares at my chest, then begins to massage my breasts. It feels so good. He begins to slowly suck on my breast, flicking the tip with his tongue. I moan in pleasure, trying not to cry out. He does the same with my other breast and can't contain the cry that slips from my lips. He stops, grinning at me. I need to feel him on me again, I NEED HIM. He kisses his way down my stomach, spreading my legs. He teasingly removes my underwear. "Tobias," I say in between gasps. He kisses my inner thigh and I can't take anymore. "TOBIAS!" I scream. He needs to go faster, this is torture for me. But he just smiles and continues kissing me. Finally, my underwear is off. He takes his tongue and circles my clit. I am grabbing the sheets, twisting them in my hands, I want him to just stay there forever. Then he begins to suck on my clit and inserts two fingers inside me. I can't hold on any longer. I let out a yell. After ten minutes or so, I orgasm and I am now in a state of pure bliss. I am sweating and panting, just like Tobias was last night. He is smiling at me and I smile back. I clutch him to my chest and roll over, so that I am on top of him. He looks at me, expecting me to remove his underwear, but I do not. I lie on top of then whisper in his ear,

"Beg when you want more." He moans, knowing what is coming. But I have to tease him, it is part of the fun. I kiss him, lightly biting his lower lip. I run my fingers over his chest as I kiss his neck, sucking on it. He will have a hickey later, but I don't think he minds. I lick his chest. He moans loudly. I am running my hands over his shoulder blades, pressing him to me as I rub my breasts against his chest. I sigh, it feels so good. Clearly he feels the same way as he gets harder underneath me. I put one of my hands in his underwear and on his hip bone, but I still refuse to take it off. He moans again, but he's not begging yet. I bring my lips to the inside of his knee and kiss my way up his inner thigh. He bucks his hips, but I do not comply. I won't until he begs. I get on top of him, rubbing my crotch over his underwear. It feels just as good for me as it does for him, but I don't let him know. I contain the moan which was about to escape from me. He can't keep it in though, especially when he feels my wetness through his underwear. "TRIS" He screams. But I only smile at him.

"You know what to do if you want more Tobias." I say evilly. But he doesn't reply. I can tell he's trying to be tough. So how do I respond? I take off his underwear, Turning around, I begin grazing his penis with my fingers, so lightly that it is not nearly enough to satisfy anyone.

"Tris, please," Tobias whimpers behind me. I smile.

"Did you say something?"

"PLEASE!" He screams so loudly that the entire compound must have heard.

"Please what Tobias? I have absolutely no idea what you want." I smile coyly.

"Please give me an orgasm!" He yells. I snake my fingers over his thighs and lick his body so close to his penis and testicles, but not quite touching them. I reply to him.

"So are you begging me to give you and orgasm? If so, you have to say that exact sentence."

"Tris, please, I am begging you to give me an orgasm." He pleaded. I smile, then plunge him into my mouth. I turn around so that my vagina no longer is in his face. I swirl his tip around my mouth, massaging it hard with my tongue. He tries to buck his hips but I hold him down. He is screaming my name now. I know he needs me just as much as I need him. A moment later, he explodes. He is still gasping my name, telling me he loves me. I reply, "I love you too Tobias, more then you will ever know." But being near him is no longer enough. Not even if I press against him so that there is no space left. It's just not enough. I need him inside me, merged with me. I climb on top of him and begin grinding against him. He places his hands on my hips, running his hands up my body like I am a work of art. It is not greedy. It is not for his pleasure. It is to tell me how beautiful I am on the inside and out. It is to let me know how much he appreciates my beauty. I am enjoying myself so much. As he get's harder again, I orgasm all over his penis, lubricating it. I roll underneath him, so he is on top of me. I want to make sure he want's this as well though. "Tobias, will you have sex with me?" His eyes look at me with love and caring, but also with a need. A need that I know shows in my eyes as well.

"Yes," he says simply. But then his face falls. "Tris, we don't have protection." I smile at him. "It's okay, Christina gave me the pill this morning." His look of concern vanishing, he smiles at me, loving once again.

"I really don't want to hurt you Tris, please tell me if I do and we can stop." I nod, preparing myself. I know he is big, I know it will hurt. But I don't care. Right now I need this more then anything I have ever needed. He gently inserts himself in me and I feel a twinge of pain which spreads up to my abdomen. But it is definitely less painful then other things I have experienced. Maybe it's because I use tampons. Maybe it's because I broke my hymen during initiation. All I know is that he needs to move faster inside me.

"Faster," I moan.

