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Charcter Info:

Torn Soulfiend:

He is the leader of the soultakers... at a young age, (say 4?)

he never lived in the Netherworld. But his favorite treat fell on the

train tracks which he barely got with his right hand, but it was too

late his right hand was chopped off by a heavy train carrying iron

to Bermesiah, although he and his family are rich there are no extra

hands inside the infirmary but his mentor and friend donated a hand

(demonic) which could talk. The mentor's name is Dax a brother of

Miltonius (which HE is still alive somewhere in the Netherworld) and

the hand's name is Demonus. Months passed and his parents died through

the collapse of their humble home. He then was taken care of by Dax.

He has a friend named Maya Slayer, which the both of them were destined

to hold 2 orbs each. He chose the 2 orbs of the fiends Guilt and Sealing Nova.

Maya Slayer

She is the brother of the Time Fighter Ace Slayer, apparently she's a

minor in time and history. So she studied healing and living things. She met

Torn in a manner in which he was drawing the landscape of Bermesiah. She

found out he had no friends before, but she agreed to be true friends with him

(even though she is friends with bad people like jocks and popular kids) she

donated her metal pen which she made out of iron and smelted silver and gave

it to him. She was also chosen to choose 2 orbs. But she chose an opposite side

of Torn's orbs. the 2 orbs of the highlanders, namely Innocence and Freedom.

Job/Classes

Torn Soulfiend

1st Job: Claw Slasher

2nd Job: Guilt Ripper

3rd Job: Lich

4th Job: The Soul Taker (Exiled)

Weapons: Demonus, Demonus (Blood), Demonus (Ice), Demonus (Soul)

Maya Slayer

1st Job: Healer

2nd Job: Acolyte (Freedom)

3rd Job: Guardian (Heavens)

4th Job: Martial Ki-Wielder (a kind of healer) (Holy Light)

Weapons: Staff (Innocence Orb), Entrusted Staff, Sword of Omnidance (Freedom Orb), Solar (Freedom and Innocence Orb)

Now back to where we left off...

Ch. 4: Vacation of Grand Chase

Our story ends up in the vacation of Grand Chase... due to Maya's depression they can't leave Lore yet. So they will wait until she is over it. So the Gc are spending time in the beach for a relaxing time. And man its sooooo HOT!

"Amy?" Elesis said

"Yes, Elesis hehehe" Amy said happily

"Do I really have to wear this?"

"Oh c'mon it looks good on ya, Amy and I bought it just for you" Jin said happily

"Well I don't like it... OK maybe I do but just for this day only." Elesis said furiously

"Hehe" Jin and Amy said

As Elesis got out of the dressing room she wears a cute white bikini with heart-shaped printings.

"Wow! Elesis nice swimsuit... Is it valentines hahahaha" Arme said laughing

"Shut up! Arme"

"Hey everybody!"

Elesis was stunned with Ronan's Body...

"Wow he's buff and hot." Elesis thought

"Hmmm? Hey Elesis!" Ronan said while waving

"Uhh Uhh..." Elesis said nervously

"What's wrong Red?... cat got your tongue" Sieghart said happily

"Yeah brave hero." Lass said sarcastically

"H-hi Ronan!" Elesis screamed loudly in a cute way

"I can't believe my ears..." Ryan said

"Aha, so you do like Ronan." Lass said

"What No! Get out of here." Elesis said blushing

"Whatever you say..." Sieghart said sarcastically

"Hey Elesis why are you all red?" Ronan said

"None of your business"

"Okay"

"Ronan wait!"

"What is it"

"I forgot to give this to you while you were in Derp"

"My Family Ring... You found it! Thank you!"

"Your welcome Ronan!... But I can't swim..."

"Hahaha! Its okay I'll teach you."

"You will!... Thank you Ronan"

Elesis gave a tight hug to Ronan.

