Author's Note: So, after the dark subject material last chapter, here's a cutesy chapter about sisterly love that's rated K.

Chapter warnings: It's written in the form of an essay, which I don't usually do when writing fanfiction, so, bear with me. Also, I can't write essays written by adorable twelve-year olds to save my life.


Bobbin Comstock's POV

Bobbin Comstock

Ms. Carter

English

Grade 6

Prompt: Using the sentence and paragraph structures we have learned in this unit, write an essay about your hero and what makes them your hero. There is no word limit, but you must write a minimum of five paragraphs.

My hero is my older sister, Victory Comstock. She is the best sister ever. Victory is eighteen and has blonde hair, blue eyes, and wears glasses because of the time her father took her to the gun range the Marines and the World Nobles like to practice at. Victory and I live with our parents at a penthouse suite at the MGMT Resort and Casino on the Mandalay Island Strip.

I was born when Victory was six years old. I was born a month early, and the doctors said that I didn't have a good chance of survival. Victory was very scared that I would die, but, miraculously, I survived. Ever since I was born, Victory has done everything she can to be the best sister ever. She takes me to the movies, she helps me with my homework, and she comforts me when I have nightmares. These are some of the things Victory has done to make her the best sister ever.

Our parents actually own the MGMT Resort and Casino, so we get to live there. There's a pool, an arcade with lots of video games, shops that sell yummy treats, and other fun things. However, a lot of bad people are trying to take away our home from us. Mom and dad said it's because a lot of the casinos on Mandalay Island are in competition with each other to get the most money. Because of all of these bad guys, mom and dad started to train Victory with various weapons when she turned twelve years old. Victory's favorite weapons to use are machetes, bows and arrows, and huge bazookas that shoot out beanbags. Mom and dad said that they're going to start training me with weapons soon. However, Victory wants to train me, because she knows what's best for her little sister.

Unfortunately, Victory met some new friends. Their names are Weldon, Reno, and Blythe. They were really nice, but Victory wanted to go with them, so after a long talk with mom and dad, Victory packed her things and left home, saying that she's going to be a pirate, just like Monkey D. Luffy. I was really sad when Victory left home, but she writes to me all the time and talks about Weldon, Reno, and Blythe. She also made more new friends named Clinton, Im-Jin, Bryn, Wynn, Benito, Hamlet, and Esther. She also told me that she met three pirate crews. One of them is the New Eagle Island Pirates, one is the Ophiuchus Pirates, and the other is the Libra Pirates. Victory can't pick a favorite crew from the three, but she said she really liked Jordana from the New Eagle Islanders, Colin, Maureen, and Cibola from the Ophiuchus Pirates, and Otsubo from the Libra Pirates. I want to meet Jordana, Colin, Maureen, Cibola, and Otsubo some day. If they're my sister's friends, then they must be awesome friends.

In conclusion, Victory is the best older sister I could ask for. She keeps me safe, she likes hanging out with me, and she wants to make sure that bad guys don't take our home away from us. I miss Victory so much, and I just want her to come home safely with all the new friends she's made. Then, I want her to defeat the bad guys trying to hurt mom and dad, because at the end of the day, Victory loves her family.


Bobbin,

Please see me after class. Your stories about "a lot of bad people" trying to hurt your family, Victory getting her eyeglasses after an incident at a shooting range, and the pirates she hangs out with concern me.

- Mrs. Carter