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Hi! Here it goes!

I'm actually really really really nervous about the feedback I'll be getting.

I'm just scared that you guys will really hate the way your characters act, or stuff like that...

PS As said, if you hate the way your character acts, plz tell me ASAP!

These are ppl's characters:
(by order of introduction)

Jasmine-the real Violet Parr

Angelique-Da-manta-ray

Ruby-RubyVulpix

Greg-s.t.s.t

Michael-The Star Swordsman

Colin-jal peppers

I used all the characters I received.
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Chapter 4: Super Supers School

There were kids running around EVERYWHERE. People were fighting each other with their powers, and there were burn marks on the walls. Suddenly, a little boy ran past them with a little girl chasing after him saying "Ky-Ky!"

Nikki snorted. "I'm psychic! Mallory number 2!" she said to Aria.

"I heard that!" The two girls whirled around. It was Mallory, with another girl beside her, who you could refer to as "Mallory clone."

"Hello Mallory! Well, um, er, good! Cause its a, er, compliment! Ya, its a compliment!"

"Well, of course it is. Nice to see you again! This is my BFF Melany, or Mel! She can create solar balls, solar beams, etc." She pointed at the girl. She had red hair, and green eyes. She was also very pretty, like Mal. She waved. "C'mon, I'll give you and your troop a tour!" she said in her scary high voice.

"Hi Mallory!" the rest of the girls+Dash and Jack-Jack said.

"Hey! I'll give you a tour." She started pointing at kids in the room and talking about them.

"Samuel. Loser. Samantha. Loser. Elizabeth. Loser. Olivia. Loser. Angelique. Loser. Ruby. Loser. Michael. Loser. Greg. Loser. Colin. Loser. Ja-"

"Is everyone a loser?" Nikki asked and Aria laughed.

"No. Jasmine is a half loser. Oh, and over there, that's Jake." She pointed at a 'cute' boy with blonde hair and green eyes. "Oh, and by the way, he's mine. I call him Jakkie."

"Oh, yes, so very romantic!" Nikki said with sarcasm.

Mal didn't seem to notice. "Yes, isn't he gorgeous."

"He just turned into a ferret." Nikki said blankly.

"Yes, but a very cute ferret at that."

"Oh yes, but excuse me, I have to go to the washroom!" Aria said.

"Same!" Nikki said and hurried away.

"One more word of this lovey dovey stuff and I'm gonna puke!" Aria said.

"Ya, I know!" They weren't looking where they were going, so they crashed into another girl.

"Ouch! Sorry!" Aria said. "We weren't looking where we were going!"

"No, its okay!" she said. The girl was medium height, with dark brown hair and brown eyes. "My name's Jasmine Lake, what's your name?"

Aria was taken aback. NO ONE had ever wanted to be her friend before! "I-I'm Aria, and this is Nikki."

"Cool! This is Angelique Martinez, or Angel, and this is Ruby Whitestone. I'm 14, so is Angelique, and Ruby is 16!" She motioned to two girls beside her. Angelique had REALLY long black hair, amethyst eyes, pale skin, and was REALLY tall and skinny. Ruby had long red hair and blue eyes.

"Hi!" Ruby said brightly. Angelique mumbled something along the lines of hi. She looked like she was the loner type.

"Er, what are those?" Nikki asked and pointed to some animal like things beside Ruby.

"Oh, they're my Pokemon!"

"Cool! We're both 12. What're your powers?"

"I can talk to animals, Angelique can create mists to hide herself, and Ruby has firepower. She can also create rays to confuse villains."

"Cool. I can turn invisible, make force fields, and heal people. Nikki has electricity powers."

"We can show you around if you want." Ruby offered.

"Sure!"

Jasmine, Ruby, and Angelique walked around with them, pointing to different people. Or rather, Jasmine and Ruby pointed to different people while Angelique followed, not saying a single word, her long black hair covering her face like a curtain.

First were two boys who seemed to be arguing about something.

"Well, think of it this way, you were 5 percent away from failing." a boy with blonde hair and bright blue eyes.

"Well that makes me feel much better, Gachowski!" the other boy said. He had black hair and brown eyes.

"Well, its the truth, Mikkie." he said and smirked.

