AUTHORS NOTE:

Ok, to tell you the truth I love my fic "What A Girl Wants", but I don't think I've been writing to the best of my ability. I reread my story, and there are some holes here and there that irk me. For instance, Arisa Hatakedasaid that what the hell did the note in the first chapter (well, not to that effect) mean? And I agree. I had meant for the note to play a somewhat bigger role later in the chapter. Also, the personalites of my OC's were not matching in the chapters. Hikaru liked Sayuri, but later he like Natsuki and then Hayate and Sayuri….well, you get it. All because of one typo, some of you became confused. I also want to add more depth to my characters and the plot. A few of you mentioned Sakura was becoming a Mary Sue (gasp!) and to that I have to say that she has a few flaws that were going to be revealed in the later chappies (Like chappies 4 & 5). Maybe I can speed the plot up a bit, or add a flaw or two more? Or maybe I can keep the speed of the plot the way it is, and just crank out a weekly or bi-weekly chapter? Of course, I will write the best I can if I do the latter.

Anyways, I don't know if you peeps will understand what the heck I'm trying to say here, the point is that I have not been writing to the best of my ability. And if I'm not writing with effort, you guys are probably not reading with pleasure (no, I did not get that from a poster in my English teachers classroom). But still, thanks to those of you who offered criticism and others who enjoyed my story. I hope you will like the new version better (I'll delete this one). I will do my best in the revisions!

A bientot!

Aria

PS-If any of you are interested in being a beta-reader for moi, please contact me! Arigatou!