Okay be proud of me, it's been less than a month … 3 weeks and 2 days to be precise I think. I am very proud of myself, I'm posting faster woohoo!!!! I'm not gonna give you guys an excuse of why it took so long … but since you all desperately wanted to know I had writer's block. I had absolutely no idea what to write after Lily and James's 'talk' about Amelia. I had written that bit about two weeks ago then about Looks at watch 9 hours ago I started writing the rest. It seriously took me that long I kept procrastinating and I kept editing bits and pieces. But I must say I am happy with what I ended up with. But it wasn't originally supposed to end up like this just so you know. But anyway enough about how I wrote this that and the other, on with the story. PS Don't hate me too much.

Disclaimer: I own nothing that you find familiar from the Harry Potter books as that is all JK Rowlings creation not mine. The only thing that is mine is the story idea.

Chapter 4

Lily was getting really annoyed by his presence. She tapped her quill on the table repeatedly as she tried to hold her tongue. She looked at him angrily.

"Sirius, why are you here?" Lily hissed. Sirius looked at her over his cup of tea.

"I'm waiting for James to get back." Sirius said as he sipped his tea.

"That could be hours from now." Lily said.

"Then I'll wait." Sirius said with a shrug. Lily sighed angrily as she looked back down at the parchment on her desk. "Why are you so pissed off?" Sirius asked curiously as he leaned on the breakfast bench and looked at Lily.

"I'm not." Lily said agitatedly as she kept her eyes on the parchment.

"Is it about this whole thing with Amelia?" Sirius asked as he looked at her intently.

"Why would I be annoyed about that?" Lily asked as she continued to keep her eyes focused on the parchment. She had read the same line at least five times and it still didn't make sense to her.

"It is that isn't it?" Sirius pursued the topic much to Lily's annoyance.

"Why would that annoy me?" Lily asked as she looked up at Sirius angrily. "Is it the fact that the man I love forgot to mention a small indiscretion like being engaged to one of my friends?" Lily practically screamed at Sirius. "Is that supposed to piss me off?"

"It would piss me off." Sirius said as he kept a calm demeanour. There was a pop and Hestia was standing beside Sirius. She looked at a fuming Lily then to the calm Sirius.

"What'd I miss?" She asked curiously.

"Lily found out about James and Amelia dating." Sirius said as he looked at Hestia.

"No, not just dating, they were engaged. Like about to married for the rest of their life." Lily said angrily.

"Since when were they engaged?" Hestia asked curiously.

"They weren't." Sirius as he looked at Hestia.

"What do you mean they weren't?" Lily asked. "Why would his mother say that if they hadn't been engaged?"

"I think it's better if James explained that to you." Sirius as he stood up straight. Lily sighed angrily and went back to her work. A few hours later Hestia and Sirius were still standing in the kitchen annoying Lily by their constant bickering and debates about silly and frivolous subjects. Lily couldn't take it any longer, and just as she was about to scream at them there was a pop in the hallway and all three looked towards the door. A few seconds later James walked in holding his head. He looked up and jumped a little to see Sirius and Hestia looking back at him.

"Don't do that." James said as he rubbed his eyes.

"Are you all right?" Sirius asked curiously.

"Don't shout." James said as he held his head in his hands again and sat down in the chair opposite Lily. Lily stood up and walked over to the cabinet and took out a green bottle and then took a glass from another cabinet. She walked over to James and sat the glass and the bottle down in front him.

"Take that, it'll help you feel better." She said before walking out of the room. James watched her hazy figure walk away and shook his head trying to see her clearer. He poured the contents of the bottle into the glass.

"I wouldn't drink that if I were you." Sirius warned.

"Why not?" James asked as he put the glass to his lips.

"Because Lily found out about you and Amelia and I don't think she's too happy." Sirius said. James nearly choked as the liquid went down his throat. He spluttered before speaking.

"H-How did she find out?" James asked as he turned to look at Sirius. Sirius explained what James's mother had said to Lily just after he left. James sighed and put his head in his hands even though the pain that was once there had subsided.

