well any ways I hope you like this chapter. Sorry It took to long I was trying to make an Acura RL in blender 3d and I'm stuck on the glass.. well any ways ,you guys don't want to listen to my excuses you want to read the story. :D

CHAPTER FOUR


"So what happened" Sakura asked. Sai had a annoyed look on his face when she said that because he thought it was so obvious. Kakashi on the other hand was way too nervous so he silently dissapeared while every one was watching Naruto and Sakura have a little ' word fight' then Sakura punched him when he called her 'ugly'. Sakura then went behind a big tree so as to let the unconscious Hinata have some pricacy while sakura healed and bandaged her. meanwhile, all the boys wondered where Kakashi went to. They stopped their little debate when Sakura came back from behind the tree carying a heavily bandahed Hinata. Said person was fast asleep laying next to Sakura who was sitting down. Sakura poked two holes in the bandages for Hinata to breathe and a long line for her mouth. Sakura glanced at Hinata before speaking."She had way to much chakra in her system but the werid part is that the chakra sort of leaked out ya know." She looked at Naruto "Did you have any thing to do with this, baka?"

Naruto gave a sigh.' If I say I did it no doubt i'll get a fist to my head. Sakura is getting too annoying and hard to deal with.' So instead he just said. "It depends, Sakura."

Sakura noticed that there was no '-chan' with her name. Her face became red' Grr, Naruto how dare you talk to me like that. Show some respect, foool' she had to control herself from saying it to out loud. But Neji and Shino noticed that Sakura was angry but Naruto was too busy ( and tooo oblivious) because he was looking at Hinata to pay attention to her outburst . Sakura looked at Naruto who was looking at Hinata with concern. ' I wonder why Naruto never looked at me like that.' She stood up."Well i'm going to go, see you later, Naruto-kun" She said'Naruto-kun' with added emphasis. She then turned around to look at Naruto.

Naruto did not turn around to look back at Sakura." Why are you leaving Hinata?" He wondered why Sakura was leaving. She could not jut leave her there in her condition. She might die like this, and he could not have anyone dying in his hands. He did not want to feel useless because he could not help a his friend in need.

Sakura looked at Naruto like he was out of place "How can we take her anywhere until she wakes up and then we find out the problem." Sakura said it like it was so obvious. 'Heh, Naruto is stupid.' she thought.' why can't he use his brain for once and figure out the problem. He's the biggest baka and probably too dense to realise how dense he is. Oh well I'll have to go to tsunade and report the problem to her because if I don't, I might get into trouble with Hinata's dumb clan.'

Shino looked at Hinata then at Naruto " Naruto, use your chakra to heal her. Sakura check her vitals you did not check them before."Shino said. 'Naruto really likes Hinata and probably wants her to be ok. This might be the only way for her to recover.'

Neji noticed Shino's concerned look "What's wrong, is something up?"

Shino gave a nod " My bugs are sensing a problem. Hinata's vitals are failing and it seems that her body is subconsicously using her chakra to stay alive. She needs to be healed quick or else she might die." Shino then turned to Neji who was shaking in fear of his cousin's life mumbling some thing about Tenten and Sakura. Shino stared at Neji for a while then he looked back at Naruto who was summoning his special chakra. But then when Naruto's chakra touched Hinata, Naruto slumped down on the floor and Hinata started to shiver. Every one but Shino was suprised and Sakura started to shout.

" Naruto you stupid fool! who told you to put your chakra into her it acts like posion to everyone-"

"But her." Shino interupted. Sakura had a confused look then looked at Naruto who looked like he was dreaming.


"Hmm, Kit who did you bring for me to eat? You know I'm very hungry. Uh huh it's a girl HAHA and boy does she look fine!"

Hinata was wondering if she mus be in a dream. She was in darkness, with a sinister voice that was echoing all around her. .' I must be in a dream. I mean yeah... where am I and who is this Kit?"

the Kyuubi could hear her thoughts because he replied.

"Welcome to my void."

"What a dumb name. Think of something better, pervert." Hinata said with newfound courage. Then the area around her was lit up. then she gasped in horror as she saw a fox one-hundred times the size she was. Immediately all her courage left her as the fox closed ln on her. Then when it was right over her she screamed " WHO ARE YOU?" Then she fell down then put her head between her legs, tears about to flow . " Oh p-p-hlease don't hurt me, Ugly monster, you." She squeaked out. The Kyuubi became so angry at her seemingly intentional insult.

