A/N Hermione is NOT turning into a Mary Sue. Yes when she will finally
return to her plane, she will be too powerful. But as u will see in the
chapters to come her powers weren't powerful enough to save her in this
dimension. And let me warn u, it gets extremely gory in some parts from
here on. I said I got some ideas from the Diablo series, and I will be
providing links to pictures of these monsters, so it will help u visualize
the true terror I'm trying to convey through my writing. Now that I'm off
my soapbox, on with the story!!!
The True meaning of Agony
It had been six months ago. It was hard to believe that little amount of time had passed. She had changed; she was taller, more athletic. Her once bushy, long hair was now cropped short. Her eyes as promised had changed color. They were now pure white. Hermione reflected on these changes with a little pride. She knew she'd be able to get any guy she wanted when she went back to Hogwarts. IF she ever got back, she reminded herself with a mental shake. For the most part Hermione liked these changes. She had always wanted to learn. Now she knew what nobody else on her plane could ever hope to comprehend. She supposed it was arrogant, but the past six months had taken a toll on her spirit, she had seen so many horrors, she thought nothing would affect her anymore. But she would be proved wrong very shortly.
Caleaoch had left Hermione in charge of guarding a small village in the rain forests of Kurast. She knew Hermione had been on a very trying quest and needed some time to calm herself, and to fully recharge her spirit. Hermione loved the village. The people there were very kind, and she always played with the little children. "Protecky" they would call her, since they couldn't pronounce anything else. She loved them.
It was morning, directly after dawn, the dew was still on the grass. Hermione woke up, with fear in the pit of her soul. Something foul was amiss. She felt evil everywhere. She quickly dressed in her armor, grabbed her staff and ran outside. Nothing could have prepared her for what she saw. The village was on fire. A Horde was running through the village setting the huts ablaze. The village men were fighting back, and having much success. Hermione called on a Hydra. It took quick work of them. But they were only the first string. Baal himself followed his army of demons. The Lord of Destruction and his bestiary surged toward the village. It was a massacre. The village men couldn't fight off the Corrupted and were slaughtered where they stood. Hermione was fighting as many as she could, but as soon a she felled one another took its place. She was starting to tire. A piercing scream filled the air. As Hermione turned toward the sound she saw Meganne, one of the children that she played with witness her father's death. A Blunderbore had swung his human- club straight down on him. He split in half down the middle spraying Meganne with gore. Hermione ran towards Meganne and was about to reach her when Baal stepped directly in her path. His tendrils ensnared her where she stood. She tried to blast them off, but there were so many! Three wrapped around her throat and started to squeeze, her vision was getting black.
Right as she thought she would pass out, the three tendrils released her. She found herself lifted in the air and moved towards Meganne. She screamed her name but couldn't move. Tears were streaming down her face. Meganne was wailing as the Blunderbore decided she would make a better human-club. As the little girl scrambled to get out of his path, he caught her with his giant hand. The child was crying as the creature started to wrap his chains around her. Soon she couldn't move any more. All Hermione could hear was her frantic screaming. Hermione heard other frantic screams, and realized that they were her own. She watched helplessly as the giant swung the still screaming girl over his head. He brought her down with enough force to shatter the roof of the house she hit. Meganne's screaming stopped. Hermione's began in earnest. The Dumbledore lifted his human-club, and Hermione could see Meganne, what was left of her. It was mainly gore held together by chains.
Hermione waited for her death, but she was not to get off so easily. Baal turned to her. "So my pet we meet at last. We shall have fun playing with you. Especially my sister Andarial, whom you sent back to Hell. Well you'll soon know the true meaning of Hell." With that he swung a tendril sharply at Hermione's head. Her head snapped back unconscious. Red wisps of lights surrounded her as Baal took his prize with him to Hell.
A/N cliffhanger I know, maybe it'll make some of u read? I warned u it got gory, and u ain't seen nothing yet. But after she gets back the whole H/H thing is fluff, so I'll be atoning myself! fluff w/ some angst and plot that is. byeeeee!!!!!!!!! PS I don't own either of these series, if I did, I'd be buying all the computers I could! PSS. I could really use somebody to beta-read for me, as I'm still catching errors after I proofread my story myself. If any great merciful person would please help me, my e-mail is bluehope84@hotmail.com!