"Since when were they engaged?" Hestia asked the question she had asked a few hours before.

"We weren't." James said with a shake of his head.

"I don't understand." Hestia said as she looked from Sirius to James. James muttered some curse words before standing up.

"I don't mean to be rude but could you guys leave, this could take a while." James said with a frown.

"Hestia, let's go to Remus's, I'll explain everything there." Sirius said before disapparating.

"Tell Lily to owl me." Hestia said before she too disapparated. James looked into the hallway with a frown. He really didn't want to have this confrontation right now. All he wanted to do was go to sleep with Lily in his arms. He walked up the stairs with a sigh and knocked on his bedroom door. As he opened it he saw Lily sitting on the bed reading a piece of parchment, a few other pieces of parchment were strewn across the bed. Lily didn't bother to look up as James walked into the room.

"Umm hey." James said cautiously. He was greeted with an annoyed sigh. "Look umm I think we need to umm talk." James stuttered as he closed the bedroom door.

"You think?" Lily said harshly as she looked at James forgetting about the parchment in her hand.

"I can explain everything, okay." James said as he sat down on the bed and tried to take her hand but she pulled it away.

"I think your mother explained everything perfectly James." Lily said as she stood up and walked towards the dresser.

"Look Lily you don't know the facts." James said he turned to look at her.

"What's to know? You were in love with one of my friends and also engaged and yet you neglected to tell me this especially since I told you about my engagement with Todd." Lily said angrily.

"Amelia and I weren't engaged!" James angrily.

"Then what the hell was you mother talking about then?" Lily spat angrily as she turned to look at him, tears welling up in her eyes.

"My mother just got the wrong end of the stick okay." James said as he stood up and took a hold of Lily's hands in a firm grip. "She knew Amelia and I had dated and thought that we still were when she saw Amelia one day in Hogsmeade. My Mother went and said hello to her and that's when she saw a ring on Amelia's finger and mistook it to have been an engagement ring." James said. "She was so happy that I just never got around to telling her that we were never engaged. So instead of telling her that we weren't engaged and that we had recently broken up, I told her that we were going through a rough time. Then after a week I told her that Amelia and I broke up. She thought Amelia was nice so I told her it was a mutual decision." James ended as he looked at Lily.

"That's the most craziest story I have ever heard." Lily said with a raised eyebrow.

"I know but it's the truth. My mother just seemed so happy at the thought of me settling down that I didn't want to break her heart." James said with a helpless shrug as he let go of Lily's hands and walked over to the window.

"James, I don't care that you guys were engaged or in the case being not engaged. I care because you dated one of my friends and you deliberately kept it a secret. It's like me telling you I dated Remus." Lily said causing James to spin around and look at her. "I haven't but how you felt in those five seconds is how I have been feeling the past five hours. You should have told me." Lily said abruptly. She really wanted to break something and James's left arm was looking very appealing at that moment.

"I'm telling you now." James said.

"Only because your mother let it slip." Lily said through gritted teeth.

"I knew I should have bloody told you, Amelia told me you'd get like this if you heard it from someone else." James said as he turned away from her.

"Then you should have taken her advice." Lily spat.

"Why are you making a big deal out of this? I dated your friend, so what? It's not like we got married and had children." James said angrily.

"It's a big deal because you obviously loved her if you felt the need to hide it from me." Lily said. All the anger deflating into numbness. "And what makes it worse for me is that you might still love her especially if you were willing to keep it a secret for so long." Lily said as tears welled in her eyes.

"I don't love her, I love you." James said as he crossed the room and took her hands. He tried to look into Lily's eyes but she was looking at the ground. He could see a tear drop fall from her cheek and onto the wooden floor.

"Why didn't you tell me?" Lily choked out as she continued to look at the ground.

"I didn't want to hurt you." James said desperately.

