I am thinking of re writing the story from the beginning, I have started to re write the prologue please comment if this is a good idea also i well leave down below what i have done for the re write of the prologue. I well also stated that my spelling and grammar are still not the best sorry!
Once long time ago there were four Pooka Tribes. Each Tribe represented one of the four season's spring, summer, fall and winter and as such they each had a symbol displaying their tribe's season. The Pooka tribe that Represents Winter and bares the symbol of a Snowflake was The North Pooka Tribe. The North Tribe was a clan of Pookas that could survive in unbelievable Freezing cold weather.
The Tribe that represented the season of summer was called the Eastern Pooka Tribe and they bore the symbol of a blazing sun. The Eastern Tribe Pookas were known for being able stand unbearable blazing hot weather. The Tribe that represented fall, their symbol was a maple leaf and Their Tribe was called The Western Pooka Tribe. The Western Pooka Tribe were well respected because they could adapted to could and warm weather in a matter of minutes.
The Final Pooka Tribe represented the season of spring. Their Clan symbol was a flower in bloom and they were called The South Pooka Tribe. The South tribes were Pookas that enjoyed and loved warm weather, Not only that but The South Pooka tribe was known all over for being the strongest of all Four Pooka Tribes.
The leader of each tribe and their family were the royalty of their clan's tribe and colonies. The main Tribe that oversaw and ruled over all four tribes was the South Tribes royal family, The Bunnymunds. Over time the four tribes who were once close to one another slowly drifted apart. They stopped staying in touch and they soon had nothing to do with one another. This caused rifts in the trust each tribe had for one another.
The North tribe royal Family was the Overland's. The Leader was Alix Overland, who was stepping down and naming his first born James Overland the next head of the North Pooka tribe. By naming James the next head all of the Pookas of the North tribe and their Colonies throw a massive party to celebrity James crowning.
The North Pookas were not only known for their ability to survive freezing cold weather. They were also known for their magic prowess, that and their love of Games, Playing Tricks on people and their never ending fun loving nature. The Cheer and happiness the North Tribe had that night would not to last long. For unknown to them a grave shadow was looming over them and soon their fate would be sealed forever.
For not far away in a human village nearby, Pitch black The Nightmare king hide in the Darkest of the shadows a work. The Nightmare king sent his fearlings into the town plaguing the people with horrifying Nightmares, Feeding them unbearable fear of Pookas. Soon Pitches grave deeds would flourish and bloom in the hearts of the young and the old.
The Fear would only spread and mankind would turn against the Pookas for the fear that Pitch placed in their hearts well grows. As it is well known throughout history, when people's hearts are full of fear that fear soon becomes hate and when it does nothing good ever comes from it.
One Faithful night later, the newly named head of the North Pooka Tribe James Overland was fast asleep in his den. MIM (Man in Moon) who seen what Pitch had planned decided to Gift James a vision of what was going to happen in his dreams. James awoke in a shocking state because of the "Dream" MiM had gifted him. James had become worried the dream of his beloved and fellow Pooka's being massacred felt to vivid to be a mire dream.
James decided to set out to find the answers to his dream, Like was it only a dream and if it was not what can he do to prevent his dream from becoming reality. So well all his fellow North Pookas slept soundly, James grabbed his satchel and Staff (which looked a lot like the one Jack Carries around) plus the royal North Pooka pendent. When James had everything he would need for his trip, he then began to set out before th3e sun began to rise in the sky and wake the village.
James traveled far and wide from his village on his quest to find answers to his terrifying dream. When he finally came upon a clearing in a snow covered forest, when he heard a voice from above. MiM came and told James that he was the one that sent that dream to him. The dream wasn't a dream but a vision on what will happen not just to his tribe but to all The Pooka tribes.
When MiM was done James realizing how real the dream was ran as fast as his bunny legs could go trying to make it back in time to stop the slaughter of his people. Two days later James made it back home only to be one night to late, for all around the Young King was the slaughter he tried so hard to get back to stop.
When James realized how much Danger they were in, started to run home to worn his people as fast as his bunny legs could Carrie him.
that's all I have done so far for the re writing of the prologue chapter as stated before please comment and let me know your thoughts!
