Sorry for the wait; finals suck. But yeah, I'm on winter break, so I'll be posting up chapters more frequently. As you may have seen, I have made several edits on the prior chapter, so you can go check that out if you want to.

To all anonymous reviewers: I'm perfectly fine with ananymous reviews. However, please do not ask questions in anonymous reviews, as my only way to answer is within my own story, and that clutters up space. If you want to ask me a question, get an account.

Numero uno: When I say a Pokémon's name, I mean it and all its evolutionary relatives. So Oddish means Oddish, Gloom, Vileplume, and Bellossom.

Numero dos: Yes, my word is law. Now let's see how many people actually read this.

Numero tres: Completely ignore it if almost everyone in the story has/is that.

Numero quatro: This is very long compared to Flaaffy's. It also requires a lot more math. The reason why is because I want this test to be as accurate as possible. As for the math, I suggest having a piece of paper, a pencil, and a calculator.

Numero cinco: This is very important! I don't care if you ignore everything else as long as you read this! This test is specifically for human (Or at least semi-human) OCs in your own story. Not an OC you sent to another person, but your own story. Pokémon OCs will have their own test, and submitted OCs already have their own test (Check the prior chapter). Thank you.

Numero ses: You may notice that I say 'Mary-Sue' reason a lot. That is because people have different opinions on Mary-Sue reasons, and I don't want to influence a person's score by putting in something specific. If you have doubts on whether it's a Mary-Sue reason or not, ask someone.

Without further adieu, let's begin.

Identity

Their name is made-up (+10)

Their name is a noun, or a variation of a noun, that is not usually a name (ex: Star, Rainbow, Bagel, whatever) (+10)

They go by a fake name for an irrational or Mary Sue reason (+5)

Their name comes from a culture different from their own. (+10)

They are older than thirty (-15)

They go by a title (+7)

They are a trainer and a coordinator (+12)

They are thirteen or younger but have four or more sets of Badges, Ribbons, and/or Symbols (+30)

They are Champion/Top Coordinator of a region (Canon meaning ones that Nintendo have created) (+20. +60 for each region after the first)

Appearance

Their eyes change colors (+15)

They wear glasses (Not sunglasses) (-5)

Their hair is dyed, yet the roots never show and they never have to re-dye it. (+10)

Their hair is past elbow length despite being under twelve (+3)

They wear clothes unfit for travel (Skirts, dresses, tube-tops, heels, flip-flops, sandals) (+5 for each)

They wear a cape/cloak (+5)

...But in the story, they pay the price for unreasonable clothing (-5)

They dress suited to their hometown (ex: A person from Goldenrod wearing something fashionable. A person from Snowpoint wearing something suited for the cold) (-7)

They are considered fat (Not just plump, but fat) (-25)

They are considered beautiful by new people instantaneously, though the OC does not realize it (+15)

Personality

The OC acts all emo and angsty because of their Mary-Sue past (+10)

(Shy, confidence-lacking, nervous, indecisive, arrogant, boastful, snobby, vengeful, grudge-holding, selfish, lazy, jealous, short-tempered, mischievous, procrastinator, annoying, dense, greedy, violent, manipulative, pessimistic, impatient, cold to a fault, blunt, uncaring, cynical, suspicious

Social, sweet, charismatic, intelligent, inquisitive, determined, giving, loyal, understanding, creative, modest, observative, not-easily angered, sagacious, calm-headed, kind, brave, humorous, empathetic, optimistic, patient, cool, caring, believing)

(+3 for each good quality more than bad)

(-3 for each bad quality more than good)

You could only choose five or less characteristics from the two lists combined (+10)

(+3 for each talent they have)

(-3 for each non-talent they have) (Non-talents aren't just things they can't do well. It's stuff that they're bad at doing)

One or more of their talents is so exceptional, they're internationally known for it (+15 for each)

(-5 for each fear they have)

History

They were experimented on, without consent (+10)

They were tortured (+10)

They were saved by a legendary (+5)

...Because of a Mary-Sue reason (+15)

Pokémon

Only use the Pokémon the OC is going to have. So if she has a Cyndaquil now, but it's going to evolve into a Typhlosion, you're going to fill out this part for a Typhlosion. If you can't find a Pokémon, Ctrl + F is your friend.