"Then what do you call this?" Lily asked as the tears flowed down her cheeks. James tried to hug her but she pushed him away. "I need to be on my own." Lily said as she walked away from him and out of the room. James followed her out the door and down the stairs.

"Where are you going?" James asked as Lily pulled on her jacket that was in the hall.

"I don't know." Lily said before she disapparated. James sighed and sat down on the stairs and put his head in his hands. He couldn't believe this was happening, he couldn't believe that Lily was angry with him because of a stupid relationship that had happened almost two years ago.


Lily didn't even realise where she was until she recognised the small house she was standing in front off. She wiped her tears away and made sure that it looked as if she were never crying before she knocked on the front door. Lily waited a few seconds before Alice pulled the door open.

"Hi Lily, come in." Alice said with a grin. Lily smiled and walked in. "What brings you by?" Alice said as she took Lily's jacket and hung it up before walking into the kitchen.

"I just popped by for a chat." Lily said with a shrug.

"Great, I need one after the day I've had." Alice said with a chuckle. "Sit down and I'll make us a cup of tea." Alice said as she walked over to the kettle that was on the stove. "So how are things? How is the new job going?" Alice asked as she poured the tea into two cups.

"It's great but it's a lot different than working with James and Frank." Lily said with a shrug. "There is a lot more telling people what to do. Feels like I'm Head Girl back at Hogwarts again." Lily said with a chuckle.

"Frank was telling me that you're working on the Lombard case. How's that going?" Alice asked as she handed Lily her cup and sat down opposite Lily at the kitchen table.

"It's crazy. I'm not allowed to say anything else about it I'm afraid." Lily said with a sad smile.

"Don't worry about it, the story has been haunting me for days." Alice said with a shake of her head.

"Let's talk about better things. How's the wedding going?" Lily asked curiously as she blew on her tea before taking a sip.

"Frank's mother was over earlier helping to plan." Alice said with a roll of her eyes. "That woman is getting on my last nerve, she feels that she has a right to interfere." Alice said with a sigh. Lily chuckled knowing full well what it was like dealing with an interfering future mother in law. "We butt heads on everything; the flowers, the colour of the bridesmaid dresses, where the reception is going to be held. The only thing we are agreeing on is to keep the wedding dress white." Alice said with a shake of her head.

"I hate to tell you this but it's going to get much worse." Lily said with a chuckle.

"Oh yes, I forgot you were engaged." Alice said with a grin. "Tell me Lily, how did you deal with it?" Alice asked as she leaned on the kitchen table and looked at Lily hopefully.

"Lot's of alcohol." Lily said with a chuckle causing Alice to laugh. "No I'm kidding, I got Todd to have a word with her. She backed off but when we called the whole thing off she claimed it was because she didn't organise it." Lily said with a roll of her eyes and a chuckle. "Trust me all mother in laws are the same." Lily said with as she sipped her tea.

"I take it then that you and James will be eloping when the time comes." Alice said with a chuckle causing Lily to falter a bit.

"Well we'll have to see about that." Lily said as she drank her tea hoping that the cup would cover her face.

"Don't tell me you haven't thought about it." Alice said.

"I'm not going to deny that I haven't but James and I have a few creases we need to iron out before that day comes." Lily said as she set her cup back down.

"You two are perfect for each other and I've always thought so. Even whilst you were engaged I know that the right person for you was James." Alice said with a grin as she drank her tea. "And I always thought the best person for him was you. I've seen him in other relationships but I can tell you that he has never looked at anyone the way he looks at you." Alice added as she set her cup down.

"Have you been talking to him?" Lily asked raising an eyebrow curiously.

"No." Alice said shaking her head and looking at Lily quizzically. "Why?"

"Umm we got into a fight. I found out about him and Amelia dating." Lily said as she looked at the oak table.

"If you don't mind me asking, why were you fighting? From what I know that relationship ended almost two years ago." Alice said.

"I found out from his mother, something I felt he should have told me." Lily said.

"Because you and Amelia are friends." Alice stated. Lily nodded her head.

