Okay new chapter. Okay so the OC's aren't going to appear quite yet but just so you people know the first two official Nack certified OC's are…
Kash
And
Starlight Moon
Kash is a Pegasus pony. With a sapphire blue coat an electric purple mane and ice blue eyes. His cutie mark is a Quill in an Inkwell as his talent is writing. He likes to have fun, be lazy, be nice and is shy around girls. He also wants to be in a band. (I'll see what I can do about this…) He wishes to find love or become a hero.
Starlight Moon is another Pegasus pony (No more pegasai until further notice) with a Smokey Grey coat, A snow white mane and golden eyes. Her cutie mark is a Crescent moon hovering over two clouds. Her talent is astronomy (not astrology). Her personality is to long for my lazy ass to type so go check out the profile for your self it's the sixth review. Also interesting facts. Firstly Nurse Tenderheart is a actual character from the show, however she was only seen briefly in a pan shot during the episode apple buck season. Still need someone to draw Renwood. And this takes place two months after the last chapter. ONTO THE STORY!
It was a bright day. The birds were singing with Renwood. Ren was sitting in the garden of the royal palace. Fluttershy was sleeping next to him. All was good…. Suddenly the birds flew off as if they were running from something. It was then Renwood smelled smoke. He bolted up startling Fluttershy and he said. "Fluttershy we have to get out of here there is a fire." A royal guard then came and announced to everything in the garden. "THERE IS A FIRE EVACUATE THE AREA IMMEDIATELY!" Renwood grabbed Fluttershy and swung her over onto his back and charged for the exit. A burning support crashed in front of them causing Renwood to falter causing him and Fluttershy to crash through it. Luckily they both landed in the pond. Dazed Renwood felt something strong grip him and carry him out of the garden. He realized it was a guard. And they didn't have Fluttershy. He managed to break free from the guard's grasp and ran towards the garden where he could see Fluttershy still sitting in the pond unconscious. He was almost there when the entrance collapsed. "FLUTTERSHY! NO!" He screamed as Nightmare moon was in her tower laughing maniacally as she watched the garden being engulfed in flames.
Renwood burst from the blankets covered in cold sweat and gasping for air. He looked around. He was still in Luna's room. Luna was beside him chewing on her pillow muttering something about cupcakes. Ren wiped his forehead and muttered too him self it was still just a dream. He had been having that same nightmare for the last two weeks. It was then he realized the damage he had done to the princesses nightstand…. for the third time. It had knocked it over and caused it to collapse on its self. "I need to sleep I am going to be going back to town tomorrow." He muttered to him self. And so he fell back asleep with much trouble.
When I woke up in the morning I realized I wasn't in Luna's bed but in some sort of cart. "Good to see your not dead." Said Nurse Tenderheart sarcastically. I yawned and asked "So is this the ride back to Ponyville?" "No Ren this is just to get to the chariot." Said a tired Luna as she yawned. "So where is Fluttershy?" I asked. "Try looking to your right." Nurse Tenderheart said sharply.
As I looked to my right I saw a sleeping Fluttershy curled up into as close of a ball as a pony can be curled into. She was resting her head on my side. "Oh" I said sheepishly before laying my head back down and going back to sleep.
I woke up in the chariot at around noon. Fluttershy was still asleep but wasn't using my stomach as a pillow anymore. Pretty much as soon as I woke up the chariot stopped and we were there. I was met immediately by Pinkie Pie and a cake which incidentally hit me in the chest. "Hiya Ren!" Pinkie said enthusiastically. "Nice to see you too Pinkie." I said in monotone. "Ah, Pinkie, Ya shouldn't attack him." came the familiar voice of Applejack. "Oh what's this no casts? Drat and I had some wonderful ideas for making casts more fashionable. Oh dear that puts a lot of free time on my hands." complained Rarity. "BIG BROTHER!" Is the only thing I heard before getting the breath knocked out of me by my sister. "Hey Ditzy how have you been holding down the house?" I asked Ditzy Doo. "Oh… I'm sorry big brother I'm really sorry." she said apologetically. "Yeah that's something we wanted to tell you in person. Your house sort of… burnt down in a fire." The calm voice of Twilight said. "Oh my god… did anything make it through the fire?" I asked urgently. "Luckily most of the important photographs and documents made it through. Though we did lose your parents wedding picture." Twilight replied. "And … your..your brother… he didn't make it through." She added solemnly.
BUM BUM BUM!
Yeah cliffhanger. And yes Derpy Hooves is Renwood's sister. And during the process of writing this the final OC's were added. So here they are and their profiles.
~Kash~Race: , Mane, and Eyes: Sapphire Blue, Electric Purple, and Ice Mark and Reason: A Quill in an Inkwell, because he loves to write : Likes to have fun, lie around, be lazy, nice, shy to girls, and wants to be in a : To find love, or become a hero. (All of his stories are about heroes and romance.)
Name: Starlight MoonRace: , Mane, and Eyes: Smokey grey, Snow white, and GoldenCutie Mark and Reason: A moon hovering over two clouds because she loves learning about astronomy and hopes to teach other ponies her factsPersonality: Shy to new friends, crazy when people say her learnings wrong, hyper and excited when going somewhere astronomy related and learning something new, outgoing when hanging out with old friendsWish: To overcome her shyness and become friends with every pony (even the princess)
Name: CoalRace: UnicornCoat,Mane,Eyes:Coal black,Grey,metallic SilverCutie mark and Reason: a key, he's good at getting into places eve if their :Unable to open up to people about his feeling especially if it's someone he likes. Polite and well spoken when :Learn under princess Celestia.
ChaosianRace: UnicornCoat, Mane, and Eyes: blood red, pitch black, and Arcane Mark and Reason: A fireball with a blue lighting bolt going through it, reason why he is really good at offensives magic .Personality: Likes to party ,hates it when people are lazy, very nice except to lazy people, he is straightforward with girls unless he likes them; in which case he is shy, when not partying he is training or hanging with : becoming a hero, to make sure the people he cares for never get hurt.