" How dare you call me that, you-you 'it'. What do they call you beings again? At least I call you things by your rightful names, you should do the same! " the kyuubi was lost in thought wondering what you call people .

Hinata used this to her advantage as she ran away, scared of the fox. Hinata took saw a long corridor to her left so she took it . She then heard a Roaring close behind knowing that the monster was hot on her trail. then she saw another split in the road so she paused before taking the left knowing that the kyuubi would most likeky take the right but then as she was running shen tripped on a metal pipe then in seconds th kyuubi was over her saying 'pretty lady'. When he when for the kill she barely missed his gaping mouth then went to a small passage way. She thought that she had successfully evaded the fox-monster when she saw a big bliding light then a mass of Dark purple chakra. She then activated her Byakugan then she found out it was a mass of compressed chakra. she tried to run as fast as she could but it was closing in fast. she then screamed in horror as it was about to hit her then gave a gasp when a person picked her up then jumped into a hole which seemed to pop up out of no where. After a while the person Gave a cheesy grin to which she happily said "Naruto-kun!"

But then the purson started to laugh a hearty laugh " what's wrong, Hinata. Are you okay?" To which she passed out.


"Eh Naruto S-so that w-was the K-kyuubi?" Hinata was still shaking in fear. She had been walking around with Naruto for a while. Naruto was holding Hinata's hands but being his oblivious self did not seem to notice. She was going to ask Naruto more questions, but it looked like he was lost in thought. ' Hehe, I was scared over a mass of chakra ' she thought ' But I wonder why Naruto isn't afraid and we have been walking in this prision-like place for a while. It creeps me out, with all that water dripping from the ceiling and the echos of our footsteps an-' She was interupted by Naruto stoping and Hinata Who was right behind him bumped into him. " Ouch! E-eh Naruto-kun what is it?" Naruto was just staring off into space. Naruto let out a 'Aww the fox is back". Just when he said it the Kyuubi then started to laugh and say

Don't worry, Kit I was just having a little fun with the preettty lady hahaha...hahahahaha

Naruto looked at him and said " What is with the pause in laughing huh?"

What is so wrong in laughing hehehehehehehe. So lady are you two together? Because I can get used to seeing her face. Oh, and you two are holding hands .

Naruto looked at the fox then at Hinata then let go of her hands then blushed while laughing nervously " No Kyuubi we are not together ok ?"

Hinata was about to say something but Naruto interrupted.

"Well Hinata I wanted to introduce you to the Kyuubi better but it seems like It's time to go... I wish I had more time though . Sorry Hina-chan Next time." Naruto said. He then turned to Hinata who looked like she was in a panic attack. "What is wrong, Hina-chan?

Hinata was immediately depressed when Naruto told her that.' No not yet I wanted to tell you some things before we left.' But she just said " N-nothing Naruto-kun." Then she gave him her best fake smile trying to throw him off.

Naruto could sense something was wrong with Hinata.' I wonder whats wrong with her and I wonder if the Kyuubi might know he said he has seen alot and knows alot of things. But then again he is a pervert probably two-hundred times that of Ero-sennin though.' So he tried to cheer her up" Heyyy Hina-chan guess what?" he said with a sly smile.

Hinata looked at him curiously then she smiled before saying " I don't know Naru-" but was interrupted by a blinding light in the area. she then heard Naruto's foot steps getting further and further away. She then let out a cry screaming " Wait, Naruto-kun, don't leave me!" over and over again until the blinding light engulfed her.

Both Hinata and Naruto woke up in a cold sweat. Hinata was whimpering when she thought she was still in a moved her head around for a while until she heard a girl's voice suddenly and a bright patch of light was shown accompanied by a loud ripping sound. When her eyes ajusted to the light she looked around first she turned to Neji who in turn gave a 'gasp' at Hinata. Then Sakura gave a ' wow, her eyes got wayy uglier.' She started to fear what was wrong but when she faced Shino her fears increased because Shino's eyes widened. Naruto came over, noticing that there was something wrong with Shino and Neji then he went up to Hinata and let out something that sounded like,

"What happened to her eyes"


A/N Well hope you liked the chapter. How do you get a beta reader? lol I had alot of fun writing this. Criticism is allowed because I know there is something wrong, I just can't place my finger on it. and if you like review and if you don't like tell me whats wrong and how I can make a better story!