"You get it, why doesn't he? He thought I was making a big deal out of it but yet he knew that it was going to upset me." Lily said with an annoyed sigh.

"He's a male." Alice said with a chuckle. "He doesn't understand why it's a big deal." Alice said with a shrug.

"But why don't guys feel the same way?" Lily asked.

"The same way as what?" A voice asked. Lily and Alice looked up to see Frank walking into the room. "Hi Lily." He said as he walked over to the kettle and poured himself a cup of tea.

"Never mind, honey." Alice said. "Lily, guys don't see it as a big deal because they don't see ex-boyfriends as a threat. But girls see ex-girlfriends as a threat especially if they are constantly around, like the way Amelia is."

"Why do you see ex-girlfriends as a threat though?" Frank asked as he sipped his tea.

"There is always the risk that the guy will think the ex is better than his current girlfriend." Lily said with a shrug.

"That's were trust comes in." Frank said with a shrug. Lily went quiet as did Frank and Alice. Frank looked at Alice questioningly; Alice mouthed 'Later' to him hoping that he got the hint.

CRASH!

The sound caused Lily, Frank and Alice to jump as they looked in the direction of the hallway. They could hear voices in the hallway. Lily pulled out her wand and stood up slowly but was blown back against the wall as a hex was shot in her direction. She didn't even see who had done it. She couldn't see any of the figures as she was on the ground behind the table. She could however see black robes and she knew who owned them. Lily could hear one of the deatheaters shoot a curse in the direction of Frank but it was quickly blocked. She could see more figures appear in the room as she tried to catch her breath. She stood up quickly and shot a curse at the first deatheater she saw. He fell in pain as another deatheater turned to Lily. Lily quickly deflected it before shooting another hex.

Lily could faintly make out Alice in all of the movement.

"Alice, Lily get out of here." Frank shouted as he punched one of the deatheaters in the nose before ducking as a hex flew his way. But Lily and Alice never left; they refused to leave without him.

"Lily get down." Alice screamed as a deatheater threw a hex at Lily but Lily couldn't react in time. She fell to the ground in pain as the cruciatus curse was put upon her. She screamed in pain as she could feel her insides tighten and boil. It was like no feeling she had ever felt before. She had never felt this much pain, and she knew that it was unlike any pain that she would ever feel because this was the closest thing to death that their was. She prayed in her mind for it to stop.

Then it did and Lily lay there breathing heavily as though her ribcage was restricting her right to breathe. She tried to move her head to see what was going on but there didn't seem to be any movement in the room. Then she felt herself move up into the air. It was slowly but she could feel gravity trying to pull her back down. She felt her body being thrown onto the kitchen table, as there was an eerie silence around her. Her back hurt with the force of her being thrown against the wall as well as onto the table. Lily moved her head to the side and she saw him, she saw them.

Frank and Alice were being held by deatheaters as a wand was being held to Frank's neck. Lily's eyes travelled the length of the wand; pale hands held it tightly. Her eyes travelled along the arm, black robes covered them. Her eyes travelled up along the face, pale waxy skin stretched across the bones. Her eyes travelled up to his eyes, red orbs stared back at her.

"I hope you are watching, Ms Evans." The chipper voice said. "You will be next." The mirthless voice laughed. "Do it or I will kill her." Voldemort said as he looked back to Frank and moved his wand to Alice's neck.

"I will never." Frank said through gritted teeth.

"Wrong answer." Voldemort said. "Crucio." Voldemort didn't shot this hex at Alice instead it was aimed at Lily. The pain she had wished she would never feel again was making her contort against the table as she screamed for it to stop. All Lily could hear was his gleeful laughter. Then it stopped once again. Voldemort turned his wand back to Alice. "I will torture it out of you Longbottom."

"Then do it." Frank spat. Voldemort threw the cruciatus cures at Frank and he writhed in pain.

"STOP!" Alice screamed as she squirmed against the deatheater holding her. Voldemort took the curse off Frank and turned to Alice.

