okay so I got a review from a guest in which he/she told me with his/hers exact words"Just to let you know, most people HATE non-kick stories and won't read them. And another thing is that most people can't stand OCs. And they most definitely hate people pairing OCs with main characters."This is your opinion and I'm not going to spend my time trying to change you don't like my story no one is forcing you to only thing that I'm asking from you is that if you don't like it please stop reading it and don't write an other review like the above,because it really made me you still want to read it go ahead,I know that most people want to read stories with the main characters paired-up,or being in love,but I just wanted to try something different.I had read a million Kick stories-and don't get me wrong,I love Kick-but at some point it becomes...annoying to read the same story with some different ideas.I still read Kick stories and I have some authors that I love their work...but I thought something different would be good enough...

Anyways I hope you like it...

CHAPTER FOUR

-Ever's P.O.V.-

I stopped right on the the hell am I thinking?There's no chance I'm going to be his girlfriend...What am I thinking?

Stop thinking about him.I commanded myself.

But you want to think about him.The annoying voice in my head said.

Shut up!I yelled to the voice.

I walked inside the dojo while slightly hitting my head with my palm...annoying voice,annoying voice...

"Um Ev,are you okay?"Kim asked concerned."What are you talking about?" I asked not realizing the fact they saw me hitting my head."You were hitting your head"Jack said amused."Oh great,now you guys are going to think that I'm crazy...Look I'm fine.I'm great actually!" I said giving them the best smile I could manage lying once more.

Jack looked at me suspiciously...I just ignored him...or at least tried to."I'm Rudy,how can I help you?" a man around his early thirties asked me."Uhh...yeah...I'd like to join your dojo"I said and faked a smile one more time."Sure...follow me"he said and led me to a tiny office.I sat on a small chair and opposite my chair Rudy sat giving me some paper to fill."So you're Kim's cousin?"Rudy asked me trying to make some kind of conversation."Yeah"I simply said filling the gaps in the papers."You two don't look alike at all"he stated."Yeah I'm like my mother and Kim is my cousin from my dad's side"I explained while I handed him the papers.

I walked out of the office only to find Kim trying to help Milton do more than one push-up,Jerry and Eddie sparring and Jack practising on some kind of routine.I didn't knew what exactly he was doing because I could tell they were advanced moves but he was...amazing."Do you mind if I stay here watching?"I asked Rudy and he just said that it's fine so I decided to stay.

I watched them doing some moves...which some of them I could recognise and some-that Kim and Jack were doing-I couldn't even imagine...After one hour they finished and Kim came to talk to me."Hey you are coming tonight aren't you?"Kim said."Coming where?" I asked confused."Ev...you promised,sleepover?"Kim said with pleady crap I totally forgot..think something to ditch,think something to ditch."Oh yeah right I'll be there"I said and faked a smile then took off to the girls lokers room in order to change.

Jack came and sat next to me"Why did you lie before?"he simply said."What do you mean?"I played the stupid card."You said that you were fine,I could tell you weren't though"he said while turning his face to meet minute his beautiful brown eyes met mine-dark green like the forest-I was sure that I could stare into his eyes for the rest of my socked me more though was the fact that he was able to find out that I was lying...no one managed to do that,then Kim came back in."I have to go"I simply said without answering his question...well more of what he commanded but I just left...

-Jack's P.O.V.-

The minute Ever walked inside the dojo hitting her head my mood was better was so cute when she came in hitting her head and mumbling something...Wait what did I just thought?Never mind...Just ignore it...She went inside the office to fill some papers. By the time she was out I had already started doing my routine...I saw Ever's amazed expression made me wanted to stay to see our practise and Rudy let her...

After one hour or so practise was over and I went to talk to and Ever were talking about some kind of sleepover?But just like that Kim got up and went to the lockers room."Why did you lie before?" I asked her."What do you mean?" she asked obviously trying to play the stupid one."You said you were fine,I could tell you weren't though"I said and turned my face to meet hers.I thought I was going to take some unswer or something but then Kim came back in."I have to go"Ever said and quickly left with Kim.

"Hey we are going over to Phil's,are you coming?"Jerry asked me."Yeah,sure"I simply said and followed them to Phil's.

so end of this chapter too...If the guest that wrote the review could write me one more review to answer me I would love to hear his/hers opinion and please explain if he said it as an advice or if he/she said with spice.

Thanks for the support from the other readers...