(You Suck: Articuno, Zapdos, Moltres, Mew, Mewtwo, Raikou, Entei, Suicune, Lugia, Ho-oh, Celebi, Regice, Regirock, Registeel, Latias, Latios, Kyogre, Groudon, Rayquazza, Jirachi, Deoxys, Uxie, Azelf, Mesprit, Dialga, Palkia, Giratina, Arceus, Darkrai, Cressilia, Shaymin, Heatran, Phione, Manaphy, Regigigas, Victini, Cobalion, Terrakion, Virizion, Voltolos, Tornelos, Landlos, Zekrom, Reshiram, Kyurem, Meloetta, Genesect

Mary-Sue: Eevee, Riolu, Zorua

Cliché: Bulbasaur, Charmander, Squirtle, Pichu, Vulpix, Growlithe, Lapras, Dratini, Chikorita, Totodile, Cyndaquil, Larvitar, Treeko, Mudkip, Torchic, Ralts, Trapinch, Absol, Bagon, Beldum, Turtwig, Chimchar, Piplup, Spiritomb, Gible, Snivy, Tepig, Oshawott, Deino

Common: Gastly, Scyther, Elekid, Aerodactyl, Togepi, Misdreavus, Sneasel, Skarmory, Houndour, Skitty, Aron, Budew, Zangoose, Swablu, Feebas, Duskull, Shinx, Rotom, Axew, Druddigon, Rufflet

Neutral: Pidgey, Abra, Ponyta, Rhyhorn, Magikarp, Magby, Horsea, Munchlax, Chinchou, Mareep, Murkrow, Heracross, Taillow, Sableye, Elektrike, Plusle, Minun, Seviper, Castform, Tropius, Shuppet, Snorunt, Starly, Craindos, Sheildon, Pachirisu, Buizel, Drifloon, Lillipup, Purrloin, Blitzle, Cottonee, Petilil, Sandile, Tirtouga, Archen, Minccino, Deerling, Emolga, Joltik, Litwick, Pawniard, Larvesta

Uncommon: Caterpie, Sandshrew, Nidoran (M & F), Onix, Cleffa, Igglybuff, Zubat, Oddish, Meowth, Venonat, Psyduck, Poliwag, Geodude, Seel, Cubone, Tyrogue, Lickitung, Happiny, Staryu, Kabuto, Ditto, Porygon, Sentret, Hoothoot, Azurill, Hoppip, Aipom, Yanma, Teddiursa, Miltank, Poocheyena, Wurmple, Surskit, Shroomish, Nincada, Mawile, Torkoal, Kecleon, Spheal, Lileep, Burmy, Combee, Cherubi, Buneary, Glameow, Skorupi, Snover, Pansage, Pansear, Panpour, Pidove, Audino, Venipede, Sewaddle, Darumaka, Gothita, Cubchoo, Mienfoo, Bouffalant

Rare: Weedle, Spearow, Ekans, Mankey, Machop, Bellsprout, Tentacool, Slowpoke, Magnemite, Grimer, Shellder, Krabby, Koffing, Tangela, Kangaskhan, Pinsir, Tauros, Ledyba, Spinarak, Natu, Bonsly, Sunkern, Wooper, Wynaut, Girafarig, Pineco, Gligar, Snubull, Shuckle, Swinub, Corsola, Remoraid, Delibird, Mantyke, Phanpy, Stantler, Smeargle, Zigzagoon, Lotad, Seedot, Wingull, Slakoth, Makuhita, Nosepass, Meditite, Volbeat, Illumise, Gulpin, Carvanha, Wailmer, Numel, Spoink, Cacnea, Lunatone, Solrock, Barboach, Corphish, Anorith, Baltoy, Chingling, Kricketot, Shellos, Stunky, Bronzor, Hippopotas, Croagunk, Finneon, Patrat, Munna, Roggenrola, Woobat, Dribur, Timburr, Tympole, Throh, Sawk, Basculin, Maractus, Dwebble, Scraggy, Yamask, Ducklett, Frillish, Ferroseed, Klink, Tynamo, Golett, Vullaby