"Then you tell me little girl." Voldemort said through gritted teeth.

"You're an Asshole." Alice spat at him as she continued to squirm against the deatheater.

"Crucio." Voldemort said, this time making Alice scream out in pain. Frank tried to scream but he could barely breath as it was. Voldemort stopped the torture. He then turned to Lily with a smirk across his thin lips. He walked towards her as he looked at her lying on the table, hunger evident in his blazing eyes. Lily felt as if she was going to be sick, in fact it was in her throat but she didn't have the energy to be sick. "Where is it Miss Evans?" Voldemort said chillingly as he held his wand to the side of her head. Lily didn't know what he was asking for. Hello, if he didn't remember she was being tortured whilst that conversation was going on. "Where is the phoenix?" Voldemort said angrily as he was getting annoyed with the silence. But Lily couldn't speak because the bile was still in her throat, edging its way up into her mouth. Then he got sick of asking. "Crucio." He screamed. Lily contorted in pain once again but the bile in her throat was making her choke. She couldn't scream out in pain but her face was turning red very fast.

She could feel it so close now. The pain was ripping through her, tearing her to shreds, piece by piece. Her eyes lolled back into her head as she continued to choke. It was getting closer, so very close. She stopped praying for the pain to stop, now she praying for her death to come quicker. She had never wished herself to die but she did now. She wished that she had stayed in bed that morning with James instead of forcing him to get up. She wished she were with James now, in his arms, kissing him, making love to him. She continued to choke and contort in pain as he laughed with pleasure. It was so close now; so close she could touch it. Then it disappeared; everything disappeared. Everything went black.


Hestia ran down the hall in search of ward twenty-nine. She rounded a corner and saw a familiar figure leaning against the wall with their arms crossed. She ran towards him and he looked up. There were bags under his eyes and he looked as if he hadn't slept in days. When she reached him she pulled him into a hug, thankful that he was okay.

"How is she?" Hestia asked as she pulled away.

"She's very weak." Remus said sadly. "She hasn't woken up yet. The medi-wizard said that she should be awake soon but we have to let her rest and not to ask her questions." Remus said quietly as a woman holding a child walked by and gave the pair a sad smile. "He said something about her throat being blocked. They had to give her some potion or something to clear away the fluid or something." Remus said with a shake of his head. Hestia let a dry sob escape her mouth as she turned to look into the ward through the window. She saw that there were six beds in the ward and Lily lay in one at the far side. Two other beds were occupied with sleeping figures.

"Couldn't they have given her a private room or something?" Hestia asked angrily.

"James tried but they're full up, it's like a bloody hotel." Remus sighed angrily.

"How is he doing?" Hestia asked as she kept her back to Remus.

"I really don't know." Remus said sadly with a shake of his head.

"What happened?" Hestia asked as she turned to look at Remus.

"He tortured her, as well as Frank and Alice. I don't know what about, Dumbledore is with them now. They're going to be fine, just a few scrapes and bruises and a twisted ankle for Alice. Something about kicking a deatheater." Remus said with a dry chuckle. Hestia looked down the corridor as she heard footsteps. She was relieved to see that Sirius was okay. He came up to the pair holding three plastic cups of coffee. Remus carefully took two of them. "I'll give this to James." Remus said as he walked into the ward. Once he left, Hestia wrapped her arms around Sirius.

"Thank Merlin you're all right." Hestia said with a sigh before pulling away. Sirius smiled sadly at her.

"Yeah, well, you know." Sirius said with an awkward shrug. "You want some coffee?" Sirius offered her the cup that was in his hand.

"No thanks, can't stand the stuff. Thanks to Lily, I'm a tea person." Hestia said with a soft chuckle. Sirius leaned against the wall as he looked into the ward. There was silence between the pair as a medi-wizard walked down the hall and in into the ward to check on one of the sleeping patients.