"Tris, are you sure?" He still looks concerned

"Faster, it's okay." I put my hand on his cheek and he puts his hand over my hand. He soon complies, pushing into me as fast and hard as he can possibly go. We are both moaning, I have never felt anything like this. It feels so good. I feel so close to him, so connected, so alert. I roll on top of him, placing my hands on his chest, going up and down, up and down. Then at the exact same time, we both orgasm. I fall into the pillows beside him. We just look at each other for a second. "Is it terrible that I really just need to sleep now?" I say in a voice that doesn't even begin to express how tired I suddenly feel. Tobias looks at me with the same tired expression. With that, we both fall into a very deep sleep.

The next day

Tobias POV

Zeke is grinning at me from across the table. "What?" I say, realizing how defensive I sound.

"You're glowing." He says simply. I look at him, confused. "You have the 'I just had sex' glow." He says grinning. "So? How was it?" I smile, slipping back into the memories of yesterday. "Wow, that good huh?" Zeke says curiously. I begin to focus on him again.

"The best anyone could ever have." I am still smiling. Then suddenly I leap to my feet. Zeke jumps in surprise. He stares at me like I am a lunatic. "What the hell man?" He says. I don't say anything except, "I NEED TO FIND CHRISTINA!" Zeke looks at me puzzled. "What? Why?" I don't reply, I just run off looking for her.

Christina POV

Four practically runs me over. Straightening up, he says, "I know this is kind of last minute, but I need some advice on jewelry." I smile slowly spreads onto my face.

"How soon do you need it?"

"Tonight."

Tris POV

I haven't heard from Tobias all day. I'm not the clingy girlfriend type but I mean, COME ON! We just had sex for the first time and now he's not even answering my calls! I just wanted to talk to him about initiation, because it's coming up in 7 months and Max asked me to help train the transfer initiates. He usually answers my calls after the first time I call him. So there are only two explanations; 1. He's in some kind of trouble or 2. He's avoiding me. I highly doubt it's the first one. So why was he avoiding me? Was he going to break up with me? Was I that bad at sex? I feel really upset all of a sudden. All the confidence that I had built over the past five months melting away. This is exactly what I was afraid would happen. I feel sick. What if he found someone else that was better at sex then me? What if he was with them right now and that was why he wasn't answering my calls? Then I shook my head. Be reasonable Tris, Tobias wouldn't do that to you, I said to myself. I needed to clear my head, and get rid or these thoughts. I went back to the apartment to take a shower, then get changed for dinner.

2 hours later

I was sitting with Lynn, Chris, Will Uriah, Marlene, Zeke and Shauna, still waiting for Tobias to show up. He usually meets me in the cafeteria, but it is about to close in 20 minutes and he still hasn't come. I am sulky the entire time through dinner. Finally, Tobias comes sprinting into the cafeteria and runs directly to our table, sliding into the seat next to me. For some reason, Christina smiles and whispers something to Will, who begins smiling too. "Did I miss something?" I snap at them. They don't answer, they just keep on smiling. Tobias grins at me and I give him a death glare. "Where have YOU been all day?! I tried calling you and you never answered." He had the grace to look slightly ashamed, saying, "I know I should have called you and I'm sorry. I was getting something made for you at the jewelry store and I wanted it to be a surprise." I looked at him curiously. In answer, he got down on one knee and took out a ring. I gasped, covering my hands with my mouth. The whole cafeteria became silent, all the heads turned towards us. "Tris Prior, I was intrigued by you since I first helped you out of the net and announced you as the first jumper. During initiation I steadily fell in love with you as everyone around you called you a weak stiff and you continuously proved them wrong, by being top in everything. I see in you a strength which I have never seen in another person before. I know that we have only been together for five months, but it has been long enough for me to know that you are the only person I will ever love and I want to spend the rest of my life with you. Will you marry me?" I didn't even answer, I just pressed my mouth to his which I think, was answer enough. The whole cafeteria was stomping their feet and banging their cups on the table, but I had eyes only for Tobias. Then I hear a squeal right next to me. "OMG THIS IS PERF! TEN FOREVER!" Christina yells. We all laugh, then I I hold out my hand so he can put the ring on it. I looked at it closely for the first time. It was beautiful, a simple golden band with three different colors of diamonds on top of each other. They got smaller as they reached the top so It looked like a flower. The first diamond was tinted black, the second gray and the third blue. I looked at him and he whispered in my ear. "A constant reminder of your divergence, and just how special you really are." PLEASE READ MY MESSAGE BELOW AND GIVE SUGGESTIONS!

Yes it's sappy I know, DON'T JUDGE ME! So should I do like a 5 years later? some kind of epilogue? OR should I do a part 2 of I dare you to have sex which is 5 years later, OR should I just end the story here? GIVE ME FEEDBACK SO I CAN EITHER WRITE A CONTINUATION OR BEGIN A NEW STORY!