The True meaning of Agony
It had been six months ago. It was hard to believe that little amount of time had passed. She had changed; she was taller, more athletic. Her once bushy, long hair was now cropped short. Her eyes as promised had changed color. They were now pure white. Hermione reflected on these changes with a little pride. She knew she'd be able to get any guy she wanted when she went back to Hogwarts. IF she ever got back, she reminded herself with a mental shake. For the most part Hermione liked these changes. She had always wanted to learn. Now she knew what nobody else on her plane could ever hope to comprehend. She supposed it was arrogant, but the past six months had taken a toll on her spirit, she had seen so many horrors, she thought nothing would affect her anymore. But she would be proved wrong very shortly.
Caleaoch had left Hermione in charge of guarding a small village in the rain forests of Kurast. She knew Hermione had been on a very trying quest and needed some time to calm herself, and to fully recharge her spirit. Hermione loved the village. The people there were very kind, and she always played with the little children. "Protecky" they would call her, since they couldn't pronounce anything else. She loved them.
It was morning, directly after dawn, the dew was still on the grass. Hermione woke up, with fear in the pit of her soul. Something foul was amiss. She felt evil everywhere. She quickly dressed in her armor, grabbed her staff and ran outside. Nothing could have prepared her for what she saw. The village was on fire. A Horde was running through the village setting the huts ablaze. The village men were fighting back, and having much success. Hermione called on a Hydra. It took quick work of them. But they were only the first string. Baal himself followed his army of demons. The Lord of Destruction and his bestiary surged toward the village. It was a massacre. The village men couldn't fight off the Corrupted and were slaughtered where they stood. Hermione was fighting as many as she could, but as soon a she felled one another took its place. She was starting to tire. A piercing scream filled the air. As Hermione turned toward the sound she saw Meganne, one of the children that she played with witness her father's death. A Blunderbore had swung his human- club straight down on him. He split in half down the middle spraying Meganne with gore. Hermione ran towards Meganne and was about to reach her when Baal stepped directly in her path. His tendrils ensnared her where she stood. She tried to blast them off, but there were so many! Three wrapped around her throat and started to squeeze, her vision was getting black.
Right as she thought she would pass out, the three tendrils released her. She found herself lifted in the air and moved towards Meganne. She screamed her name but couldn't move. Tears were streaming down her face. Meganne was wailing as the Blunderbore decided she would make a better human-club. As the little girl scrambled to get out of his path, he caught her with his giant hand. The child was crying as the creature started to wrap his chains around her. Soon she couldn't move any more. All Hermione could hear was her frantic screaming. Hermione heard other frantic screams, and realized that they were her own. She watched helplessly as the giant swung the still screaming girl over his head. He brought her down with enough force to shatter the roof of the house she hit. Meganne's screaming stopped. Hermione's began in earnest. The Dumbledore lifted his human-club, and Hermione could see Meganne, what was left of her. It was mainly gore held together by chains.
Hermione waited for her death, but she was not to get off so easily. Baal turned to her. "So my pet we meet at last. We shall have fun playing with you. Especially my sister Andarial, whom you sent back to Hell. Well you'll soon know the true meaning of Hell." With that he swung a tendril sharply at Hermione's head. Her head snapped back unconscious. Red wisps of lights surrounded her as Baal took his prize with him to Hell.
A/N cliffhanger I know, maybe it'll make some of u read? I warned u it got gory, and u ain't seen nothing yet. But after she gets back the whole H/H thing is fluff, so I'll be atoning myself! fluff w/ some angst and plot that is. byeeeee!!!!!!!!! PS I don't own either of these series, if I did, I'd be buying all the computers I could! PSS. I could really use somebody to beta-read for me, as I'm still catching errors after I proofread my story myself. If any great merciful person would please help me, my e-mail is bluehope84@hotmail.com!