"I found her." Sirius said quietly as he stared into his untouched coffee. Hestia looked at him curiously. "She looked as if she were sleeping. But she was having a nightmare." Sirius went quiet once again, as Hestia looked away, a tear rolling down her cheek. "I'm sorry I shouldn't have told you that." Sirius said with a heavy sigh. "I just needed to tell someone." He added as he looked at her. Hestia gave him a small smile before he left her and walked into the ward.

Hestia tried to blink back the tears that were welling up in her eyes. She tried to hold it together for the sake of her friends and James. He didn't need to see her like this, none of them did. Remus walked out of the ward and saw her head bowed. He walked up beside her, set his cup down on the ground then pulled Hestia into a hug. She broke down in his arms and cried.


James sat quietly reading an article about domestic charms in Witch Weekly. He wasn't even interested in the article or the magazine; he just wanted to do something to pass the time. He hated sitting about feeling helpless. He wanted to be doing something, anything. He looked at her sleeping figure, she was so beautiful. He couldn't understand why someone would want to put such a beautiful being through so much pain. He threw the magazine onto the small cabinet beside Lily's bed and sighed heavily before putting his head in his hands.

"Maybe you should go home and get some rest." Sirius said worriedly as he looked at his best friend.

"No." James said in a monotone.

"James you haven't slept in twenty-" Sirius looked at his watch, "-two hours. You need your rest. Go home and get some sleep. If she wakes up we'll get you." Sirius said.

"No, I can't go home." James said as he looked back at Lily.

"Then go to my place." Sirius offered as he sat up in the seat he was sitting in that was on Lily's other side.

"What if she wakes up and I'm not here?" James said as he looked at Sirius.

"Then I'll come and get you, I promise." Sirius said.

"No." James said again in the same monotone voice.

"If she wakes up and sees you like that, she'll kill us for not making you go home and resting. Go to my place and get some rest, I've a sleeping draught in the bathroom cabinet to help you sleep. Then get a shower and try to fix your hair." Sirius said with a grin. "She'll wake up if she knows she has something handsome other than me to wake up to." Sirius added with a chuckle.

"I'm always handsome." James said dryly.

"Now go." Sirius said.

"Fine, but you better come and get me." James warned as he stood up.

"Marauders promise." Sirius said as he put his hand over his heart. James sighed then leaned down and kissed Lily on the head.

"I love you." He whispered before walking out of the ward. He disapparated back to Sirius's apartment. He lay down on the couch as sleep crept over his body, forgetting about the sleeping draught.

He could feel himself being roughly awoken.

"James get up. Quick. She's awake." A voice called. James opened his eyes to see Peter standing above him. "She's awake." Peter said with a smile. James jumped up then apparated to the hospital. He climbed the stairs until he got to the fourth floor. He ran down the corridor until he reached ward twenty-nine. He walked in to see his beloved Lily sitting up in bed looking around her. She watched him curiously as he walked towards her.

"Lily, you're all right." James said happily.

"Lily? Who is Lily? Do I know you?" Lily said wonderingly as she stared blankly at James.

James bolted up on the couch breathing heavily. He looked around to see that he was in Sirius's living room. "It was a dream, it was all a just a bad dream." James said to himself as he lay back down. He tried to get back to sleep but he couldn't as his dream continued to haunt him. Every time he closed his eyes he could see Lily's blank stare as if the image was plastered to the back of his eyelids. He decided to get up and take a shower hoping that that would clear his mind.

As he stood in the shower letting the water run over his aching muscles he prayed that what had happened the previous day was just a really bad dream. When he opened his eyes again he would be at home in his own shower, Lily would be sneaking in behind him hoping to scare him but she never would because he would always hear her. He would turn around and smile mischievously as he wrapped his arms around her and kissed her passionately, letting the water wash over them both. When James opened his eyes he saw that his prayers were not answered. He was standing in Sirius's shower with the images of his beloved Lily lying limply in Sirius's arms.

