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"Why do you hate Jesse?" Mark asked his older brother.

"I know what his daddy did to mommy and daddy." Will said seriously.

"What did he do?"

"He dated mommy, rubbed it in daddy's face, then dumped mommy and egged her."

"What's egged mean?"

"It's when you throw eggs at people."

"That's really yucky, but why do you hate kid Jesse?"

"His daddy is a pukeface, so he MUST be a pukeface too."

"Why?"

"Buy application." He replied, confusing "affiliation" with "application". Will often confused big words, but he loved to use them.

"What's application?"

"You wouldn't get it. You're only five."

"Nah-uh, I'm five and a HALF!"

"No you're not, you just turned five last month!"

"But big kids say 'and a half'."

"They only say that if they turned older a really long time ago."

"A month is too a long time!"

"No it's not!"

"Yeah it is!"

"No it's not!"

"Yeah IT IS!"

"Okay fine, it is a long time."

"Yes it is."

"Willy Wonka and Markie Talkie, it's dinnertime!" Hannah yelled, her head appearing in the doorway.

Will darted down the steps, jumping the last two. "Mom what's for dinner?" he asked, panting.

"Veggie burgers and salad." She answered. Will could tell she was extra busy tonight, she was setting the table for fourteen instead of eight.

"My gosh mom, is this a some creepy way to say that your, like, having five-twins or something?" he asked, furrowing his eye brows, once again getting his words mixed up.

"What? Oh gosh no, I'm not having five babies!" Rachel laughed.

"Then what are the... Oh mother flippin' cheese and rice, not the neighbors!
Please mommy no!"


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