Original: Rattata, Paras, Diglett, Farfetch'd, Doduo, Drowzee, Voltorb, Exeggcute, Smoochum, Goldeen, Mime Jr., Omanyte, Unown, Slugma, Dunsparse, Qwilfish, Whismur, Spinda, Clamperl, Relicanth, Luvdisc, Bidoof, Chatot, Carnivine, Sigilyph, Trubbish, Solosis, Vanillite, Carrablast, Foongus, Alomomola, Elgyem, Cryogonal, Shelmet, Stunfisk, Heatmor, Durant)

Note: If the Pokémon is the OC's starter, multiply the amount added or subtracted by 1.5

(+70 for each 'You Suck' Pokémon)

(+30 for each 'Mary-Sue' Pokémon)

(+18 for each 'Cliché' Pokémon)

(+6 for each 'Common' Pokémon)

(-6 for each 'Uncommon' Pokémon)

(-12 for each 'Rare' Pokémon)

(-18 for each 'Original' Pokémon)

They have a Pokémon that can't be obtained without going somewhere, and they haven't gone there. (Ex: Leafeon/Glaceon, which can only be obtained by going to the Mossy/Icy Rocks in Sinnoh, Probopass/Magnezone which can only be obtained by going to Mt. Coronet.) (+15)

Their starter is native to their hometown (Native means one route away, or obtainable in that town) (-10)

Their starter is an official regional stater that they got from a professor (ex: getting a Charmander from Professor Oak, or an Oshawott from Professor Juniper) (-12)

This Pokémon is part of a three-part evolution line, but does not ever evolve (ex: Cleffa, Weedle, Pichu) (-Two-thirds of the points gained)

This Pokémon is part of a three-part evolution line, but only evolves once (ex: Grovyle, Staravia, Gloom) (-One-third of the points gained)

This Pokémon is part of a two-part evolution line, but doesn't ever evolve (ex: Phanpy, Yanma, Snorunt) (-Half the points gained)

The OC saved this Pokémon from death (+5)

This Pokémon was mistreated by his/her former trainer (+10)

The Pokémon is a shiny (+60 for each)

(Repeat for each Pokémon)

They have more than five Pokémon in their reserve (+10 for each one over five)

Other

The OC has supah powers (+50)

You make the OC better than pretty much all the other characters in the story (+20)

Score

Below 0: Dude, you rock.

0-50: Awesomesauce. However, you might want to ask another person for their opinion; your OC could be too boring. Or it might just be that most of these didn't apply because you didn't put in enough.

50-100: You're crossing the Mary-Sue line. It's probably best to make some edits, just to be safe~

100-150: ...Yeah. Go. Make edits, then come back.

150-200: It's probably best to scrap that character. You can still probably keep a few things, but take out the parts that scored you the most points on this test.

200+: ...You fail.

I'm sorry if your OC has a high score. It might be that the test screwed up, or it might be that your OC actually is a Mary Sue. The best way to tell if your character is a Sue or not is to ask another person. Just please don't refuse to belive your character is a Sue because of what she got on this test.

Note that I will be making several edits to this test; altering it to make it as accurate as possible.

Please, critique~ I know this test is not accurate, and I will continue to work on it to be as precise as possible, and knowing what you think is wrong is incredibly helpful. Also, I'd love to see some of your OC's results~