James turned the shower off then dried himself before leaving the bathroom with a towel wrapped around his waist. He walked into Sirius's room hoping to borrow some clothes as his own were a bit ripped from the previous day. Sirius was the same build as James if not a tad bit more muscular, so his clothes fitted James perfectly. He picked a pair of dark jeans and a black sweater. Once he was dressed he tried to fix his hair but it was a futile attempt, as it just wouldn't sit. He disapparated to the hospital and made his way up to the fifth floor before going to see Lily. He picked up a beautiful bouquet of daisies before going back down stairs. He walked into the ward to see that other people in it were awake. He felt a bit silly walking about with flowers but the feeling subsided as he saw his friends around Lily's bed, he also saw Dumbledore talking quietly with Remus. James walked towards the bed, hoping more and more that she was awake. He sighed when he reached the bed and saw that his beloved Lily was still unconscious.


You know that last bit with James in the shower was totally inspired by Will Smith in I, Robot. Now that is a good film and what a way to keep a girl hooked having Will Smith naked at the start of the movie, now that made me stay and watch! Anyway enough of that I have thank you's to say!!!!

Charlotte (secondatbat9) Darkflower? Hmm never heard of them.

James and Lily 4eva Ahh what do you expect a girl in Lily's position to do? The poor girl is jealous of Amelia and she is supposed to be a friend.

Missers Are you still waiting patiently or have you totally given up on me like most people do lol. I can't wait to start writing more Philippe stuff it should be funny but just between me and you - and the rest of the people who will read this – Philippe isn't the only one making an appearance, I'm not allowed to tell you anymore though but let's just say this person appearance won't be very good for Lily and James's relationship WINK WINK

Satans little fairy Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Nikki It's not James's life you should be worryin about anymore oh and only time will tell between Hestia and Remus :-D

Agloechen I agree stupid male! You story reminds me this one time when I was on my way home on the bus. This guy who is a year younger than me is like really funny and a bit of a charmer. Anyway he has this wee fanclub of really young girls who surround him on the bus all the time. Anyway he put his hand on one of the girls' head and started shouting; "Get your head of my hand! Get your head of my hand!" It was so funny and one of those 'you had to be there moments'.

Me Thanks for reviewing

Sam There wasn't much of Remus in the last story and I blame his girlfriend Jenny for that if you catch my drift ;-D oh and I doubt Sirius and Hestia are gonna come out of my stories happily ever after, which should be fun to write about. Oh and the whole boyfriend being compared to James thing, I totally agree with ya the guy should be so lucky if I even mentioned his name in the same sentence as James. I have really gotta stop writing about James in a good way. Shakes head ahh well my future husband will just have to deal!

Jessie Ahh you were a reader – did you tell me that before???? I have a very vague memory!!!!! Oh I just realised that in both my stories on here I have Lily unconscious – totally coincidental!!! That's so weird!!!!

Dandylion345 Thank you for reading and reviewing!!!! – oh my god there is a huge spider on my wall!!!!!!!! Okay so it's not that big but still it's a spider!!!!!

Ashlyn (canadianphoenix) Oh my god the spider is so moving closer!!!!!!!! – Sorry umm I'm glad you like the story!!!!! Sorry about not having a makeup scene but trust me there will be a lot of those in this story!!!! Oh and did you know that I write a story on and Ashlyn is the main character – freaky or what, Okay where did that spider go????

Umm so thanks everyone for reading and I hope you all review!!!! Where the hell did that spider go????? I'm getting way freaked. I think I might call it Thing 1 – because there is one of it!!!! OMG Sorry I'm laughing right now cuz I just saw an episode of One Tree Hill where Lucas and Nathan get thrown of the bus and it reminded of the bit were these guys say 'I'm Thing … I'm Thing 1." Then Lucas or Nathan says "Let me guess you're thing 2?" But the other guys says "No I'm Thing 3 because there is 3 of us." I thought that was so funny!!!! Anyway enough I'm away to Hunt a spider!!!!! Please Review!!!!!!

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