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Raven still did not know why she laughed. He just stood there. "Where is there?" pondered Raven as he stands there. "C'mon Raven, Let's go the lake!" Yumi said grabbing Raven's hand. She is pulled him but Raven just stood there. "I am stooding here." He told her. "But I want you to come with me!" Yumi told him. "Come. With you?" Raven is repeated. "Yes, trust me. It'll be fun!" she said. Ok "Raven is said."

They is walked to lake. Then Raven stood at the lake. He stood there. "Lake" he replied. Yumi laughed again. Raven is stood and laughed too. Then Yumi did something. Raven thought it was something but it wasn't. Raven stood. Yumi have jumped in the lake. "What you doing?" Raven asked. "I'm just going for a swim. You want to come? Please?" she said. "What are your doing?" Raven is asked as he stood at the lake. Raven walked into the water of lake. He said "Water." Raven just stood at the lake but he was already in the lake. Raven. "Raven is wants to go to house." Raven answered.

Yumi got out and dry off. "What is this" Raven said. "What is what?" Yumi asked. She was puzzled. "Look" Raven is say at Yumi. He is stood by house. He is look at house. He will go in house. He go in house. "In house go Yumi." Raven shouted. Yumi come in. "You remember my name!" Yumi said happy. Raven is happy too. He sit on chair. "Sit chair on me with." Said Raven. "Ok." Yumi sit on chair. "So is this your house?" Yumi ask Raven. "When?" Raven retorted. "Is my house?" he sit on the chair. Then a old lady in pink dresses come in and say, "Get out of my house!" at Raven and Yumi. Raven said "I pick B" Lady hit Raven. Raven don't like. Raven say ouch. Yumi is ask, "Are you ok?" Raven said nodded. They walk out house of. Raven said "I no like house" said Raven.

Then Yumi and Raven walked. Walked. Ran. Walk. Skipped to store. Raven walk with Yumi. Yumi is front of Raven. Raven say Yumi is? Yumi is say, "Raven, we're going to the store to buy something to eat! Are you hungry?" Raven stood at the store. He looked at meat. He looked at fish. Look at salt and money and cereal. He look at carrots. "He say carrot" he said. Yumi smiled. Raven smile. "Ok if you want, I will buy you a carrot." She is said. Raven said no I want carrot he asked. So Yumi bought to carrots. Gave one to Raven and one to her. "Raven eat" Raven eats carrot. Raven eat more of carrot. Raven eat more of carrot. Raven eat all of carrot. Raven finish carrot. Yumi is eat all too. "Fish." Raven asked. Yumi laughed. Raven did not know why she laughed. Then he tripped over a carrot leaf and died.

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Was it good? Raven will be back, he can die from carrots. He is allergic. Please review me hanger.