"Aww, isn't that cute" Kazuya said

"None of your business Kazuya" Elesis said angrily

"Okay okay"

After hours of relaxing in the beach they go back to the overlook...

"Good night everybody" Jenelle said nicely

"Good Night!" said everyone

LIRE'S POV

It was night again and finally I was asleep... and I heard another noise. Plus its that same beast... I woke up with Lass and Ronan to check in the kitchen. We found a dark beast and it seemed angry at us. We were about to run but its not running... its strange for a beast like that could he be Ryan? When I get close to the beast I touch its wild fur I sensed it was Ryan. But why was he a beast? I was very curious with Lass and Ronan.

End of Lire's POV

MAYA'S POV

*sigh* If only I could be over it by now... It's very rude to stay inside someone's house for a month! But I could'nt I can't just let my only friend go. I mean yeah I have lots of friends and I am honored to be with them. But they were too mean to people in our class. Until I met him I feel good in him. After we were chosen to choose the 2 orbs, we were seperated to go to destined places for 1 week. After that week ended I came to see Torn at Xenia but the King told me he left forever. I just can't hold my tears any longer. I mean I have been crying every night.

If only I never chose those orbs... I would see him again a lot. We would hang out in places we never been before. But I never had this feeling in my life. We are friends. But this feeling... It comes during a fast heartbeat and happiness with someone you cared about... Is this... love?

Anyway I wish I could get out of this house and find him. But I'm still depressed. I know even when I sleep those orbs take care of me like they are my parents.

Where are you?

End of Maya's POV

After that...

"Hey Maya are you over it?" Jenelle said kindly

"..."

"Just get out of the room we'll talk to her" said the orb of Freedom

"Alright because the Grand Chase are waiting to leave and go back to Bermesiah"

"Alright I'll go" Maya said

"With us?"

"Yeah"

"Hey guys!" Jenelle said

"What?" Mari asked

"Maya is coming with us!"

"Well thats a fine statement" Dio said

"Welcome aboard Maya!" Seighart said

"Thanks" Maya said as she smiled

"Yay! Maya's over it!" Jenelle said

"I'm afraid your not leaving Lore yet..." A guy in white said with an evil grin.

"Not Again" Said Zero

"Grand Chase READY!" Elesis said

"Forsaken... Attack!" Trent said

THIRD PERSON POV

"Stun Bomb" Trever said

Luckily, Elesis jumped out of the way...

"Mega Strike!"

She hit him directly through the head. But he wore a helmet.

"Dragon! I Call You!" Ronan screamed

A dragon flew across the ocean and breathed fire on The Forsaken

"Darn!" Trent said

"Greg, you take care of the Dragon!"

"With pleasure" Greg said with an evil smirk

After hours of fighting someone appeared...

"Ravager's Grasp!"

"? Who are you" Remy said

"I am Trokz!"

"Aw, damn it" said Turo

"Retreat!" Trent said

They teleported away...

End of Third person POV

"Hello Master Trokz" Ace said nicely

"Master?" Ley asked

"Respect him." Jenelle said to Ley

"Okay sheesh"

"Nice to see you again Agent Slayer" Trokz said

"Will you venture with us back to Bermesiah... Sir? Jin said

"I would love to" Trokz said happily

Well that's the end of the 4th chapter... Before leaving here is Trokz info and Equipment.

Trokz Maizter

He is the leader of an elite group known as AI. He was known to be the 2nd legendary hero of Derp and 5th legendary hero of Lore. He can manipulate the elements Fire, Water, Earth, Air, Lightning and Darkness. Trokz is also the long lost mentor of Sieghart. But Sieghart dosen't remember him.

Trokz Maizter

1st Job: Warrior

2nd Job: Ravager

3rd Job: Avenger

4th Job: Death Slasher

Weapons: Sword (Elemental), Runed Sword (Elemental), Budokai Axe (Elemental), Grim (Elemental)

OK SEE YA! But chapter 5 is in the making.