Naruto - stargate explorer
Attempt 4
This chapter is UNRELATED to the previous chapter. I thought I would be able to write more but apparently... Not.
This idea is pretty much entirely different then the previous ideas. It takes place when Atlantis begins. The expedition finds that Atlantis isn't abandoned at all. But they aren't the original owners either...
004
"The MALP reports the air is breathable and everything seems to-" The technician paused and frowned. "The control room is full of people but..."
"Full of people you say? Try to contact them immediately." General Jack O'Neill ordered. "If they are Alterans then they would be invaluable allies."
"Sending a greeting now sir." The technician reported.
"We are receiving an answer sir. It's audio only."
"Let's hear it then." Jack instructed.
"We want to know who you are and why you send that machine to this place."
"They respond with a demand that is disguised as a question?" Jack murmured. "The gate will shut down in twenty minutes sir. We don't know if we can open a new connection after this."
Before jack could respond the gate shut down.
"What the hell?" Jack cursed. This wasn't supposed to happen!
"Incoming worm hole sir!"
"Origin?" Jack asked automatically.
"Don't know sir." The technician responded.
"Close the iris and wait for the-" Jack was cut off again when a voice spoke through the audio systems.
"We apologize for cutting the conversation short. One of our people cut the connection by accident. This is the first time the gate activates though and we are curious to who you are and how you could connect to this gate. Are you the original builders perhaps?"
This was definitely unexpected. Jack was offered the mic so he could communicate back with them. "We aren't the original makers but we are their descendants. They are our ancestors you could say."
"I see..." The voice answered.
"What was your purpose then in coming to this place?"
"Exploration." Jack answered honestly. "Atlantis is supposed to be the capital of their people. We hoped to be meeting the Alterans but-"
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End
A complete failure. Damn it. Not even one stupid page. Barely a few hundred words! A situation like that just doesn't... Flow right I suppose I could say. As an apology, here is attempt five.
Naruto - stargate explorer
Attempt 5
I want to try a similar scenario like 4 but still different obviously. Remember the episode where an old version of Elizabeth was... kept into stasis? Let's see what happens when our shinobi friends are found in addition of Elizabeth and how they are virtually unchanged. These shinobi friends fought with the Alterans a few weeks/months/(years?) and are familiar with Atlantis and her technology. Our shinobi characters obviously won't let themselves be bullied. And let's face it, Rock Lee alone could probably teach the Tau'ri a lesson in humility. I suppose I should explain that. I have read many SG stories and her expansions. Earth can be very arrogant not to mention naïve, especially in the beginning. They go to a foreign galaxy with who knows what sort of enemies but they don't even have seeds and stuff with them! Young race or not, they made some very stupid mistakes. But enough about that!
ENJOY!
005
"Who are all these people?" Elizabeth Weir asked curiously. "And why aren't they as affected as my... Future double?" She still had trouble with the very concept of a double of herself. Her double had died just a few hours ago. Just before she died they had been directed to another part of Atlantis. A part that had a self contained power generator installed and that would have been able to release the chamber to the surface of the ocean. It had a basic engine and would have brought the chamber to one of the continents before waking its occupants. At least that's what her older double had said.
She had also told them that they were the chosen successors of the Alterans. It was complicated and her older double hadn't been able to explain much. What they did know now was the fact that these people were all that was left of an entire race. A race that had been capable of amazing feats without technology. They had an entire art based on ink, writing and... their own energy.
Elizabeth the younger didn't really understand it and didn't really belief it either. They also had been warned not to imprison them. That they should be respected because if they did something to piss them off that they would be more then capable of disabling every soldier in Atlantis and reversing the roles should it come to that.
Again, Elizabeth the younger had trouble believing that. They were disarmed and would likely be confused and weak from sleeping so long. What could they possibly do to reverse the roles? Elizabeth intended to respect them, but that didn't mean they would be given control. It was her expedition after all. She was in charge. For once.
Poor Elizabeth. She didn't know a number of vital things. They were shinobi. Ninja. Fighters from the moment they were old enough to walk. Killers even. They were able to single handedly destroy a city of hundreds. They had boarded and destroyed dozens of Wraith ships and had sabotaged many more facilities. If they had been found just a few months earlier then there was a small change they would have lost. If they had been found a few years before... Well, they would have still lost the war because they had thought themselves pretty much invincible. The Alterans.
How they had been found was pretty much irrelevant now. Their planet had long since been destroyed. Made inhabitable. Perhaps now, many thousands of years later life has returned their once more but it is unlikeley. The Wraith alone would have made sure to check the planet, either to make sure more of their people couldn't be born or to find themselves a nice snack.
As far as the Wraith were concerned, shinobi were scary but oh so tasty. A single shinobi could last a Wraith days while a normal human would be depleted in... Minutes. If there were survivors then what knowledge they had is likely to be long lost, their abilities been bred out of existence or they were captured by the Wraith and used as cattle or to be more precise they were bred with like cattle for the Wraith's most powerful.
Regardless how you thought about it, the shinobi that were asleep in the stasis chambers in Atlantis were the last of their kind.
"How many of them are there in here?"
"Hundreds." Rodney answered. "And one way or another... They are waking up."
"Can you stop it?" Elizabeth asked.
"I can't." Rodney admitted. "Well, I could try but the system is protected with well thought out programs. They are using sensors, idle computers and other systems to confirm that yes, it is safe to wake them up. Anything I could do now would be pointless because the only result would be that the chamber would be expelled and would then drift to the main land."
"I see." Elizabeth muttered.
"See if you can't find enough clothing for them to wear if they wake up eventually." Elizabeth decided. "I don't think anyone would react well with waking up around strangers without a stitch of clothing."
'Point' Rodney acknowledged.
Short time skip to when all shinobi are resting on beds in the chamber where they were found.
Naruto was the first to wake. He found himself lying down when he firmly remembered 'standing' in the stasis chamber. He checked his chakra reserves by tapping into them and found them sluggish to respond but beginning to wake up as well. He could sense that Kurama was still firmly asleep. He nudged the fox a couple of times but it didn't respond at all. Shrugging, Naruto put his experience and training to good use to do a threat assessment.
Where was he? Was he with allies or enemies? More importantly: when was it?
He could sense a few chakra signatures moving about and judging by the strength of their chakra signatures or the lack of, concluded that he was with civilians. That didn't mean that they were weak or stupid. Advanced weaponry were more then capable of cutting his people down. The war with the Wraith had proven that.
Naruto tapped into his chakra again and noted that he had just enough for a single clone. If he could disguise that clone and keep it in the shadows then he could gather some information. He could sense that the others were sleeping still. They were close in waking up. But at the moment he wouldn't be able to count on them. Besides, even if they were waking up, their responses would be slow. Civilian slow possibly. Considering how slow his chakra was responding and how quick he shook of his injuries especially after he and Kurama made an agreement...
Naruto feigned sleep for a while longer. Tapping into his chakra every ten minutes or so and feeling more pleased every time it responded more eagerly and faster. He estimated that he was at a third of his strength if he were to fight right now. Tapping into senjutsu was right out. Not only was the city submerged in water, but he knew that the more primitive technologies of these people would freak out should it come into contact with his chakra.
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End again
I ran out of juice. Again. Oh well, this is just mostly short attempts huh... This one sucks though.
