Hey Kaitlin here. I have gotten a couple of reviews saying that I shouldn't ask for reviews. And I thought about it and though I would like reviews
If some people had the courage to point it out that their must be some that don't and that is how some people feel
I will no longer be asking for reviews. if you feel like it go ahead but im not going to force it as though the reviews were ones I don't like getting . Contructive critism comes in all shapes and sizes and im guessing this is one of them
So enjoy and well yeh enjoy.
Bella's Point of view:
Beep beep * ugh I guess its time to wake up and get ready for school. Yah school ! note my sarcasm but at least I get to see Alice. She may be still mad at me though because she seemed real upset last night plus I called her last night and she didn't answer which is strange for her. Oh well if im going to school I should get ready for it.
I got out of my bed pulling my Purple comforter up over my white sheets and setting my green pillows over both. I walked over to my closet that Alice has said on many occasions that "it's a disgrace to her 'Culture'." Yeh that one never gets old. I pulled out my red shirt and put some pink jeans on. Haha I guess this is an example of why Alice keeps saying I am 'unfashionable' but you know I don't care its not like im getting ready to walk a runway… Its just school.
I then go to the bathroom where I wash my face and brush my teeth while giving my self a once over. I didn't look as beautiful as Alice not even close. I would get picked on today but Alice always stands up for me.
I walk down stairs and take a granola bar and run out to my red 53' chevy pick up and going to school.
Alice's point of view:
I am getting ready for school pulling out some black Jean Knickers with shoelace material at the bottom , A scarlet red silky tank top, with a black lacy tie over with Black fishnets going down my arms. With red converse. I will look good today which is no surprise.
I then decided to make my self look real hot for Jasper by putting makeup on. I put eyeliner lightly below my eyelashes at the bottom of my eye and put some on at the beginning of my eyelids. With beige close to my skin color eye shadow going above my eyeliner. I then put Mascara on my top eyelashes. I didn't need foundation because my skin was perfectly clear. I put pink clear glossy lip gloss over my full lips. I then lightly put Some red blush along my cheek bones.
I was ready to go since I don't eat breakfast.
I ran out to my black Mercedes a car that Bella is honestly jealous of because though she may not know anything about fashion she knows everything there is to know about cars and Mercedes are her favorite kind of cars and it turns out im rich enough to own one.
Bella really upset me last night that's one thing the grinds my gears when someone doesn't listen to what im saying and she knows that.
She's going to be picked on today but you know what? If she don't want to act like my friend im not going to be there to stand up for her. She needs to learn how to stand up for herself. Harsh words but they are true im sick of being her body guard only to be ignored later.
I am now pulling into the parking lot and parking into the parking spot issued to me when I first came to this school. I spotted Bella's pick up truck and if on cue she walked over to me and knocked on my window. …………………………..
Bella's point of View:
I was just pulling into my parking spot when I noticed a black Mercedes with tinted windows. It was Alice's Car so I got out and walked over to her car knocking on her windows. I had no idea if she was even there because the windows were so tinted. She then opened the door and got out.
I then looked at her and instantly regretted it… she looked really hot today. I said "Hey Alice." She then looked up at me and I seen something in her eyes that I couldn't exactly figure out… anger? "Oh hey Bella." She then walked away and went in to the school I tried to catch up to her but she was already gone. School today was going to be interesting.
English class is my first class. I walked in and Mrs. Smith smiled at me because I was her star pupil. We were doing a writing unit easily my favorite thing to do is writing and one day I hope to be a famous author with my books becoming major motion pictures. I looked at the door just in time to see Alice come in and she looked really pissed.
The teacher looked at her and smiled because she was her other star pupil and she just kept walking so I waved to her and she glared at me… wait glared? I just shrank back in my seat she then sat in her chair.
John Beckons Then turned around in the seat he was in and looked at Alice who was writing something in her notebook. He then said "Aw is little miss Alice Cullen having a bad day, Did you and Bella have a fight?" Then Alice looked up and she looked really pissed. Wow this was weird attitude for her she's usually a very peppy type of person. She then said "John Shut the fuck up, Turn around and mind your business!" WHAT!?! Omg she then looked at me glared at me again and went back to writing , John being stunned turned around and left it alone.
The next class I had was gym and sadly it wasn't with Alice so people picked on me without Alice being there to stand up for me. I also hit someone in the face with a volley ball. I'm sure she wants to kick my ass now.
Then it was lunch so I walked into the lunch room to see Alice already at our table so I walked up and sat across from her not eating any thing because I wasn't hungry.
"Hey Alice" she then looked at me and was still obviously pissed and said "Hey Bella" I then looked at the bagel she was tearing apart and said "Look Alice is something wrong?" She then looked at me without emotion in her face. She then totally ignored my question and asked one of her own "Bella I'm going to a party tonight do you want to go with me?" I then started to look down and said "I don't know Alice…" She then got that pissed look in her face so I said "Okay" she then looked at me and said okay.
The rest of the day passed in a blur and I went home without Alice to get ready which is really weird because she usually there to help me.
Alice's Point of view:
Bella was still knocking on my window so I opened the door and got out looking down because I was in a really pissed off mood because of last night. She then said "Hey Alice" I then looked up and she looked into my eyes probably realizing I was angry and I said "Hey Bella" I then walked off her probably trying to catch up to me and walked into English which I had with Bella and I didn't want to see her. Mrs. Smith then smiled at me because I'm one of her 'star pupils' I just walked off probably offending her but I didn't care. Then Bella waved at me and I glared at her she then shrunk back in her seat probably not used to me glaring at her.
Like the teacher at this point I really didn't care if I offended her. I then sat down doodling random things in my notebook and John Beckons then said "Aw is little miss Alice Cullen having a bad day?" yes why do u care I thought "Did you and Bella have a fight" Not really but sort of but its really none of your business. I then said "John shut the fuck up, Turn around and mind your business!" wow did I really just say that. I then looked at Bella and she was gawking at me this just pissed me off even more so I glared at her and went back to writing.
The next class I had was art but I decided to skip that class and chill in the bathroom so there wasn't much to do.
It was then lunch so I entered the cafeteria noticing Bella wasn't at our table yet. That was good I needed time to calm down so I walked up to the line and bought an apple and went back to t he table
Bella then walked in and sat across from me. She said "Hey Alice." And I looked up still pissed and she noticed that and I said "Hey Bella" she then looked down and said "Alice is something wrong?" I then looked up her and it took everything I had not to explode on her so I wiped the emotion from my face and said "Bella I'm going to a party tonight do you want to go with me?" she then took a second and said "I don't know Alice…" I then got pissed again she then said "Okay" I then looked at her and said okay.
The rest of the day I skipped and went home to get ready for the party… fuck Bella she's going to have to get herself ready.
What do you think?