"That's Greg Gachowski," said Jasmine, pointing to the blonde boy, "and that's Michael Cacho. They're always fighting about something! Greg is negative about everything, which is a huge contrast to his eye colour, and Michael is a born leader. They're both 14, but Greg won't let Michael forget that he's a month older. Mikkie's a name that this 5 year old named Lizzy calls Michael. Michael is a swordsman and Greg can levitate things--and people."

"Are they related?" Aria asked.

"Nope, but their dads own this boat rental company together." Ruby said.

Next they saw a boy sitting on the ground in a strange position, arms in the air with 2nd finger and thumb stuck together.

"Rid me of my negative karma." he said.

"That's Colin Webber. He's superstitious. He thinks he's all unlucky or something cause he's 13 and that's the unlucky number or something like that." Jasmine pointed to a weedy boy with sandy hair and blue eyes.

Next were the little girl and the little boy.

"That's Lizzy. She's really sweet. And that's Kyle. Or, in Lizzy's words, Ky-Ky. They're both 6. Lizzy's the one that calls Michael Mikkie. Lizzy can turn into a lizard, and Kyle can shoot laser beams from his fingertips." Ruby said.

"She's that nutter we saw chasing that little kid." Aria mumbled to Nikki.

"That's Mallory, that's her-"

"Clone." Angelique said through gritted teeth. It was the first time she had talked since the 'tour' had began.

"What's that you said, Angel?"

"I said, that's her clone." she said more boldly than she looked.

"No kidding." Nikki said. This seemed to boost Angelique's confidence. She talked more from then on.

"Er...okay then." Jasmine said. She didn't like to talk about people behind their backs. "That's Selena, Melany's sister, and her friend Olivia, who's also Lizzy's sister." she pointed to a red haired girl with the same emerald green eyes as Melany and another girl with brown hair and hazel eyes. "Selena can make fireballs, fire beams, etc. She and her sister are like the double version of Mallory, because of their powers. Olivia can turn into an owl."

They went on and met a girl with a hypnotizing dog, a girl who Vi could have sworn was related to Mirage, a silly boy whom everyone referred to as Billie the Sillie (spelled like that on purpose), ...and lastly, 3 sets of twins that were a family called the Twins.

"Those are the Twins." Ruby said.

"They think they're all that since they're named after celebrities." Angel mumbled.

"That's Lindsay and Liam, they're 12. Hilary and Harry are 11. Emily and Emma are 10. Oh, and I almost forgot. The whole family is twins, except for Tracie. She's 9. She's the outsider in her family, and all her siblings treat her like a slave." All the girl twins had strawberry blonde hair and blue eyes, and the boy twins had blonde hair and green eyes. Tracie had light brown hair and brown eyes. "They call Tracie Trash."

"That's horrid!" Aria said. Nikki nodded.

"That's life." Angel mumbled. They all remained quiet until a buzzer went off.

"Oh, that's the lunch bell!" Ruby said.

"We're just gonna get the rest of the girls!" Nikki said, "We'll be right back!"

"Okay!"

Aria and Nikki dashed off, found the other girls, and ran back. Dash and Jack-Jack had gone off with some other boys.

They introduced Jasmine, Ruby and Nikki to Cynthia, Genevieve, Lily, and Violet and they all headed off to lunch.

"We sit at a table with Tracie, and unfortunately, Michael and Greg. The Twins refer to our table as the loner table. We won't be so 'loner' with you guys here. That'll be 12 to a table!" Ruby said.

"Why is it unfortunate we're sitting with Michael and Greg?" Nikki questioned.

"Because they're always fighting. Greg can't survive a single lunch hour without dropping a pudding on Michael's head. You'll see."

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If there are typos or things that don't make sense, tell me in ur review! Thnx!

INPORTANT: If you want a visual pictoralization(okay, so its not a word) of these new characters, then plz visit my site (on my profile click on the homepage button and when ur there click 'pix') (or its just dyu123. If you own a character, and you hate your character's pic, then tell me ASAP!

Hehehe! Its gonna be fun, the next chapter! So what does dropping food on people's heads lead to? Something that starts with an 'f'...

Just out of curiosity...who is your fav Invisigirl? (Gen, Ly, Cynth, Ari)

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